Helden des Olymp The Unusual Member of Camp Half Blood

Phoenix_Stone posted on Mar 13, 2012 at 09:20PM
Title: The Unusual Member of Camp Half Blood

Rating: T (It's not really, I'm just Paranoid :P)

Type: Fantasy, Adventure, Action...

Characters: (OC - Halyptia Melpomene, Penelope Theano, Zachary Romero), Percy Jackson, Annabeth Chase, Piper Mclean, basically all of RR's characters. :P
(Zachary Romero was created by CrazyTridentSon)

Sypnosis: A girl arrives at Camp Half Blood, but has a well kept secret... her parentage is complicated, but why? After three Prophecies are revealed, a group of demigods try to save the world from an unwanted doom. The future holds many dangers, tears and regrets... a new journey has begun.

Disclaimer: All rights go to Rick Riordan :D


A/N: This forum is inspired by kgirl925, anaklusmus16 and Seaweed_Brain12. (Please check their amazing stories!)

Thanks to:
TwigmanFTW
icuSTALKER

...who encouraged me to keep writing. :)


The Three Prophecies:

"Three shall go to the Brightest Star,
Honesty and Love will succeed afar,
The Sea will meet a difficult task,
And Death meet one for answer and ask." 

"Child saved from death,
A dangerous Fate you shall prevent,
A lie without a breath,
Shall cause murder in content."

"In the Valley of Life,
One shall see what's left behind,
And through a final sacrifice,
A girl shall unlock her mind."



I post every Saturday ;)
last edited on Nov 01, 2012 at 02:48AM

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Vor mehr als einem Jahr LeosGirl said…
big smile
Post, Festus!
Vor mehr als einem Jahr corrected said…
yes POST
Vor mehr als einem Jahr kkw1700 said…
Well my dad has a stash of books and magazines (thats not the interesting part) and we found this book called

WHO'S WHO AMONG AMERICAN HIGH SCHOOL STUDENTS 1972- 1973


Woah. I felt like i was hit with a tidal wave of hair and glasses. (In other words : OH MY GODS, WHAT ARE THEY WEARING?? Thank goodness there wasnt a picture of my dad hehe )Also, my dad was going to be a dentist. (Me- WHY WAS I NOT INFORMED OF THIS??) He is a head honcho accountant dude and he's in China (I think) right now.


And in his magazine stash, we found issues about phones. Like the age before flip- phones :O


In his books stash, there were some... odd covers/titles.


Our old stash of Webkinz



And a game called Dirty Words. O.o The title says it all. (Don't ask. There's some pretty nasty shtuff inthat little brown box.)
Vor mehr als einem Jahr corrected said…
umm thanks for sharin i think?
Vor mehr als einem Jahr Phoenix_Stone said…
laugh
Fortune Cookie: LOLOLOL!!

That was some clean out day!!!

CHINA?! SO COOL. :D

XD

BEFORE FLIP-PHONES!?

^(*O*)^

Mad Hatter: Patience, young warrior....<(^.^)>

XD
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Vor mehr als einem Jahr Phoenix_Stone said…
big smile
Hi everyone!! :D
Sorry for the wait!! :P
Here's the first chapter: (I have the second one ready, I'll post it in a bit)

Chapter 38

Percy POV

It was morning.
We had made camp near a forest. We could see a town in the distance.
The fight last night was completely unexpected. I kept wondering about who sent the Storm Spirits.
"It was probably someone trying to delay the quest, like Gaia." Piper had said, when I asked her.
The girls seemed to have slept quite well, with there active behaiviour this morning.
I did not sleep well, at all. I kept thinking about the quest, about what the aim was.
All that Piper and I knew about the quest, was that the Olympians gave it to Halyptia. We also knew the Prophecy, but that's it. We had no idea what we were going to face, or why Halyptia needed to do this in the first place. Artemis had said she would explain the details, but she just left without telling us.
Today, I decided to ask Halyptia.

Halyptia's face sank when Piper asked the questions that plagued our minds.
"I was hoping you wouldn't ask, but I knew you were going to." She replied, after a long silence. "First, tell me what the other Campers know about me."
"Uh, they know you're Hestia's daughter. Some think the Olympian's are lying about your parentage, to cover up something, but they don't know what. Someone once suggested you were a goddess that had come to test us!" Piper laughed, "I don't think anyone, but Percy and Annabeth, knows"
"They also know you went missing, but again, they don't know why." Percy added.
"Okay." Halyptia relaxed a bit. "I'll tell you everything."

Halyptia POV

Now that I knew the Campers didn't know much, I knew Piper and Percy didn't tell them. It's not that I didn't trust them, but I didn't want them telling everyone.
Now I knew they wouldn't, so I began to explain everything.

"Zeus kidnapped me, then took me to the Olympian Throne Room. Everyone was there.
He had found out that Gaia made me to bring the Olympians down. So they started to decide what to do with me.
I think they would've killed me, if it had not been for Aphrodite and Hestia. They chose to give me a quest instead, to prove that I wasn't working for Gaia.
Athena came up with an idea for the quest. The idea was, that I would have to convince Nyx to side with the Olympians, if they were ever in need of her assisstance in the future. Zeus liked the idea. So I was sent to camp, to choose two companians." I concluded.
It all felt like a blur.
Percy and Piper looked as confused as ever.
"Oh...." Piper began, "...thats.."
"...yeah.." I said. It was a lot to digest.
"So we're on a quest to meet Nyx?" Percy asked, puzzled. "What's so bad about that?"
"Nyx, goddess of Night, is even more powerful than Gaia. She stays quiet most of the time." I explained. "The Olympians are all scared of her. They can't ask for help, in fear of angering her."
"So they're sending us to be killed instead? They sent you on this quest, because they know you won't succeed?" Percy asked.
I was just angry now. I hated the Olympians. Well, maybe not all of them.
"It doesn't matter, because we will complete this quest. Then they can't do anything." Piper reassured, smiling.
"I couldn't care less." I replied angrily, shocking them. "I know I'll probably end up getting killed, it's all in the Prophecy."
I got up and started to pack everything away.

Piper POV

I looked at Percy.
"Well, that was weird." I declared.
"She's probably just stressed." Percy concluded.
"Yeah, probably." I replied. We began packing up too.

When we finished getting ready. We sat down next to the fire we made last night, to eat our food. There were just glowing embers left.
As we ate the food we had brought from Camp, we realized we were running out.
"We'll buy some food, on our next stop. Let's work out the timings." Halyptia explained. So we planned out the next part of our journey.
Soon, we were ready to leave.
I put on my jacket and climbed onto my pegasus.
As I looked at the sun in the sky, which told me it was a few hours past midday, I remembered my first love.
Jason.

Thanks for reading!! :D
I'll post the next chapter in a bit! :P
Don't forget to comment!! ;D
Any suggestions/requests/questions?!?! XD
See you soon!! ;)
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Vor mehr als einem Jahr kkw1700 said…
Awshum!
Vor mehr als einem Jahr CrazyTridentSon said…
I'm losing my patience
Vor mehr als einem Jahr kkw1700 said…
tongue
Hope ya know @LC is releasing the admin after you so they can hunt you down and suspend your account Festus.
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Vor mehr als einem Jahr Phoenix_Stone said…
laugh
Fortune Cookie: Thanks!!! ...and, Oh dear... LOL! XD

Alvin: PATIENCE.
KEEP IT. DON'T LOSE IT.

IF YOU LOSE IT.

....GO EAT NOODLES.

XD
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Vor mehr als einem Jahr CrazyTridentSon said…
big smile
What. The. Freak.

I LUV NOODLES!!!
Vor mehr als einem Jahr Phoenix_Stone said…
laugh
^Lololol!!! XD

NOODLES FTW!! :P
Vor mehr als einem Jahr corrected said…
ok that was great can u put the next one up now plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
Vor mehr als einem Jahr kkw1700 said…
wink
Corrected- "PATIENCE.
KEEP IT. DON'T LOSE IT.

IF YOU LOSE IT.

....GO EAT NOODLES.

XD"


-- Words from our very own wise Festus.
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Vor mehr als einem Jahr corrected said…
ill try not to lose it because i dont have any noodles at the moment
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Vor mehr als einem Jahr corrected said…
next chapter plz
im so patient i waited like 5 min
Vor mehr als einem Jahr CrazyTridentSon said…
Fail.For.The.World.Everybody.Run.Because.I­.Do­n't­.Ha­ve.­Noo­dle­s!!­!
Vor mehr als einem Jahr corrected said…
..........................................­...­...­...­...­...­...­?
Vor mehr als einem Jahr CrazyTridentSon said…
I need NOODLES NOW
Vor mehr als einem Jahr Phoenix_Stone said…
big smile
Hi!! :D
I feel so evil making you wait.... *Evil laughter*
Sorry... Forgive me... :'(
...I actually nodded off.... XD
Here you go!! :D

Chapter 39

Annabeth POV

Suddenly, Rachel stopped laughing.
She started to fall, but I caught quickly.
"Penelope!" I whispered, "Quickly past me that chair!"
We sat her down, and she started to sway. Penelope looked immensley worried.
Then, when Rachel began spewing smoke again, Penelope gave me a questioning look.
"A prophecy?" She asked. I just nodded.
Rachel opened her glowing eyes, and began speaking in that raspy, ancient voice.


"Child saved from death,
A dangerous Fate you shall prevent,
A lie without a breath,
Shall cause murder in content."



I looked towards Penelope, and I could tell she was trying to make sense of it. I was about to say that it was fruitless, when I was cut off.
By the Oracle.


"In the Valley of Life,
One shall see what's left behind,
And through a final sacrifice,
A girl shall unlock her mind."



I was completely shocked.
Rachel collapsed and, as Penelope caught her, I wondered if we heard an extended Prophecy, or two different ones.
I stared at Penelope, as she watched the sky.
She had gotten attacked by Gaia, received help from Apollo, gotten claimed by Poseidon, and possibly received two Prophecies.
Unless they were mine.
I doubted it though.
After a long period of silence, I spoke up.
"Penelope?" I asked.
"Yes?" She replied calmly, still looking at the sky.
"I had actually wanted to bring you here, because I thought Rachel might've had a vision about you or something." I confessed.
"Then, we kinda got more than we bargained for." She smiled kimdly, laughed lightly.
I need to tell Chiron, I thought.
I made sure Rachel was comfortably placed in her bed.
"Come on, Penelope," I said, walking to the entrance of the cave, "We need to tell someone about this."

Thanks for reading!! :D
I know it was short, but it took my forever to write!! :P
Don't forget to comment!! ;D
Any suggestions/questions/requests??? ;P
See you soon!! ;)
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Vor mehr als einem Jahr CrazyTridentSon said…
Zack Speed needs to come in soonj
Vor mehr als einem Jahr Phoenix_Stone said…
laugh
Trident: He was in the Chapter... ;)

*Shh!*

XD
Vor mehr als einem Jahr CrazyTridentSon said…
NO HE WAS NOT
Vor mehr als einem Jahr Phoenix_Stone said…
big smile
Trident: No, seriously. He was mentioned. O.O
..and he should appear in the next chapter OR the one after that.
Most likely tommorrow's chapter, not today's. :D :D :D
I have a plan okay? xD ...Don't rush his arrival!! XD
... and I kinda changed him a bit.... :O
..... BUT not that much.. ;)


WHY NO MORE COMMENTS?! :O
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Vor mehr als einem Jahr corrected said…
great post!
Vor mehr als einem Jahr corrected said…
link
anaklusmus17 has abandoned
he has offered to let someone else take over his stories
go to the link above for more info, he says it all there
SOMEONE PLZZZZZZZ CONTinue his stories
they r too good to be abandoned!
email him for the rest of his plot
Vor mehr als einem Jahr Phoenix_Stone said…
crying
^NOOOOO!!! D:
Anaklusmus was an AMAZING writer!!! :'(
...one of the three people I inspired this forum to.... :( :( :(
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Vor mehr als einem Jahr kkw1700 said…
PATIENCE. KEEP IT. DONT LOSE IT.

IF YOU LOSE IT.

... GO EAT NOODLES



XD
Vor mehr als einem Jahr corrected said…
worried
y must the most amazing stories always be the ones to get abandoned?
Vor mehr als einem Jahr Phoenix_Stone said…
big smile
Fortune Cookie: LOLOLOL!!! xD ...Very wise words.. ;P

Corrected: I know.. *Sigh* ....but it'll be fine.. :)
Vor mehr als einem Jahr corrected said…
hmmm
hmmm do u know anyone who could possibly take over his stories?
Vor mehr als einem Jahr Phoenix_Stone said…
big smile
Corrected: I'm not really sure... :\

I would have offered, but I would just mess the story up!! LOL. xD
....that^ and I hardly have the time... :P

LET'S HUNT SOME WRITERS DOWN!! :O
Vor mehr als einem Jahr corrected said…
i agree
spread the word that a new writer is needed on every forum u know of
maybe we will get lucky
Vor mehr als einem Jahr Phoenix_Stone said…
mischievous
Corrected: YES! GO MY MINIONS AND HUNT WRITERS DOWN. O.O

XD

Everyone: If one more person doesn't comment, I'm not posting. >:D
*Cue Evil Laughter*

BWAHAHAHAHAHA!
Vor mehr als einem Jahr corrected said…
no plz poooost! cmon plzzzzzzzzzzzz
Vor mehr als einem Jahr book-worm said…
Poooooosssssssttttt!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Vor mehr als einem Jahr corrected said…
THANK U BOOKWORM
HA NOW U HAVE TO POST PHOENIX
Vor mehr als einem Jahr kkw1700 said…
NAOOO



..... AND I WILL NOT GI EAT NOODLES TO PASS THE TIME.
Vor mehr als einem Jahr Phoenix_Stone said…
laugh
Book-worm: Okay!! :D

Fortune Cookie: GO SPY ON A WAFFLE. I'LL POST LATER.
XD XD XD
Vor mehr als einem Jahr corrected said…
@phoenix U. R. CRUEL. to us
Vor mehr als einem Jahr Phoenix_Stone said…
laugh
Corrected: I post everyday!! XD XD XD
I'm posting in about an hour, if that's what you're talking about!! XD
Vor mehr als einem Jahr corrected said…
lol joking
Vor mehr als einem Jahr Phoenix_Stone said…
big smile
Hi peoples!!! :)
How is you?? ^.^
Comment more!! xD

Chapter 40

Percy POV

We had almost reached Texas.
Blackjack explained to me that the brightest star, Sirius, would be directly above us somewhere in Amarillo.
"That can't be right..." I had said, certain that it couldn't be directly above us.
The Mist is very strong near Sirius, that's why you can't see it, Boss.
"See what?" I asked.
Lady Nyx's Palace! Blackjack stated, like it was the most obvious thing in the world.
"Since when can you see through the Mist?" I asked, frowning.
Us animals aren't affected by the Mist, the Olympians didn't see the point.
"Oh.." I replied. I had never actually thought about that.
"How long left?" I asked him, after a moment.
Around about three hours, Boss.
We had probably been flying for four hours. I think we needed a rest.
"Blackjack, let's stop for a now." I said, and Blackjack told the other pegasi to descend.
"We're stopping for now!" I called to Piper and Halyptia. "Is that okay?!"
Piper gave a thumbs up and Halyptia nodded.
This quest will be easy.

Piper POV

We dropped in a national park.
A sign read "Welcome to Ouachita Park, enjoy your stay!"
Blackjack lead us to Ouachita Lake, which was huge. We touched the ground and, while the pegasi drank from the lake, we decided to go over our 'Convince Nyx' plan.
"So you'll have to talk to Nyx," I told Halyptia, "Since that's what's going to prove your innocence, and Percy and I will make sure nothing messy happens."
"Well, that's it really." She nodded, "What a vague plan..."
"What're you even going to say?" Percy asked, bewildered. "Hi Nyx, my parents are scared of you, will you support them, if war is to ever occur?" He looked frustrated.
"This'll be over soon." I reassured, putting power into my voice, "Everything will work out fine."
I hope.
Halyptia was fuming.
"Uh, did I say something wrong?" I asked her nervously. She just shook her head.
"I just..-"
"I know," Percy said, cutting her off. "It's difficult right now. You probably hate them with every molecule of your body. Even I used to hate them in the beginning. They accused me, of stealing the Master Bolt, without proof! I was furious. But, in the end they're our family, and family learns to forgive and forget."
"Wow." I spoke up, "You actually sound like Annabeth." I laughed.
Percy pretended to be surprised,
"That was 100% Percy Jackson!" He defended.
Halyptia burst into a fit of giggles and Percy cracked up too.
We'll be fine.

Halyptia POV

Percy's words touched me.
As I laughed, I thought about what he said. Family was about forgiving and forgetting.
I will do precisley that, I thought with determination.
But, then something made me remember the story of Harmonia. How Aphrodite betrayed her husband. How Hephaestus didn't forgive Aphrodite, and he cursed her daughter. How, up till today, his curse affected the lives of so many.
I felt infuriated again. I didn't know what to do.
Just finish this quest, I told myself, Then I'll decide what to do next.

Thanks for reading!! ;D
Any suggestions/requests/questions?? ;P ....Please?!? XP
Almost 500 posts!! :O ..YAAAYY!! :D
Alvin!! Your character will definately be in the next Chapter!! XD
See you soon!! ;)
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Vor mehr als einem Jahr corrected said…
great post!
suggestions: post asap
requests: post asap
questions: can plz post asap
Vor mehr als einem Jahr kkw1700 said…
Festus- o.O
What is it with you and waffles??

Corrected- LoL!
Vor mehr als einem Jahr Phoenix_Stone said…
laugh
Fortune Cookie: I like waffles... :D ...Here! Have TWO!! #<(^.^)>#

LOL! XD
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Vor mehr als einem Jahr corrected said…
if u want a serious suggestion
i think u should use less points of view during each chapter
its confusing
use 2 at most at a time
just a suggestion im not a writer so i wouldnt know that much
Vor mehr als einem Jahr Phoenix_Stone said…
big smile
Corrected: Okay!! :D

AWSHUM SUGGESTION!! ;D

KEEP 'EM COMING!! xD

Everyone: Who's POV should I do next?! :P
Vor mehr als einem Jahr CrazyTridentSon said…
ZACK!!!HE'S SO GONNA STEAL RIPTIDE
Vor mehr als einem Jahr corrected said…
one last suggestion
if u could add more detail to ur story the chapters could be longer and it would be more interesting
even though it already is one of the most interesting stories ive read so far