Helden des Olymp The Unusual Member of Camp Half Blood

Phoenix_Stone posted on Mar 13, 2012 at 09:20PM
Title: The Unusual Member of Camp Half Blood

Rating: T (It's not really, I'm just Paranoid :P)

Type: Fantasy, Adventure, Action...

Characters: (OC - Halyptia Melpomene, Penelope Theano, Zachary Romero), Percy Jackson, Annabeth Chase, Piper Mclean, basically all of RR's characters. :P
(Zachary Romero was created by CrazyTridentSon)

Sypnosis: A girl arrives at Camp Half Blood, but has a well kept secret... her parentage is complicated, but why? After three Prophecies are revealed, a group of demigods try to save the world from an unwanted doom. The future holds many dangers, tears and regrets... a new journey has begun.

Disclaimer: All rights go to Rick Riordan :D


A/N: This forum is inspired by kgirl925, anaklusmus16 and Seaweed_Brain12. (Please check their amazing stories!)

Thanks to:
TwigmanFTW
icuSTALKER

...who encouraged me to keep writing. :)


The Three Prophecies:

"Three shall go to the Brightest Star,
Honesty and Love will succeed afar,
The Sea will meet a difficult task,
And Death meet one for answer and ask." 

"Child saved from death,
A dangerous Fate you shall prevent,
A lie without a breath,
Shall cause murder in content."

"In the Valley of Life,
One shall see what's left behind,
And through a final sacrifice,
A girl shall unlock her mind."



I post every Saturday ;)
last edited on Nov 01, 2012 at 02:48AM

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Vor mehr als einem Jahr corrected said…
do percy's pov
Vor mehr als einem Jahr CrazyTridentSon said…
do zack's and percy's pov
Vor mehr als einem Jahr Phoenix_Stone said…
hmmm
Everyone: I am trying to improve my chapters, so I can't post today. :\ ....I will be posting tommorrow though, so no need to worry! xD
Vor mehr als einem Jahr corrected said…
ok take ur time
its worth the wait
Vor mehr als einem Jahr LeosGirl said…
big smile
FESTUS!! I MISSED YOU!
Sorry, I took a break, but I'M BACK, NOW! :D
AWESOME chappie, as always!
Oh, yeah, and I....CLAIM 505TH COMMENT!
Vor mehr als einem Jahr CrazyTridentSon said…
It's worth the wait
Vor mehr als einem Jahr Phoenix_Stone said…
big smile
MAD HATTER!! :D :D :D
YAAAYYY! You're back!! ^.^
I missed our coversations so bad!! :(
Congratz!! I shall give you a prop now!! ;D

Trident and Corrected: Thanks!! :D
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Vor mehr als einem Jahr CrazyTridentSon said…
Of course, it is
Vor mehr als einem Jahr LeosGirl said…
big smile
Post soon, please!
Vor mehr als einem Jahr CrazyTridentSon said…
POST SOON PLEASE A CAKE ON TOP
Vor mehr als einem Jahr LeosGirl said…
laugh
^What he said!
Vor mehr als einem Jahr CrazyTridentSon said…
Don't forget you're manners
Vor mehr als einem Jahr LeosGirl said…
hmmm
Umm...Please...? And...Thank you...?

*confused look*
Vor mehr als einem Jahr CrazyTridentSon said…
hmmm
You're welcome
hmmm
Vor mehr als einem Jahr Phoenix_Stone said…
sick
LOL! xD

Everyone: My schedule is packed for today. :O
Don't worry, I'm still posting! :D
In 6-7 hours.....

OMG PLEASE DON'T HIT ME! D:
Vor mehr als einem Jahr LeosGirl said…
laugh
^Sorry, I just didn't know if you wanted me to say it to you or Festus. LOL! That's why I was confused.
Vor mehr als einem Jahr CrazyTridentSon said…
I'm sending monsters to you
Vor mehr als einem Jahr Phoenix_Stone said…
big smile
Hi everyone! :)
I tried to improve the writing... :P
....I don't know if I actually improved it though... XD
I am quite gutted at how short it is... :/
Here it is, anyway:

Chapter 41

Percy POV

The wind whipped through my hair as we flew across the country. The amount of stars in the sky was tremendous, I had never seen so many. Halyptia was flying ahead of me, on her grey pegasus. Piper was to my right, talking to me quietly.
"...I think there's something wrong with Halyptia." She confided. I looked towards Halyptia, then turned my head to Piper. I nodded.
"I think so too..." I confessed.
Halyptia began to change since we met Sophia. The way she put down an object, as if she loathed it. The way she answered our questions quickly and vaguely; we irritated her. At least, it seemed that way. It was probably the stress of the quest getting to her, so I never tried to pry. I wasn't sure what else it could be.

"Do you want to stop?" Piper asked. I could tell she was really tired. She had begun to get dark circles around her eyes. They were beginning to get puffy.
"I know we haven't slept much in the last few days, but we're so close!" I said, trying to sound enthusiastic. "...and the quicker we finish, the closer we are to the real beds back at Camp.." I finished persuasively. Piper shot her eyes open wide.
"Let's go! Hurry Beauty!!" She yelled eagerly. I grinned.
"You named your pegasus, Beauty?" I asked.
"Well, you call your pegasus 'Blackjack'!" She countered. We began laughing.

Boss! It's urgent! Blackjack said.
"What happened?" I asked worriedly.
I need to go!
"Go where? We're in the middle of a quest!" I exclaimed. He couldn't just leave.
I need to go... to the little pegasus's room! Take the hint, Boss!
"Oh..!" I replied, trying not to laugh. "Okay, we'll make a stop now, for half-an-hour or so?"
Thanks! Blackjack replied, quickly shooting down, straight to the ground. The others copied.
Halyptia looked quite shocked by the sudden change of direction.

As we landed, I realized that it was much colder than it seemed. I hugged my jacket, which I bought at the village we stopped in a few days ago. I was wearing Camp clothes and over that, I wore my armour and the jacket. Halyptia wore the same thing. Piper was wearing her armour under her clothes, and she wore a ski jacket.
We had landed in the middle of a deserted town, in the middle of nowhere.
Halyptia took out her sword and shield, and we copied.
We walked up and down the streets to find a place where we could rest, but every building was empty. There was no sound, but the wind. There were no lights.
"Creepy..." I whispered to the two girls, as we walked together.
"I know..." Piper replied in a hushed voice. "Where is everyone?"
"I have no idea..." Halyptia whispered back. That was the first time, in a few days, that Halyptia talked without being prompted to. If things weren't so freaky, I would've been glad.
A very light whisper reached my ears. It could've been mistaken for the wind. I looked at Piper.
"Did you hear that?" I breathed.
"Yeah..." Piper replied softly. She was nervous.
I turned to Halyptia.
"Did you..-" I began silently.
"Yeah." She replied in a shaky breath, cutting me off.
We heard it again. It was muffled and hushed, but it clashed with the wind.
It seemed to be whispering 'Hello?'.
The three of us looked at eachother.
"Let's quietly leave and find the pegasi, quickly" I whispered.
"Anyone there?" I heard the muffled voice again. It was as though they were trying not to attract attention and trying to get help. I had a strong suspicion that it was a monster.
"Who are you? Help me.." The quiet voice was behind us.
We got our weapons ready.
Quickly, we spun around, soundless.
It was a boy.
About seventeen. He was seriously injured all over. Blood covered him from head to toe. I could see some dangerous wounds.
"Help me.." He whispered weakly, about to collapse any second.
I wasn't sure if this was a trick or not. Piper looked shocked and Halyptia was frozen still. We didn't know what to do.
Halyptia finally spoke.
"Who are you?" She silently asked, cautious. She had beads of sweat on her forehead and her hands were shaking. I felt numb against the cold, and my legs hurt badly. Piper was shivering.
"I... Z-Zachary Romero.."

Thanks for reading!! :D
Any questions/suggestions/requests?? :P
I hope you weren't disappointed... :/
See you soon!! ;)
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Vor mehr als einem Jahr kkw1700 said…
EPIC.
Vor mehr als einem Jahr corrected said…
amazing Post
it was worth the wait and im glad u took my advice!
...well at least i think u took it
Vor mehr als einem Jahr Phoenix_Stone said…
smile
Fortune Cookie: Thanks! :D
Phew.. *Wipes forehead*
Lol! xD

Corrected: I really tried to... :/
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Vor mehr als einem Jahr CrazyTridentSon said…
cake
...The chapter was worth the wait, I loved it, and post the next one soon please with a cake on top
Vor mehr als einem Jahr LeosGirl said…
Awesome chapter! I loved it! And CTS, please call off the monsters.
Vor mehr als einem Jahr CrazyTridentSon said…
It's Trident and fine, MONSTERS GET AWAY FROM FESTUS


Vor mehr als einem Jahr LeosGirl said…
blush
Oops, sorry. "Trident". I will remember that.
Vor mehr als einem Jahr CrazyTridentSon said…
...STOP IT!!!
Vor mehr als einem Jahr Phoenix_Stone said…
big smile
Mad Hatter and Trident: Thank you!! :D 

Everyone: You are ALL so awesome!! I don't know what I'd do without you!! :P
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Vor mehr als einem Jahr CrazyTridentSon said…
meh
You would die...
Vor mehr als einem Jahr Phoenix_Stone said…
Everyone:
Hello, again!
I have decided that, for exactly ten days, I will most likely not post. I might, but I'm just collecting my thoughts. I also need to work out some more details in the plot before I carry on. You shall see me around though, so any questions, suggestions e.c.t. will be appreciated.
Thank you for your time,

~ Phoenix
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Vor mehr als einem Jahr CrazyTridentSon said…
sad
NO!!!!!!!!!!
Vor mehr als einem Jahr LeosGirl said…
smile
Question- Can you please come back soon?
Suggestion- Come back soon!

Can't wait for your next post!
Vor mehr als einem Jahr kkw1700 said…
*gaspeth*

D':
Vor mehr als einem Jahr LeosGirl said…
crying
^I know...:''(
Vor mehr als einem Jahr CrazyTridentSon said…
I'm sad
Vor mehr als einem Jahr kkw1700 said…
*pouts*

WHY FESTUS WHY??
Vor mehr als einem Jahr CrazyTridentSon said…
IT'S GONNA BE HORRIBLE WITHOUT YOU

* cries*
Vor mehr als einem Jahr Phoenix_Stone said…
sad
Everyone: I feel incredibley guilty now... :P
...So I will post at the end of tommorrow. :D
Vor mehr als einem Jahr TwigmanFTW said…
smile
^Haha lol I was gonna see if you gave in :D
Vor mehr als einem Jahr LeosGirl said…
laugh
^^YEAH!!! Lol, you are a softie. And that is awesome!
^Lol! Twiggy (can I call you that?)
Vor mehr als einem Jahr Phoenix_Stone said…
tongue
Lol :P
Vor mehr als einem Jahr kkw1700 said…
Wow. Gullible much Festus? Lol.
Vor mehr als einem Jahr CrazyTridentSon said…
*Stops crying*

It works everytime
Vor mehr als einem Jahr Phoenix_Stone said…
crying
^ :O
CONSPIRICIES! D:

...I take my guilt back now. I shall continue with my previous plan >:P
Vor mehr als einem Jahr kkw1700 said…
ahhhh no!

*takes gun*
Me: Goodbye, World.
Earth: Oh hey, seee ya around where ya go-
BOOM!
Earth: Oh no! Thats not what i meant. Why'd ya do that?


LOLOLOLOL XD ASDF MOVIES!
Vor mehr als einem Jahr corrected said…
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! u must poooost
Vor mehr als einem Jahr kkw1700 said…
NAOOOO. OR I WILL DROP OFF THE FACE OF THE EARTH LIKE NICO.
Vor mehr als einem Jahr Phoenix_Stone said…
laugh
^^^LOLOL!! XD

...and I was joking.. LOL xD
...I will post by the end of today. :P
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Vor mehr als einem Jahr kkw1700 said…
^LOL. Maybe i should be mad...


... But i cant cuz your posting :)
Vor mehr als einem Jahr corrected said…
yes!
Vor mehr als einem Jahr kkw1700 said…
ts three fourteen p.m.... youre running outta time...