Hello MJ family, remember me? R.I.P CollageQueen(also known as powertothefoxes) What do Du fellow Fans think about my classic, original, story?

WARNING: this might contain some parts Du may not like, if Du disagree with it, Du can tell me. one Tag in the future I'm going to make a mini clip oder movie out of this. Du could give me some suggestions oder something to tweek the story a little if Du ever dislike my creativity. anyway, hope Du enjoy the mini story:)P.S: Peterdaddy,MJpixy, I'm sorry I was offline because it was like an emotional rollercoaster for me. P.S: Du might want to look closely.