Helden des Olymp The Unusual Member of Camp Half Blood

Phoenix_Stone posted on Mar 13, 2012 at 09:20PM
Title: The Unusual Member of Camp Half Blood

Rating: T (It's not really, I'm just Paranoid :P)

Type: Fantasy, Adventure, Action...

Characters: (OC - Halyptia Melpomene, Penelope Theano, Zachary Romero), Percy Jackson, Annabeth Chase, Piper Mclean, basically all of RR's characters. :P
(Zachary Romero was created by CrazyTridentSon)

Sypnosis: A girl arrives at Camp Half Blood, but has a well kept secret... her parentage is complicated, but why? After three Prophecies are revealed, a group of demigods try to save the world from an unwanted doom. The future holds many dangers, tears and regrets... a new journey has begun.

Disclaimer: All rights go to Rick Riordan :D


A/N: This forum is inspired by kgirl925, anaklusmus16 and Seaweed_Brain12. (Please check their amazing stories!)

Thanks to:
TwigmanFTW
icuSTALKER

...who encouraged me to keep writing. :)


The Three Prophecies:

"Three shall go to the Brightest Star,
Honesty and Love will succeed afar,
The Sea will meet a difficult task,
And Death meet one for answer and ask." 

"Child saved from death,
A dangerous Fate you shall prevent,
A lie without a breath,
Shall cause murder in content."

"In the Valley of Life,
One shall see what's left behind,
And through a final sacrifice,
A girl shall unlock her mind."



I post every Saturday ;)
last edited on Nov 01, 2012 at 02:48AM

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Vor mehr als einem Jahr Alvin2442 said…
Yeah, post soon.
Vor mehr als einem Jahr Phoenix_Stone said…
Y'know, sometimes I wonder if you all even read the last sentence of the description. xD
Vor mehr als einem Jahr Alvin2442 said…
Sorry! I keep forgetting that you post each weekend.
Vor mehr als einem Jahr corrected said…
poooooooooooooooooost
Vor mehr als einem Jahr Phoenix_Stone said…
big smile
Should I post a hint? Like a small verse of a song that connects with the future plot?
You could speculate and shtuff. (>^-^<)
Vor mehr als einem Jahr corrected said…
yesssssssssssss
Vor mehr als einem Jahr Alvin2442 said…
YAY! I finally got a Apple IPhone!
Vor mehr als einem Jahr Phoenix_Stone said…
Hint Time:

"Holy water cannot help you now,
See I've come to burn your kingdom down,
And no rivers and no lakes can put the fire out,
I'm gonna raise the stakes,
I'm gonna smoke you out."

Can you guess the future plot from these 5 lines?
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Vor mehr als einem Jahr corrected said…
crying
NO!
Vor mehr als einem Jahr Phoenix_Stone said…
^Come on! Try and speculate!
It's kinda obvious though.
Vor mehr als einem Jahr corrected said…
sad
seriously i can't think of anyhting
Vor mehr als einem Jahr kkw1700 said…
Something to do with Percy..?
Vor mehr als einem Jahr LeoNicoCrazaiii said…
im guessing percy and leo is a bad guy?!?
i shall not believe that ... leo is not bad ...hopefully
Vor mehr als einem Jahr Phoenix_Stone said…
laugh
It kinda tells you. It's that obvious. xD

Maybe you'll all understand when it happens. Maybe it'll happen by New Year's?
Until then, keep speculating!
Vor mehr als einem Jahr Alvin2442 said…
The fire is obviously Greek fire, because it can't be put out by a lake or river.
Vor mehr als einem Jahr Phoenix_Stone said…
laugh
This isn't a prophecy, so the lyrics are metaphorical. You don't even need to analyze the text! XD
Vor mehr als einem Jahr corrected said…
AN ARMY IS ATTACKING?!
did i guess right?
Vor mehr als einem Jahr rainbow_girl said…
i would say that since percy is kidnapped, he cant help them. so thats the first line.
not sure bout the second.
i agree that the 3rd is about greek fire.
4th? i would say that the gods want to make the quest harder, to see if halyptia is worth the trouble.
for the 5th, it has something to do w/ smoke, i guess. so maybe leo uses fire for something.

this is what i think.
POST SOON!!!
Vor mehr als einem Jahr kkw1700 said…
^That was an awesome answer!!
Vor mehr als einem Jahr rainbow_girl said…
whos? mine?
Vor mehr als einem Jahr corrected said…
i dont think that answer is right
it sounds like ur overthinking it
Vor mehr als einem Jahr rainbow_girl said…
maybe. but im pretty sure bout line 1 and 3.
but this is what I am thinking.
Vor mehr als einem Jahr Alvin2442 said…
It's her mind so leave her alone, nobody talked about your answer corrected.
Vor mehr als einem Jahr Phoenix_Stone said…
laugh
You're all way off. xD
It's all about one person who is thinking these lines. The lines are against a group. ;P
Does anyone want another guess? ^-^
Vor mehr als einem Jahr corrected said…
NO POST SO WE CAN FIND OUT
Vor mehr als einem Jahr Phoenix_Stone said…
mischievous
^I ish posting tommorrow! :D

...but you won't find out the answer till later on. >:D
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Vor mehr als einem Jahr Demigodgirl123 said…
i just translated everything on my screen to greek.... awesome
Vor mehr als einem Jahr corrected said…
YESHHSHSHSHSHHS!
Vor mehr als einem Jahr Alvin2442 said…
Fire. Fire. Fire.
Hyperion, that the only evil person with fire powers I can think of right now.
Vor mehr als einem Jahr rainbow_girl said…
OMG!! i no!
its gaea! talking bout the group. saying that percy cant help u now. and so on and so forth!
IS IT? IS IT?
POST SO WE CAN FIND OUT!!!
Vor mehr als einem Jahr corrected said…
...........fanpop is glitching again
Vor mehr als einem Jahr Phoenix_Stone said…
big smile
Iris Flower: Hmm... you're not right, but you are thinking the right way. ;D
Vor mehr als einem Jahr Alvin2442 said…
She.Will.Post.Tommorow.
Vor mehr als einem Jahr rainbow_girl said…
crap. hmmmm..........maybe nyx??
Vor mehr als einem Jahr Alvin2442 said…
OMG!!! I get what he means now, but I will never tell.
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Vor mehr als einem Jahr kkw1700 said…
Festus: YOU ISH EVIL. O.O

Shark: TELLMETELLMETELLMETELLMETELLME. TELL. ME. NOW. O.O
Vor mehr als einem Jahr Alvin2442 said…
You will find out when he posts.
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Vor mehr als einem Jahr Phoenix_Stone said…
Alvin: What did you call me?! AGAIN?! D:<
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Vor mehr als einem Jahr LeosGirl said…
laugh
^ROFL!!!!!!! Hi, Festus!!!!!

P.S. Festus is a boy. He is a "he". A male.
Vor mehr als einem Jahr Alvin2442 said…
I'm using my IPhone, so I might so that again, but I'm sorry.
Vor mehr als einem Jahr LeoNicoCrazaiii said…
lmfaoo

its tmmrw... postttttttttttttt.... so we shall thinking xD
Vor mehr als einem Jahr Phoenix_Stone said…
big smile
Everyone: I shall post later on! :D

...but you won't find out how those lyrics link to this story yet. >:D

HI MAD HATTER! ^(^O^)^
Vor mehr als einem Jahr corrected said…
yessssssssssss
Vor mehr als einem Jahr kkw1700 said…
tongue
-meme face-

Y U SO EVIL
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Vor mehr als einem Jahr LeosGirl said…
laugh
HI FESTUS THE HAPPY DRAGON!! ^(^O^)^
Vor mehr als einem Jahr Phoenix_Stone said…
laugh
^^*Hehe* :D

^Lol xD

Everyone: I shall be posting in an hour or so. :P
Vor mehr als einem Jahr Phoenix_Stone said…
big smile
Hi everyone!
Here you go:

Chapter 54

Halyptia POV

The Golden Drachma disappeared and an image rippled in front of me.
As expected, it was Artemis, but she seemed to be travelling at super speed.
"Artemis!" I called. "It's me! Halyptia!"
Artemis turned towards my voice and her eyes fell upon me.
"How dare you?!" Artemis replied angrily. 
I bagan to panic.
Oh no.. what did I do wrong?
"You dare to even look upon a creature that is sacred to me?!" She yelled. "The Ceryneian Hind is under my protection. You are a fool to try and capture it."
Artemis's form was glowing dangerously bright.
"..but I have to!" I replied hesitantly, in defense. "My life depends on it!"
Artemis looked shocked and even more furious.
"Are you disrespecting me?! Are you intending to disobey me?!"
"It's not like I'm going to kill it! Nyx just wants me to bring it to her." I shot back.
"Creatures must stay free, not captured. You cannot take it to Nyx." Artemis said coldly.
"Look mother, I don't wish to offend you, but is the life of your only daughter not important to you?"
I was trying to play the guilt card.
Artemis looked away, deep in thought. She seemed upset.
"You remind me of Hercules."
I suddenly remembered a vague Ancient History lesson in school. The teacher had said something about Hercules and a bronze hooved deer.
"I won't let the Ceryneian Hind be harmed in any way." I assured quietly.
Artemis nodded sternly.
"..but, be warned Daughter of Essence. If I am somehow disgraced, great misery and misfortune shall befall you. I am letting you go now, but make sure you make wise decisions."
"How will I find the Hind?" I asked confusedly.
Artemis smirked.
"Gold shall reflect moonlight."
And with that, the Iris-Message ended.

When I came back to the campsite, everyone was awake.
Penelope and Piper were sitting by the entrance of a tent, deep in conversation. Zach and Leo were laughing at eachother's stories and grinning mischieviously. Annabeth was sitting under a nearby tree, staring at a laptop which had a Delta sign on it.
I smiled and remembered Camp Half Blood.
Zach was the first to spot me. His eyes widened.
"Halyptia..?" He said, puzzled. "Oh gods, we didn't even realize you were gone! Where were you?"
I didn't mind that they'd forgotten about me but, for some reason, Zach's words stung.
"I Iris-Messaged Artemis." I replied, and I explained what had happened.
"Gold shall reflect moonlight?" Annabeth asked, after I finished.
"Yeah, I'm still not sure what she meant by that.." I said curiously.
But something else was troubling me. Make sure you make wise decisions. Artemis had said.
The Fates had also said something similar. Your success depends on wise choices.
What important decision did I have to make?

Thanks for reading! :D
Any questions/suggestions/requests? :P
See you soon! ;)
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Vor mehr als einem Jahr Alvin2442 said…
No help.
Vor mehr als einem Jahr corrected said…
awesome post!
fanpop is still glitching :(
Vor mehr als einem Jahr Alvin2442 said…
Awesome work.