Helden des Olymp The Unusual Member of Camp Half Blood

Phoenix_Stone posted on Mar 13, 2012 at 09:20PM
Title: The Unusual Member of Camp Half Blood

Rating: T (It's not really, I'm just Paranoid :P)

Type: Fantasy, Adventure, Action...

Characters: (OC - Halyptia Melpomene, Penelope Theano, Zachary Romero), Percy Jackson, Annabeth Chase, Piper Mclean, basically all of RR's characters. :P
(Zachary Romero was created by CrazyTridentSon)

Sypnosis: A girl arrives at Camp Half Blood, but has a well kept secret... her parentage is complicated, but why? After three Prophecies are revealed, a group of demigods try to save the world from an unwanted doom. The future holds many dangers, tears and regrets... a new journey has begun.

Disclaimer: All rights go to Rick Riordan :D


A/N: This forum is inspired by kgirl925, anaklusmus16 and Seaweed_Brain12. (Please check their amazing stories!)

Thanks to:
TwigmanFTW
icuSTALKER

...who encouraged me to keep writing. :)


The Three Prophecies:

"Three shall go to the Brightest Star,
Honesty and Love will succeed afar,
The Sea will meet a difficult task,
And Death meet one for answer and ask." 

"Child saved from death,
A dangerous Fate you shall prevent,
A lie without a breath,
Shall cause murder in content."

"In the Valley of Life,
One shall see what's left behind,
And through a final sacrifice,
A girl shall unlock her mind."



I post every Saturday ;)
last edited on Nov 01, 2012 at 02:48AM

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Vor mehr als einem Jahr Alvin2442 said…
Post.
Vor mehr als einem Jahr LeoNicoCrazaiii said…
i never tried a burrito or taco or a fajita o.O
Vor mehr als einem Jahr Phoenix_Stone said…
Everyone: The chapter will probably be up in about one hour. :P
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Vor mehr als einem Jahr corrected said…
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i guess we have to get used to these food attacks
o well! as log as the food is good!
FOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOD FIGHT!
Vor mehr als einem Jahr Alvin2442 said…
Post.
Vor mehr als einem Jahr corrected said…
yes post
u said u woud
food fight is now postponed until AFTER posts
Vor mehr als einem Jahr Alvin2442 said…
Its been 3 hours, 5 minutes, before the assassin in me takes over.
Vor mehr als einem Jahr Phoenix_Stone said…
big smile
Hi everyone! ^-^
I hope you've had a great week! :D
I have been reading over my first chapters, and I've realized that my writing style has changed a lot. I'm gonna start trying to go back to that style again. :P

Chapter 56

Halyptia POV

My ears were hurting so much that they went numb. 
I glanced at Zach. He was smiling, as mischievous as always. Then I had that feeling again. I had been having it for a while now. The feeling like I was falling from a great height. 
But this time the feeling was stronger.
Almost unbearable. 
I wanted it to stop.
"Halyptia..?" Zach said.
I froze.
A chill went up my spine. My mind went blank. 
I started to panic.
I understood now. I know why I was feeling strange. I had probably known for quite some time, but the realization came surging to me.
A memory was tugging at the back of my mind. It was something important, but I couldn't remember what it was.
"..Yes?" I replied to Zach.
"Um... I think we're in for some trouble." He explained nervously, pointing in front of us.
I looked at Zach with confusion. I turned to the place he was pointing at.
Our pegasi slowed down and flew at a steady speed.
There was nothing there. I blinked a couple of times, to be sure.
Just as I was about to tell Zach he was seeing things, I saw it.
Two birds were flying towards us in the distant night sky. They looked unusually large.
"Are those..?" Zach said, wide-eyed.
"Uh.. I think so.." I replied.
They were peacocks.
Now, normally I would be happy to see such beautiful creatures on a horrid quest like this. But this wasn't 'normally'. Peacocks were the symbol of Hera. The very lady whose prisoners I had set free.
As the peacocks came closer, their features became more prominent. The birds were as large as an elephant. I couldn't believe my eyes.
Their beaks were made of gold and their eyes glowed dark blue.
I quickly twisted my diamond belt buckle and pressed my braclet. My Imperial Gold sheild sprang forth and I got my sword ready in my hand.
The pegasi that we sat on were unfazed, as though this happened to them everyday.
"I thought peacocks couldn't fly?" Zach announced, staring open-mouthed at the extremely large birds.
"I thought peacocks were a little smaller in real life." I replied, looking at the peacocks uneasily. "I guess we were both wrong."
Then, the peacocks attacked.
If you were watching this from afar, you probably would've been staring at the scene in awe, rather than coming to our aid. Why? Because even the way these peacocks attacked us was enchanting.
The birds moved their blue/green necks gracefully and slowly. They moved their faces towards us and gave us each a peck on the cheek. Considering the fact that their beaks were made of gold, this really hurt.
I swung my sword hard at the bird closest to me, but it simply turned around. I was confused at first, but when my sword came into contact with it's tail, it clanged against it and bounced off harmlessly.
I glanced at Zach. His situation was worse.
The peacock next to him was repeately pecking his cheeks slowly. His cheeks had several cuts and were bleeding, like he was crying tears of blood. The problem was he only had a dagger to protect himself, but it was useless against the peacock's protected body. At least I had got mine to turn around, but it was facing me again now. It went in for another bite and I felt some of my skin being plucked away. I gasped from the pain and a single tear escaped from my right eye.
For some reason, this confused the peacock. It tilted it's head and came in for a closer look. When it saw my wounded cheeks, it's eyes started flowing abundantly with tears. It was crying.
I turned to Zach again, and his peacock was also crying. Zach gave me a look of befuddlement, and I probably had the same expression.
Why on Earth were these birds crying, if they were intentionally harming us?
Suddenly, the peacock near me lunged at my face and repeatedly pecked my cheeks until I was screaming endlessly. It continued shedding tears as I experienced the worst pain in my life. It was like someone had sliced off my cheek and poured lemon juice on the wound.
I could hear Zach yelling out too.
I tried thrashing around and striking my sword at the peacock's neck, but nothing worked. I thought I would slowly die from the torture.
I was getting ready to accept my end, but then the peacocks stopped. This time, they didn't inspect our wounds. They began to glow in a bright gold light, and they disappeared.
As the light diminished, it revealed a woman.
She had long chocolate brown hair woven into a waterfall braid with gold ribbons. The lady wore a simple white dress that rippled, like oil on water, when she moved. She was tall, graceful and very beautiful. At the same time, she seemed quite intimidating, with brown eyes that were glazed with power.
"Hera." I said, immediately recognising her from when I was being questioned in the Throne Room on Olympus.
"Halyptia Melpomene and Zachary Romero." Hera stated calmly. She turned her gaze to me, staring directly into my eyes. "I hope you have learned your lesson."
She didn't explain what the lesson was, but I already knew: Never release Hera's peacock prisoners or she'll send gigantic peacocks to come and kiss you until you think you'll die.
I nodded, clenching my jaw. My cheeks throbbed and my eyes stung from the immense pain. Even nodding gave me misery. The cold wind, that pummelled our faces, helped numb down the tormenting injury.
"What are you talking about? And why did you attack us?! We've never done anything to you!" Zach yelled, clearly in agony. He must've been bewildered.
Hera ignored Zach completely and kept her gaze on me.
"This was your punishment. Be thankful that it was minuscule compared to the punishments I have given in the past. I have forgiven you, but let this be a reminder to you of the consequences of crossing an Immortal." Hera warned. She regarded us both, one last time. "Until we meet again." And with that, Hera started glowing as we averted our eyes, and disappeared.
Until we meet again. I didn't like the way she had said that. But I decided to worry about that later.
Zach was looking at me for an explanation. So I explained what had happened to me when Zeus had kidnapped me. As I explained everything, Zach listened carefully, absorbing all the information. He was a good listener.
When I finished, there was a long moment of silence. We had been scanning the cities below, as our pegasi flew further north. There was still no sign of the Hind.
"I'm sorry." I said, as the wind continued to billow arround us.
"For what?" Zach asked, as his eyes searched the ground.
"Well, because of me, you were attacked. You got punished for something you didn't do." I replied regretfully. I knew how torturous that had felt. It wasn't fair that Zach had to go through that. I could still feel the pain on my cheeks.
"Hey," Zach said, "You did a noble act by setting those Wind Nymphs free. You don't need to apologize for anything." Then he smiled his mischievous smile, and I felt better.
I wonder how the others are doing...

Thanks for reading! :D
I'm SO SO SO sorry it took so long! :'(
I was just trying to put a lot of thought into it.
Are there any requests/questions?? :P
Please tell me what you thought of the chapter! ^.^
See you soon! ;)
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Vor mehr als einem Jahr Alvin2442 said…
You got lucky...Awesome chapter by the way.
Vor mehr als einem Jahr corrected said…
great post!!!!!!!!!!!1
Vor mehr als einem Jahr Alvin2442 said…
yEAH BLAHH*sPALSHES PIZZA IN EVERYONE'S FACE AND HIDES*
Vor mehr als einem Jahr Phoenix_Stone said…
*A pizza slice slaps my face*

Thank you. -.-

-gets doughnut catapult ready-

FIRE!

*Raining doughnuts*
Vor mehr als einem Jahr Alvin2442 said…
Lol, fun.
Vor mehr als einem Jahr corrected said…
very
Vor mehr als einem Jahr Alvin2442 said…
* Splashes soup in corrected's face.*
Vor mehr als einem Jahr corrected said…
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH it burns!
im suing u for burning my face until it was unrecognizable with hot soup
gimme 1 million dollars!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!!!­!..­...­...­...­...­...­...­or else..............
Vor mehr als einem Jahr Alvin2442 said…
Alright...*Gives a million dollars of counterfeit money.*
Vor mehr als einem Jahr Phoenix_Stone said…
POTATOES. ^~^

*Throws hot potatoes at people*
Vor mehr als einem Jahr corrected said…
o cmon enough hot food!
im dying
*throws ice cream at everyone and self*
Vor mehr als einem Jahr corrected said…
@ ALVIN U JUST TOLD ME IT WAS COUNTERFEIT SO I KNOW
now give me real money or im suing for another 1 million
Vor mehr als einem Jahr corrected said…
big smile
*throws Tia Callidas chili pepper juice along with motor oil and tobasco sauce into everyone's eyes*

hehe I believe I WIN
nobody can beat THAT
Vor mehr als einem Jahr Alvin2442 said…
* Slices potatoes coming towards me*
Vor mehr als einem Jahr Phoenix_Stone said…
OUCH!

MY EYES! #.#

OH FUDGECAKES.

-continuously splashes cold water in my eyes-
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Vor mehr als einem Jahr Alvin2442 said…
Really.*Gives million dollars and splashes puke, piss, motor oil, onion juice, and skunk smell juice.*
Vor mehr als einem Jahr Phoenix_Stone said…
-clears throat-

That was disgusting and unneccessary. o.o

*Projectile vomiting*

BLEUGH!

*Random chunks of ice-cream fall from the sky and whack people on the head*

BRAIN FREEZE! >O<
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Vor mehr als einem Jahr Alvin2442 said…
* Raises hands, and ice freezes in the sky*
Vor mehr als einem Jahr Phoenix_Stone said…
I just realized that I'm spamming my own Forum. LOL XDD

Where's everyone else though? :(
Vor mehr als einem Jahr Alvin2442 said…
Here!
Vor mehr als einem Jahr corrected said…
@alvin I GIVE UP
this is getting too digusting....
@phoenix LOL
it seems we r the only 3 left on ur forum.....
Vor mehr als einem Jahr Alvin2442 said…
Thank you! See? I always end up winning, even when I'm' losing.
Vor mehr als einem Jahr corrected said…
ok but u shouldnt be proud of that kind of win...
Vor mehr als einem Jahr Alvin2442 said…
I'm not, I just like annoying you.
Vor mehr als einem Jahr corrected said…
haha me too
Vor mehr als einem Jahr Alvin2442 said…
I realize we are spamming...
Vor mehr als einem Jahr corrected said…
haha me too
Vor mehr als einem Jahr Phoenix_Stone said…
surprise
RANDOM SHARING TIME:

So, I'm shopping for food and whatnot.
I go to the eggs section and instantly pick free range. Then I see an unusual egg carton and glimpse a picture of pastel blue eggs.
Naturally blue. No joke.

No way. They're lying. I think to myself, opening the carton.
...and behold! Blue eggs sitting right in front of me!
I'm then jumping up and down in the middle of the store.
"LOOK! BLUE EGGS!" I say to mother.
"No, it can't be." She replies with uncertainty.
I show her the blue eggs and presto; we bought the blue eggs along with the normal ones.
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 <b>RANDOM SHARING TIME:</b> So, I'm shopping for Essen and whatnot. I go to the eggs section and
Vor mehr als einem Jahr corrected said…
umm i dont see blue eggs
WHAT are u talking about? those eggs are white with a blue stamp on top!
Vor mehr als einem Jahr Phoenix_Stone said…
I knew someone would say that. xD
It's just my bad camera quality, but they are definately not white, they are blue. :P

Just click on this link: link
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Vor mehr als einem Jahr corrected said…
meh
ok but they still dont look blue///////////////
Vor mehr als einem Jahr Phoenix_Stone said…
GRRRR. D:<

-refrains self-
Vor mehr als einem Jahr corrected said…
haha sorry im just saying my my opinion
Vor mehr als einem Jahr Phoenix_Stone said…
laugh
^Lol xD Just buy some yourself and you'll see. LOL XDD
They're Old Cotswold Legbar eggs. xP

-sigh-

...I can't believe I'm talking about eggs. -.-
Vor mehr als einem Jahr corrected said…
umm what store do u get those at?
Vor mehr als einem Jahr Phoenix_Stone said…
laugh
I don't know if you have "Sainsbury's", but that's where I got them. xD
You could just Google if any of your local stores have it. xP
This is so silly. xD
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Vor mehr als einem Jahr corrected said…
noooooooooo this is serious! lol
ok what city do u live in? do u even live in the us?
Vor mehr als einem Jahr Phoenix_Stone said…
big smile
^Nope. xD I'm British xP
Vor mehr als einem Jahr TwigmanFTW said…
smile
Ahhh.. A Sainbury's man are you? Good :D Much better than Tesco's I say :D
Vor mehr als einem Jahr Phoenix_Stone said…
^IT'S BEEN SO LONG! :O

..and yesh. Fudge Tesco's. xD
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Vor mehr als einem Jahr corrected said…
okaaaaaaaay
im not british soooooooooooooooooooooo no idea what ur talking about
Vor mehr als einem Jahr TwigmanFTW said…
smile
^^Aye laddy (im not scottish don't worry xD)
Tesco is just not good enough :D