-2 years before-
Darkness - *sits on bed* hmm...
Demon - What little pony can't handle missions to kill other Ponies?
Darkness - that's not it...
Blackshadow - give him a break.
Demon - Shut up! Also Du should address me as master.
Blackshadow - I'm not you're maid I'm you're fiancé... And I don't want to-
Demon - cut this crap! *slaps her* hehe... You're mine...
Demon King - can Du take it like that Darkness...
Darkness - ...
Demon King - *gives dagger* Du chose... *leave room*
Demon - Yea kill yourself because Du drag us dow- ugh...
Darkness - *have dagger in his body* I don't follow orders *slices neck* ... *looks on BlackShadow* sorry...
Blackshadow - I didn't cared about that asshole...
Darkness - ... K the
Blackshadow - what Du trying to do... Why Du joined us...
Darkness - I'm on exile...
Blackshadow - why Du joined someone who kill your family...
Darkness - do I know *going to bed* let me sleep...
Blackshadow - *walks up to his bed* what is it tell me.
Darkness - ...
Blackshadow - Great... Stay mute...
Darkness - tell me what is friendship... Love... And all those feelings...
Blackshadow - I... Can't explain them...
Darkness - who is my friend who is enemy.
Blackshadow - I know Im your friend...
Darkness - ...
Blackshadow - ...
Darkness - we know ea h other for 2 years...
Blackshadow - what do Du insist...
Darkness - let's run away...
Blackshadow - what...
Darkness - I don't want to live here...
Blackshadow - neither do I...
Darkness - same as lab eh...
Blackshadow - do Du remember the day...
Darkness - in the garden... We were stupid...
Blackshadow - "when I grow up we gonna get married" I still remember...
Darkness - Still... Ponies treated Du like trash...
Blackshadow - Du were only pony that liked me...
Darkness - ....
Blackshadow - Do Du still feel the same... About marriage...
Darkness - I don't know what I feel... But I want to protect you.
Blackshadow - *sigh* *whispers to self* I hope Du once will tell me the words...
-1 Jahr later-
Blackshadow - you're leaving?
Darkness - indeed...
Blackshadow - why...
Darkness - Its time to end this war...
Blackshadow - don't leave me...
Darkness - Who sagte I am...
Blackshadow - huh?
Darkness - I will need your help...
-present time-
Lightning - I never knew Du had someone that close...
Bluewave - I feel Liebe in the air!
Lightning - Hehehe... At least now I know Du weren't alone this whole time...
Darkness - I think I am too but I can't say that is love.
Blackshadow - *sigh*
Whiteheart - I can see it... *grab sword*
Lightning - I think so to- WAIT!
Whiteheart - *stabs Darkness from behind*
Darkness - w...why...
Whiteheart - Du killed my family... So this is vengeance...
Darkness - *falls on ground*
Lightning - DAMNIT!
Blackshadow - NOOO! *falls on knees* no... no... nononono... *grabs her scythe* ... You're... Going to die with him...
Whiteheart - huh...
Blackshadow - *prepares to attack*
Darkness *grabs her hoof* stop...
Blackshadow - But...
Darkness - I deserve to die here...
Bluewave - *slams on table* No... We are comrades... I never believed Du would do something like that Whiteheart... I believe Du *takes medic pack* hang on...
Blackshadow - I'll try to use magic!
Whiteheart - I-
Lightning - leave... Please... I'll. Comfort stuff...
Whiteheart - *leaves tent* what... Did I... Why did I...
T.B.C
Darkness - *sits on bed* hmm...
Demon - What little pony can't handle missions to kill other Ponies?
Darkness - that's not it...
Blackshadow - give him a break.
Demon - Shut up! Also Du should address me as master.
Blackshadow - I'm not you're maid I'm you're fiancé... And I don't want to-
Demon - cut this crap! *slaps her* hehe... You're mine...
Demon King - can Du take it like that Darkness...
Darkness - ...
Demon King - *gives dagger* Du chose... *leave room*
Demon - Yea kill yourself because Du drag us dow- ugh...
Darkness - *have dagger in his body* I don't follow orders *slices neck* ... *looks on BlackShadow* sorry...
Blackshadow - I didn't cared about that asshole...
Darkness - ... K the
Blackshadow - what Du trying to do... Why Du joined us...
Darkness - I'm on exile...
Blackshadow - why Du joined someone who kill your family...
Darkness - do I know *going to bed* let me sleep...
Blackshadow - *walks up to his bed* what is it tell me.
Darkness - ...
Blackshadow - Great... Stay mute...
Darkness - tell me what is friendship... Love... And all those feelings...
Blackshadow - I... Can't explain them...
Darkness - who is my friend who is enemy.
Blackshadow - I know Im your friend...
Darkness - ...
Blackshadow - ...
Darkness - we know ea h other for 2 years...
Blackshadow - what do Du insist...
Darkness - let's run away...
Blackshadow - what...
Darkness - I don't want to live here...
Blackshadow - neither do I...
Darkness - same as lab eh...
Blackshadow - do Du remember the day...
Darkness - in the garden... We were stupid...
Blackshadow - "when I grow up we gonna get married" I still remember...
Darkness - Still... Ponies treated Du like trash...
Blackshadow - Du were only pony that liked me...
Darkness - ....
Blackshadow - Do Du still feel the same... About marriage...
Darkness - I don't know what I feel... But I want to protect you.
Blackshadow - *sigh* *whispers to self* I hope Du once will tell me the words...
-1 Jahr later-
Blackshadow - you're leaving?
Darkness - indeed...
Blackshadow - why...
Darkness - Its time to end this war...
Blackshadow - don't leave me...
Darkness - Who sagte I am...
Blackshadow - huh?
Darkness - I will need your help...
-present time-
Lightning - I never knew Du had someone that close...
Bluewave - I feel Liebe in the air!
Lightning - Hehehe... At least now I know Du weren't alone this whole time...
Darkness - I think I am too but I can't say that is love.
Blackshadow - *sigh*
Whiteheart - I can see it... *grab sword*
Lightning - I think so to- WAIT!
Whiteheart - *stabs Darkness from behind*
Darkness - w...why...
Whiteheart - Du killed my family... So this is vengeance...
Darkness - *falls on ground*
Lightning - DAMNIT!
Blackshadow - NOOO! *falls on knees* no... no... nononono... *grabs her scythe* ... You're... Going to die with him...
Whiteheart - huh...
Blackshadow - *prepares to attack*
Darkness *grabs her hoof* stop...
Blackshadow - But...
Darkness - I deserve to die here...
Bluewave - *slams on table* No... We are comrades... I never believed Du would do something like that Whiteheart... I believe Du *takes medic pack* hang on...
Blackshadow - I'll try to use magic!
Whiteheart - I-
Lightning - leave... Please... I'll. Comfort stuff...
Whiteheart - *leaves tent* what... Did I... Why did I...
T.B.C
Has anyone ever read CHEERLIEES GARDEN.
It's probably one of the 'better' creepypastas.
But I still dislike it.
Not only is Cheerlees complete irrational in thi story. (killing children, when simply quitting your job could of worked just as well).
But there's all the fact, she acts like she watches WAY too many Saw Filme (I would know, I watch them quite a lot).
She acts exactly like Jigsaw.
Using clever traps to kill them in unique fashion.
But unlike Jigsaw.
She dosen't give them a chance to escape, making her Mehr like the Mark Hoffmen and Amanda Young.
Where the victims, where ONLY victims, they would of died, regardless of doing what they needed to do.
And there was no 'point' behind it.
Besides I LIKE Jigsaw, he's different then other villains.
He's still 'human' in some way.
Anyway.
Now that I got that off my chest.
I can relax now.
And stay tuned for Mehr of my latest story..
It's probably one of the 'better' creepypastas.
But I still dislike it.
Not only is Cheerlees complete irrational in thi story. (killing children, when simply quitting your job could of worked just as well).
But there's all the fact, she acts like she watches WAY too many Saw Filme (I would know, I watch them quite a lot).
She acts exactly like Jigsaw.
Using clever traps to kill them in unique fashion.
But unlike Jigsaw.
She dosen't give them a chance to escape, making her Mehr like the Mark Hoffmen and Amanda Young.
Where the victims, where ONLY victims, they would of died, regardless of doing what they needed to do.
And there was no 'point' behind it.
Besides I LIKE Jigsaw, he's different then other villains.
He's still 'human' in some way.
Anyway.
Now that I got that off my chest.
I can relax now.
And stay tuned for Mehr of my latest story..