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Okay don't be hating on me for this, I'm not trying to start a fight. I just think that we'd all be better off if we at least read these and thought about them, even if just for a second. I'm gonna say this right now: these are not cut-and-dry rules. Von no means am I forcing Du to follow them, and there will be exceptions. These are just suggestions, on how to make your OCs well liked and better off. So, with that being said, in no particular order, here are 15 suggestions for making good OCs.
1. Ask yourself if making a new OC is really necessary.. Don't contribute to the overcrowding unless Du truly believe that the club will be improved with the addition of this character. It helps if the new character has some relation to one of your existing characters, but it's not necessary.
2. Write something about them before Du start posting. It can be as little as a bio, oder as big as an entire Artikel series, but whatever the case, your character will generally be better recieved if we feel like we know them a little bit first.
3. Don't go overboard with the powers. I'd say no Mehr than 5 distinct powers, otherwise it gets to be overwhelming and annoying if your character can do everything. No one likes the character that, whatever situation he oder she is in, can pull out another trick out of his oder her hat.
4. If Du absolutely must give your character tons of powers, then give them 1 to 3 "favorite powers". It's much less annoying if your character usually only uses a couple of his oder her powers, as opposed to all 20.
5. Make their powers related. It drives people nuts when your character has thirty different powers that are completely Zufällig and unrelated to each other. They should be logically connected. For example, my OC Jackson (Thunderblade). His main power is communication with metal, and his other two powers, swordfighting and magnetism, logically stem from that.
6. Hero names should have some relation to them and/or their powers. There are exceptions, but still. It's confusing when Du have, say, BlackCat whose powers are flight and telepathy. It just doesn't make sense.
7. Try not to copy others directly.. Yes, yes, I know, imitation is the highest form of flattery, but no one likes a deliberate copycat. That seems to be a trend with this group. One character gets pregnant, and the Weiter Tag you've got 3 other OCs that are preggo. One person creates a child that has some relation to their OC, and before we know it, the cave has turned into a daycare center.
8. Appearance and pets should, again, be related to their powers. Pets can be great when they are a familiar, that either has powers of its own oder is linked to the character. And my biggest example of the appearance thing is the Kürzlich outcropping of characters with cat ears and sometimes tails. Those are fine when they're actually related to their powers (if they have catlike senses, for example, oder claws) but it's just annoying when they're completely unrelated.
9. Don't kill your character without a good reason. If Du must kill your character, at least do it dramatically! And give a reason for why they must die! Don't just do it for attention, oder so that your other characters have a reason to moan and be depressed.
10. Don't reincarnate your character unless necessary and justified. Which it usually isn't. But there are exceptions. And if Du do provide a good reason, at least make it a process that takes up time. For example, when Fin was killed, it was logical that she would be reincarnated, since she was part phoenix. And it didn't happen overnight. It took a couple months for her to come back.
11. Don't make your character completely invincible. Your character can have limited invulnerability, kind of like Superman, but they can't be completely resistant to death and damage. Make it realistic, people! Even superheroes couldn't get shot oder stabbed in the heart, then pop up Minuten later completely fine, like nothing had happened.
12. Give your character a unique personality. Put simply, don't make them dull oder flat. This goes back to the idea that a new OC should be making some sort of contribution to the group. It's a lot better if their personality affects the others in some way.
13. Give your character some weaknesses and/or flaws. Preferably both of them. That's all I can say.
14. Be careful if making your character related to oder dating a canon character.. Make sure that it's realistic and not annoying. Same goes with if they're related to oder dating another OC, especially if that OC was not created Von you.
15. Make sure your character isn't a Mary Sue. No one likes a Mary Sue. link Mary Sues are honestly, just plain annoying. I'm not saying that if your existing character has some elements of "Sue-ism" that they're bad and need to be changed, but try to keep it in mind for new characters. If your not sure if your existing oder potential character is a Mary Sue, oder if Du suspect he/she is, but don't know how to change it, Du can take link. If Du want, Du can post the results here (Aisling got a 19, in case Du were curious, which Du probably weren't...).
So, that's all I have for now. Rage on me all Du want, but just know that I don't care. Once again, Von no means do Du have to follow these. They aren't rules, merely a few suggestions.
For now,
AislingYJ :)
posted by khanna266
name:Cross Stone
age:8
Alias:Dream
civvies:nothing special
hero outfit:none
weapons:iced nunchucks
powers:preminitions,puts curses on people when she learns there names,super strong
BG story:When she was born she was gegeben her powers Von an evil monk.She is japanese,but she was born in Spain.She was told that on the Tag of her 18th birthday she is supposed to destroy Mars and Venus ever since she was told that she has been trying to figure out a way to stop it from happeneing.

<3<3<3<3 Hope Du liked it she may seem scary but she's actually veryfriendly

ps: she is best Friends with Lily.
is't that awesome!
 kreuz and her pet...uhh don't know what it is
Cross and her pet...uhh don't know what it is
posted by khanna266
name:Lily Star'gei
age:9
Alias:short stuff
civvies:nothing special
hero suit:none
powers:hypnosis,white magic,andsuperspeed
BG story:she is Daniel's little sister and she is hoping to follow in his footsteps.Plus she has been taking gymnastics since she was little.

<3<3<3>3hope Du liked this OC I really wanted to add alittle kid to the group.And I thought this would be the perfect idea to use as a little kid.

PS:Lily was born from a different mother so she is half russian and half German,Isn't she just the cutest thing Du have ever seen.
 Lily waking up
Lily waking up
posted by Kurls_Basd
"I found something," Melody said, picking up a quiver. Aisling and Gravityboy walked up at Melody, Aisling collected the quiver, she stared at it for a moment, it was Aquapoint's. They had been searching these woods for days and had found nothing. Aisling continued to stare at the quiver though relieve something was definitely wrong with the situation.
"Melody I think we should wait for backup,"
"Why?"
"Aisling's right, finding these clues so quickly that we weren't finding before is definitely not luck."
"I cant wait I have to find her,"
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posted by Kurls_Basd
Ashley felt at peace, she wasn't hurting any more. Her body left restful and refreshed. She was relaxed. It felt as if she hadn't felt this may in a long time. For a moment she's dreaming, a cold sensation trickled down her spin, and all she hears is the laughter of a little girl.
"You're gonna make her dizzy."
"No i'm not."
Ashley feeling of happiness grew ever Mehr when she realized that the little girl is herself and she's with Akash and Kaya in the Ice lotus garden, their land of snow and ice. She hears the laughter but soon it begins to fade.
She slowly opens her eyes to a bark room. She...
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posted by MafiaYJ
Babylon stood in an alley, another one, as she liked them best, breathing heavily from the incident with the Demon. Adrian had killed him quickly and easily. But he was a watcher, she was not.
She was scared, for the first time in her life, Babylon was scared to die. Ethan sagte she could possibly meet an end this way, become one of them. Never in her life, did she want to both live and die, than at this moment then.
She made sure the cape was pulled tightly around her, and walked on. She was going to hide in a church. An old one, one she knew had been left alone many years Vor from a fire....
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posted by Robin_Love
 Carly
Carly
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Name: Carly Shea
Alias: Vixen
Occupation: Hero in training
Powers: agility, enhanced speed and hearing, enhanced vision, claws, teeth (cause it's really not fangs), and enhanced attack mode, stealth.
History: Carly is from another planet. While her planet is not completely destroyed, she was sent away as a way to save the population. She landed on Earth and immediately was found Von a family of foxes. They took her in until she was three years old. At that time, a hunter found her and tried o sell her for money, but a boy saved her, took care of her, and taught her everything he knew. Carly...
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posted by godmor
OOC: This fic takes place about 13 years from the present timeline, in this gun is 31 and Tess is 21.
Also the titel is temporrarie and micht chanse if I get a better idea fore it.

Tess rushed true the hospital doors, to into room 13 seeing the man she knew so well Laing on the bed.
He did not wake up yet.
Tess looks to were the familiar voce was coming from and saw mafia holding Pistolen hand looking in her direction.
Watt happened? tess asked
Too face ambushed him 2 blocks from home, he must have emptied a machine gun on him.
Twan slowly opened his eyes looking from mafia to tess.
Looks like I was wrong....
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posted by SilverWings13
Everyone rushed into the room. The doctor was shouting orders. They swarmed the cot where the ivory haired boy lay. His breath has stopped coming, his herz rate slowing.
Ivara and Jace stood side Von side, keeping out of the way as the others worked frantically. The pocket of her mantel grew warm, and Ivara reached in to retrieve the broach. The blue rose was glittering, shining with its own life. The two youngsters looked at the treasure, then each other, and finally, the still body of their dying friend.

"You can't.. Du can't be here."
Alek hesitated, taken aback. Out of all the reactions he...
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"so Du think Du can beat me, it's a joke" stated Ajax looking at him from the opposite side of the capsule
"Why are Du even doing this?, I mean hurting me is one thing but hurting others like Mafia Von saying your going to kill me is just wrong" spoke Alex not bothering to look back at him
"details, if I can't physically take Du on but I can mentally.
you know Du can't kill me because I'm the deepest hidden part of you, yet I can kill Du because your Web also, meaning your not really me"
he states yet another fact
"Yeah yeah, ultimate doom and all that but really Du know I will try and...
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posted by SilverWings13
Sorry for all the Zufällig late night one-shots. Schreiben helps me fall asleep.

The dreary rain had turned the clouds gray, yet somehow it had also effected the entire city. The rising buildings, the passing cars, the faces of the people hurrying about the streets, all void of color.
Those somber faces, Makaio felt, were mocking him. He could see them clearly, make out distinct characteristics; he was able to distinguish the features of strangers, yet his memory refused him the privilege of the faces of the ones he cared to see. It was his own mind that was betraying him.
Makaio took another bite...
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posted by SilverWings13
Jace straightened at his post outside the infirmary door and adjusted his glasses, which he had exchanged for his contacts a few Minuten before. He could hear footsteps approaching quickly. He had expected them to be gone longer, but perhaps the quick return meant things had gone better than planned. Maybe Nic had stopped Declan before he reached Alek, maybe Declan had only gone out for a confrontation, not a battle, maybe no one had gotten hurt.
Even as he thought this over, Jace knew something was wrong. They were coming too hurriedly. A rush of wind preceded a shouting voice, one the boy...
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posted by BladeYJ
 Blade..
Blade..
Diary Entry #3

Terror is coming for me.. I knew he would. Just never this soon. Does he know? About me.. and the fangs? Speaking of: They came back, almost instantly and it was the worst pain. Worse than pulling them out. Anyway. I wonder how he found me, how he actually knew where I was. I'm happy, finally happy, to leave this place. Leaving Dante, doesn't affect me. He and Booker have went off a few days Vor and haven't returned. Oh, well... I want to be with Terror again and feel his l-


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I dropped my pen, as the sound of the unlocking door broke the silence. Ten Sekunden passed. Nothing....
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posted by BladeYJ
((Turns out I miss counted -.- and named almost all of them wrong.. silly me :P



So 8 is 9
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5 is 6
4 is 5
4 is 4
3 is 3
2 is 2
1 is 1))


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Diary Entry #2

The thirst keeps growing. It's like a hunger Du can never fulfill. It sucks. I want it to end. I've fed a lot Mehr since Dad, I still hate that he was my first taste of blood, but I do feel guilty feeding on those poor innocent people. I just don't want to die, in retrospect I don't want to have a never ending thirst. All in all , it needs to stop.

My fangs are bigger than before and it fucking...
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posted by Robin_Love
He slipped in through the open window, looking around for nurses oder doctors. No one was in sight as he moved the girl's bedside. She was sleeping now, but he hadn't really told her he would come back before visiting hours in the morning. She had woken up, almost like she refused to be trapped in a coma. And he had talked with her all day, listening as she explained the things she gone through.
And he was suddenly thankful it wasn't as bad as he had imagined. He should have been terrified that she seemed unaffected Von this last kidnapping. But she had waited until Becca left till she broke into...
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posted by khanna266
"(sigh)Now I only have one friend and NO boyfriend this sucks I wish that I wasn't so shy to talk to people",Ari thought aloud,she was staring at the ground not paying attention to where she was going,and all of a sudden "Ow!"she looked up to find out who she bumped into but didn't know who he was."sorry,"Ari had apologized,"It's alright,hey I haven't seen Du around here before are Du knew"He asked,"Actually no,i've been here for 3 months,a lot of people haven't met me yet though,"Ari replied,"Oh,well Hey I'm Jaime Reyes,what's your name?"He asked,"It's Ari,"she replied,"just Ari?"he asked...
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posted by Robin_Love
SORRY IT'S LATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! And short.



The footsteps coming towards him made him look up. She walked over, a grim look on her face but a relieved look in her brown eyes. He ran a hand through his silver hair and stood. He looked over his shoulder, but the other boy was gone.
“Where did-”
“Probably off to find clues on Blade.”
He nodded and looked back at her.
“Well?”
“She's doing alright. They say it could have been worse if she was under there longer.”
“Okay but...how bad is she?”
“They say she had blunt force trauma to the head. She Lost blood and won't wake up soon but maybe...
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posted by khanna266
2 months after the incident with minion

"Gosh Roy Du always have to be right about everything,don't you."Ari and Roy were fighting about how Ari has been hanging out with some of her guy Friends lately,"Well what else am I supposed to think Ari,you hang out with them a lot and It makes me feel as if your cheating"Roy yelled,"Why would Du even think that,you idiot!"She yelled back,"oh i'm an idiot!"he yelled fading."What's up with them?" Conner asked Wally
"(chomp)feyr ditng bout sompin"Wally was trying to say something as he was eating his popcorn,"Dude don't talk with your mouth full."conner...
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posted by Blitz359
<I'm not dead! Hi!>

"....Who?" Giovanni questioned. Richi looked at him with an expression of shock. "...Really?" Richi asked. With a nod from the large man, Richi began the explanation of his true backstory with a sigh. "Maria Antonio, 20 years ago, was your spouse. She was devoted to Du and she loved Du with all her heart, and the feeling was mutual. On a camping 16 years ago, however, my mother became pregnant with me on a camping trip after she went for a walk in the woods. Only, she didn't know it until a check-up at her doctor 2 months after the trip. When she refused to get rid...
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posted by BladeYJ
 I can't get over this fudging photo.. It's just.. Mmmmmph~
I can't get over this fudging photo.. It's just.. Mmmmmph~
((Phoebs I totally ripped your bio layout off, don't hate me, it was just so simple and easy to read /. ))

Name: Blade Serenity Howard-^insert Terror's last name-which is secret-here^

Class:Hero

Current Living Location: She owns an apartment, where she usually stays, but also has a room at The Cave if she wants to crash. Currently she is M.I.A.
((Though she is Missing In Action. I do break the rules that I've made, occasionally, and RP with her.. So what.. sue me.))

Race: Half Human-Half Vampire/Caucasian.


Age: Seventeen, but due to the vampirism, immortal-Age Wise-

Hair: Her hair is a bright blonde...
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posted by BladeYJ
 The moon was a light red, Du know the kind of moons Du saw as a child and they always freaked Du out, yeah that kind of moon. It lit the sky yet there seemed to be no stars, it creeped me out.
The moon was a light red, you know the kind of moons you saw as a child and they always freaked you out, yeah that kind of moon. It lit the sky yet there seemed to be no stars, it creeped me out.
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Diary Entry #1

It's been a whole week here and honestly I'm craving something. I have to eat but nothing is appealing. It's blood I'm craving, but that's not my only problem. The other thing on my mind is Terror. I want him to know why I had to leave him.. I know he wouldn't take me as I am. So like everything in my life.. I let go. He's still my one and only. But I can never return to him until I'm my normal self. Until I find a cure for this fucking disease that runs through my veins. A disease that makes Du want to kill and consume everything in sight. No one knows...
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