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Name: Night feuer
Gender: Stallion
Race: Pegasus
Personality: Night feuer is a Smart, Outgoing, Adventurous Stallion, who's very protective and careing of his blind little sister as well very in Liebe with the night and it's mistress. (also known as Luna)
Appearance: Pic
Abilities: Flight, feuer Breathing, feuer Bending, and feuer Magic.
Cutie Mark: A Night & star, sterne color crescent moon with a endless burning flame.
Family: Tear Drop, his sister. (owned by: hikari_hiwatari)
Job: Night Time wolke Clearer
Crush: Princess Luna (XP the main reason he clears the clouds at night)
Other Info: His Mane & Tail turns into a magical flame at will, when he's mad, oder during the midnight hours.
Bio: Night was born in cloudale like anyother Pegasus along followed Von his blind sister, Tear Drop and like many pegasi Night had normal child haube exsep for the fact that he had uqine Power & Abilities for being a pegasus as well did his sister. Now he and sister lives in ponyville while takeing on the job night time wolke clearer.
 Night Fire's Profile: Please Kommentar in Anwser?
 dargox posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr
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Seanthehedgehog said:
Not to be mean oder anything, but why are his legs so long? I like him, but it seems interesting that he has long legs.
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because he has a tall family.
dargox posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr
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indeed!
hikari_hiwatari posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr
hikari_hiwatari said:
i'll post Mehr Information on Tear Drop!! awesome character Von the way
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KJBiggestFan said:
Not being mean at all, just giving some advice: Maybe tone down the whole abilities thing. This happens a lot with Fan characters and it's dislike-able to lots of people and some will assume your character is a "Mary Sue/Gary Stu" because of it. (Been there, done that.)

It could work under circumstances where he is apart/raised/lives with a special group of ponies who have those abilities oder was part of a big story line that goes along with that oder requires the powers of special ponies with abilities like that. A unicorn would be Mehr fitting to his race.

Not saying Du HAVE to change that, just a tip. Other than that, he's fine to me.
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posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr 
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that actually sounds like a good idea!
hikari_hiwatari posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr
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I thank Du for thoughts and I will take note of Du said. ^_^
dargox posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr
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You're most welcome <3
KJBiggestFan posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr
alinah_09 said:
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