this is an English sonnet I had to write for my English class and I need to know if it is good oder not before I Abschicken it, thank you. also the rhyme scheme is ababcdcdefefgg
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My dear Liebe Du once were a shining ray.
In my eyes Du meant the whole world to me.
Now everything about Du is a shade of gray.
Like your beauty, your emotions, and your Liebe is what I see.
However we must part onto our new paths.
Because our Liebe is coming to its new close.
Farben were a beauty but now gray spreads its wrath.
I would Liebe to feel again but now it’s a ghost.
Our Liebe has left this earth for old times’ sake.
But when our Liebe left it took Du along too.
Sadly it left me with all this heartache.
Dying Liebe was something I wish I had clues to
If someone told me Liebe would never be easy
I would have chosen another path that’s breezy
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My dear Liebe Du once were a shining ray.
In my eyes Du meant the whole world to me.
Now everything about Du is a shade of gray.
Like your beauty, your emotions, and your Liebe is what I see.
However we must part onto our new paths.
Because our Liebe is coming to its new close.
Farben were a beauty but now gray spreads its wrath.
I would Liebe to feel again but now it’s a ghost.
Our Liebe has left this earth for old times’ sake.
But when our Liebe left it took Du along too.
Sadly it left me with all this heartache.
Dying Liebe was something I wish I had clues to
If someone told me Liebe would never be easy
I would have chosen another path that’s breezy
Writer corner:) hi everybody! i hope you'll like the plot. let me know!! thank you!!!
In the Jahr 4125 the Earth was still turning on itself. Apparently everything was the same as it was two thausand years ago. But it wasn't so. The democracy we got fighting was distroied Von a man. After 15 years of wars, in 4025 Cyrus defeated free people and he established the tyranny. The whole world was controlled and the freedom dind't exist anymore. Everyone Lost trust in everything, in love, in courage, in God. Most of people didn't know that there was a prophecy. It sagte that the humanity had to pass through a century of pain and fear to realize how important freedom was. But then in the 101st Jahr four guys, with the Gift, could overthrow the government...
In the Jahr 4125 the Earth was still turning on itself. Apparently everything was the same as it was two thausand years ago. But it wasn't so. The democracy we got fighting was distroied Von a man. After 15 years of wars, in 4025 Cyrus defeated free people and he established the tyranny. The whole world was controlled and the freedom dind't exist anymore. Everyone Lost trust in everything, in love, in courage, in God. Most of people didn't know that there was a prophecy. It sagte that the humanity had to pass through a century of pain and fear to realize how important freedom was. But then in the 101st Jahr four guys, with the Gift, could overthrow the government...
We decided to camp out Von a near forest with a small waterfall Von it. My burnt hair from the feuer was irritating me so I decided to wash my hair in the waterfall. The water was cold, but I didn't care. Bruno felt my hair. I smiled warmly. I sagte like I wasn't a helper " So, where are your parents?' He sagte " Well, after I was born, a witch stahl, stola my mother, killed her, and I have no dad. So I'm an orphan" I thought ' I wish he could tell, he wouldn't have to do this, he wouldn't have to tell me bad mermories.' " I Liebe you." sagte Bruno. " I Liebe a person for a person." 'Well, I'm not a person. Im a helper! Why can't Du tell? Im a helper! I Liebe a person for a person too! But you're not a person! But I Liebe you!'Bruno sagte he would go out to the forest to get get some food. After my hair was washed, I sat down. Why can't he tell I'm a helper? But then, I heard a scream in the woods. I could tell who it was.... Bruno.
this is a heads-up on a story im writing. its about this kid in highschool wh ogoes into this haunted house,then,she turns into a vampire,slowy,and people begin to notice. its awesome.
heres the charecters.
vanessa:vampire girl.
duncan:vampiers girls brother
kylie:vamps bfff.
susan:mean girl
katie:posse (mean girl)
ashle:same as katie
mom:vamps mom
dad:vamps dad
um:those are the main charecters. details i havent thought of yet.ok,so,now Du know.ok,bye!
gotta type more,you cn leave now.
jfgfgddfddfffff Vampire rule!
heres the charecters.
vanessa:vampire girl.
duncan:vampiers girls brother
kylie:vamps bfff.
susan:mean girl
katie:posse (mean girl)
ashle:same as katie
mom:vamps mom
dad:vamps dad
um:those are the main charecters. details i havent thought of yet.ok,so,now Du know.ok,bye!
gotta type more,you cn leave now.
jfgfgddfddfffff Vampire rule!