Twilight-Serie Article: Seven Tag Weekend Von JandMsMommy

posted by JandMsMommy

Hey, everyone! I've got a new Fan fiction story out. I'd Liebe for Du to take a look at the prologue! My other fic, Bedroom Confessions, was really successful and I'm hoping that everyone likes this one as well! There will be violence and murder, so if you're not up for that, then Du can ignore this. :) But of course, there'll be plenty of lemons as well! It'd be great to get some feedback on it though! The prologue is only about 300 words! Come take a look!

Summary: They were young, in love...and raised hell for seven days. E/B, AH, OOC

Link: link

Thanks! :)

halunik hmm, I'm curious, what it's gonna be

JandMsMommy Thanks for reading it! I'm glad it piqued your interest! :) I'm pretty close to being done with Ch. 1! xo ~Andy

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Twilight Outake- Original Chapter 20 "Flight" a.k.a. Shopping with Alice

posted by tubby2002

This is an outtake from the book Twilight, it came from Stephenie Meyer's official website.

(Notes: You'll recognize portions of this chapter—small bits survived and were combined with what is now Chapter 20 "Impatience." This chapter slowed down the pace of the "hunt" part of the story, but I feel like I cut out a lot of Alice's personality when I sacrificed it.)

Shopping with Alice

The car was sleek, black and powerful; its windows were tinted limo black. The engine purred like a great cat as we sped through the deep night.
Jasper drove one handed, carelessly it seemed, but the muscular car...

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Twilight Outake- Badminton

posted by tubby2002

This is an outake from the book Twilight, I got it off of Stephenie Meyer's official website.

(Notes: this scene was clipped from Chapter 11 "Complications." It bugged me to remove it, but I couldn't put my finger on why that was, so I let it go. When it was too late to put it back, I finally realized what was bothering me. Though I refer to Bella's clumsiness in gym several times, I never really Zeigen it in action. This was the one time that Edward was "watching," and thus the natural place to showcase that clumsiness. Ha ha—and now my explanation is almost longer than the outtake!!)

Badminton...