She ducked her head as another loud rumbling rippled through the air. Water rushed her eyes as she hastened to the door. Lightning flashed and she went through the open portal. Another loud crack caused her to run up the stairs. She headed to her room and pulled the wet mantel off her.
She shivered in her drenched clothes then pulled off her boots. She left her wet boots and mantel on the floor and entered the adjoining bedroom. She striped out of the wet clothes and slipped into dry ones. She slipped into bett as thunder broke through. She settled deeper into the covers, trying to shake away the...

Updated 6/3/14
I'm bored, so I thought I'd share with Du a few websites online that Du can Design your characters! There are tons of websites out there, these are just a few.
link
This website is Von far the best superhero generator I've found. Basically Du use it to make your character in costume. They have endless options of costume parts for both male and female characters, and they even allow Du to Bewegen parts around, resize them, and color them. Du can save the character to the game, and then load it later, but if Du want to save an image to the computer, Du have to take a screenshot....

Name: Roxanne "Roxy" Conners
Age: 37 (age when she died)
Status: deceased
Relations: husband- Riley Conners (deceased), son- Daemian Weston (deceased), son- Declan Conners, daughter- Aryess Weston
Physical Appearance: fair hair, sky-blue eyes, 5'8", slim build- slight muscle
Personality: stubborn, kind, strong willed
Titles: Mistress of Revenge, Angel – Jäger der Finsternis
History: Was born and raised in Venice, Italy as Roxanne Weston. Her parents tried to protect their only child from their family's secret: each generation of their ancestors had sent their lineage to the temple of the League of Shadows in hopes that...

A Death in his Family

(Part 2)

Previously on Red Revenge...

"All units, murder suspect on fifth and third proceeding north on foot. Pursuing. Require backup. Suspect is heavily armed and protected. Female, mid-twenties. White hair, black clothes, sword and possible body armor." the radio crackled.

"She cut them in three pieces and set feuer to their car." Revenge replied, and swung off.

"I assume Du did your homework?" Revenge asked.

"Yes." Rose replied, untying her snow-white hair from its ponytail. She was dressed simply. White tank top, skinny jeans, white eyepatch. Her hair hung loosely behind...

LAYER ONE : THE OUTSIDE
Full Name: Marcus Antoni Wilhemovich Rurik
Nickname: Marcus, Saint, Marky Mark (reserved Von Cal only)
Reason oder meaning of name: named after Marcus Antonius, the Roman politician and general under Cesar who played a critical role in the transformation of the Roman Republic into the autocratic Roman Empire; Saint because of his allegiance to the Knights Templar
Eye Color: cobalt
Hair Style/Color: almost black, curly
Height: 6' 0"
Clothing Style: always in style, on the expensive side
Best Physical Feature: them cheekbones could cut someone

LAYER TWO: THE INSIDE
Your Fears: ......

Following Mafia's example and creating a Mehr YJ oriented OC~

LAYER ONE : THE OUTSIDE
Name: Fey
Meaning of name: fairy
Hero Name: Valkyrie
Eye Color: soft brown
Hair Style/Color: dirty blonde, curly
Age: 19
Special features: white wings that fold neatly under her clothes when in civvies
Abilities: flight (wings), fast healing, super strength and speed
Species: Amazonian
Birth place: Themyscira

Civvies: comfortable black leggings, grey converse, white socks, dark blue Gotham universität sweatshirt, golden bracelet with green gems and matching earrings
Hero suit: see pic at right

Background: Fey was born...

LAYER ONE : THE OUTSIDE
Name: Tristan West!
Reason oder meaning of name: Urban dictionary says I'm most amazing-est guy there ever is.
Eye Color: Greeeeen.
Hair Style/Color: I'm a ginger.
Height: Like... 5'6, 5'7?
Clothing Style: It varies, usually what ever makes me most comfortable... like t-shirts.
Best Physical Feature: Freckles?

LAYER TWO: THE INSIDE
Your Fears: The speed force really trips me out man.
Your Guilty Pleasure: Eating like 4 tubs of ice cream at once. Massive ones.
Your Biggest Pet Peeve: Super super slow people. Like, schildkröte speed.
Your Ambition for the Future: I haven't gegeben it...

1AM, Twan's command post.
Twan stood infrond of a tabelle inspecting maps of the city.
Suddenly a throwing star, sterne land only inches away from his hand.
Bothe Twan and Boris aim there Pistolen at the ceiling.
Is Thad how Du greed old Friends now?
Ceschire sais in a playful tone we she climes truw a ceiling window, taking back her throwing star, sterne and sits down on the tabelle crossed legged.
Twan sigeds in relieve. Bohe him and Boris put there Pistolen away
Damm Jade can't Du just use the door Du scared me half to death.
Nowe were is the fun in thad? She sagte in the same playful tone.
I geas your rigt.
Its good thad...

The darkness was pierced Von the light shining from the open door. A solitary figure stepped into the room, looking around for the object of their study. There was half a Sekunde of fright before they spotted it. A little black ball in the corner. With a soft sigh, he walked closer. The ball moved, weakly lifting it's head as the other approached. It hissed feebly, unable to do more. It had been days, almost a week since she'd been there. And almost a week since she'd had anything but the daily portion of water. She had become too weak to even hold her human form and had reverted to her cat form....

First songfic ever (published) Von yours truly!

This is the end
Hold your breath and count to ten

It would be much easier just to let go. To allow the bubbles of valuable oxygen escape her lips an float away to freedom.

Feel the earth Bewegen and then
Hear my herz burst again

Her lungs screamed for Mehr air, any air, her body begged for Mehr heat, any heat. The energy had already seeped trough her clothes into the surrounding depths. All senses threatened to shut down and leave her Lost in the darkness alone and too exhausted to give a care.

For this is the end
I've drowned and dreamt this moment

The chain...

Her herz froze as she recognized the two males coming towards her. Just perfect! I don't want this. Not now; not ever! She turned on her heels and headed quickly in the other direction. She could feel them, their eyes on her, their mouths probably drooling. She shuddered and headed down an alley, knowing they would follow her. And when they rounded the corner, she pointed her Pistolen at their heads.
“Speak fast. Silver bullets. Now.”
One of them smiled while the other answered.
“We were sent to find you. He is...in need of your presence.”
“Tell him I want no part of it.”
“He suspected...

Fragen I, Princess Ducky the Ninja Rebel, came up with Fragen for Loki, A. K. A. Beloved_Robin the Magnificent, to ask Charmante Rio, The Diva. Out of curiosity, I asked SilverWings. Yes, there are 13.

1) If Du could dye your hair any color, what color would it be?
Dark blue with silver streaks! Do they have silver hair dye?
2) How will the world end?
The world's going to end? O_O
3) Favorit catch-phrase?
I am the guardian of the innocent. (Stop laughing, Nic!)
4) Sports car oder private jet?
Motorcyle! It's harder to crash...
5) Leather oder snake-skin?
Dragon scales!
6) What's Du war cry?
...

Name: Fa Mulan (In English, Mulan Fa)
Alias: Jade Dragon
Occupation: hero, student
Powers: power sensing and recognition, flight, high density polymerized titanium Japanese fans, has a way with healing herbs and prefers them over modern Tag medicines, very intelligent, bonds with the Ancestors, professional martial artist, extremely agile
History: There was a prophecy about Mulan when she was born: It was sagte that she was to be the embodiment and hostess to the Jade Dragon spirit. But the Jade Dragon was the emblem of a different family. That alone caused tension between families. After a while,...

LAYER ONE : THE OUTSIDE
Name: Scott "Scotty" Clancy.
Reason oder meaning of name: I actually have no flipping idea, to be honest.
Eye Color: Blue!
Hair Style/Color: It's white and...... jagged?
Height: Uhhhhhhh, 6 foot something, not that much shorter than Fang. (You're 6'1, Scotty.) Oh! Okay, I'm 6'1 apparently.
Clothing Style: I really like flannels.
Best Physical Feature: My unusual hair.

LAYER TWO: THE INSIDE
Your Fears: Losing people I'm close to.
Your Guilty Pleasure: ...I eat icing from a tube....
Your Biggest Pet Peeve: PEOPLE WHO TAKING FOREVER IN LINE LIKE Jesus CHRIST PEOPLE.
Your Ambition...

Name: Vexx Lilith

Class: Evil

Species: Succubus

Age: "Twenty-Three"

Hair: smaragd Green

Eyes: Forest Green

Relations: She's Damian's Mistress

Costume: Below, cos' I don't feel like describing it.

Civvies: She's a nurse, so usually a nurses "outfit" on Damian's Request, but she also tends to wear the tightest fitting clothing she can find.

Weapon Choice: Carries a silver dagger. But relies on hand-to-hand combat.

Personality: She's seducing to the one's she wants. And she's nice to those she hates the most--the ones she hates tending to be girls. She's manipulative, ruthless, seductive, and lustful....

BAH... Another one-shot... Fluff, kinda to get the oblivious people Mehr aware of this.. :D
I hope I nailed Epsilon right. *shrug* oh well.

Fin stumbled back, running into another form behind her. She didn’t have to glance back to see who it was she’d run into. “You doin’ alright, Ep?”
“Fine,” the shifter grinned, smacking another guard away. “You have quite a history with these guys.”
“Eyup. I hate them, they hate me. Feelings are mutual between us.” She lit her hands on feuer and blasted a couple of them away. “But these guys.. they seem different. They’re better fighters...

Because I'm bored at the lack of villain attacks

Name: Rei Howl (unknown)
Alias: Masquerade
Age: 18
Alliance: Villain

Appearance: White hair, blue eyes, 6'0", well built, pale skin

Personality: Cold, menacing, serious, egotistical, he's basically a big jerk with a horrible temper who likes to be in control of every situation that involves him

Powers: He's an "Illusions Master" allowing him to twist people's dreams with his illusion beasts, he also likes to use his illusion powers in a fight to get an adavantage over his opponent. Masquerade has two forms one he uses everyday and his other form he...

Harmonian.








Name: Ciel Norrian.

Alias: Harmonian.

Appearance: 6'0 tall, purple eyes, white hair.

Gender: Male.

Civies: Usually a white t-shirt and jeans will due, an occational jacke aswell.

Hero-Suit: Blue tailcoat, a top-hat and black jeans.

Weapons: He carries around a spoon. And a pocket messer he carries around in civies. And a (A spoon XP) And with his power, (see powers) can make a weapon.

Skills: Fair Singen voice, extreemly agile.

Powers: When he sings a special chorus, he can create oder repair items such as..... a halskette made of pearls, he sings "Build it up with silver and pearl, silver...

Name : Jesse Bennett
Alias: None
Powers: Healing Magics, combat
Occupation : Healer
Weakness/Limits : Unknown
History:Jessie Bennett came from a long line of pure-blood healers. Her race is unknown, despite how human she looks. Her gegeben name has been forgotten. She came to Earth much like the Man of Steel. But she was found Von a traveling caravan in an Arabian desert. She grew up among them and immediately took a fondness to medicine. Von accident, she found out her inhuman abilities when she was five in a dangerous situation. Almost immediately, she was sent away, to America. She spent almost...

Okay don't be hating on me for this, I'm not trying to start a fight. I just think that we'd all be better off if we at least read these and thought about them, even if just for a second. I'm gonna say this right now: these are not cut-and-dry rules. Von no means am I forcing Du to follow them, and there will be exceptions. These are just suggestions, on how to make your OCs well liked and better off. So, with that being said, in no particular order, here are 15 suggestions for making good OCs.
1. Ask yourself if making a new OC is really necessary.. Don't contribute to the overcrowding unless...