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this is an English sonnet I had to write for my English class and I need to know if it is good oder not before I Abschicken it, thank you. also the rhyme scheme is ababcdcdefefgg
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My dear Liebe Du once were a shining ray.
In my eyes Du meant the whole world to me.
Now everything about Du is a shade of gray.
Like your beauty, your emotions, and your Liebe is what I see.
However we must part onto our new paths.
Because our Liebe is coming to its new close.
Farben were a beauty but now gray spreads its wrath.
I would Liebe to feel again but now it’s a ghost.
Our Liebe has left this earth for old times’ sake.
But when our Liebe left it took Du along too.
Sadly it left me with all this heartache.
Dying Liebe was something I wish I had clues to
If someone told me Liebe would never be easy
I would have chosen another path that’s breezy
posted by irena83
Dreams,
crashed and faded
Von the fate
that follows
the land
on which
you're standing.


Dreams
are dead...


Fighting for
better days
now seems so
vainly,
everything went
wrong.


Dreams are
broken
in so many nights
that echo
along with
dust of past.


Put yourself
together
and hold on
to something
good,
Du might survive,
Du might escape
from the fate
that follows
the land
on which
you're standing.


Days are black
and cold,
nights spent
in despair
and thinking.
Your fate is
bounded to
the land
on which
you're standing.
posted by EllentheStrange
So Long and Goodnight

Please,please hold me tight
I am not ready for a broken wings flight
With the sun oh so bright
So long and goodnight
One last vampire bite
You are the one that's right
We sink into the night
So long and goodnight
With skin like snow white
The Vampire will fight
Please keep me in your sight
So long and goodnight
Don't let them give me a fright
I know they just might
The feuer is going to ignite
So long and goodnight
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Long Vor Before I Died

Long Vor before I died I ripped the wings from my spine
For doing this I fell quickly,swiftly into the...
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posted by SkyHedgehog
(WARNING! Sonic the Hedgehog fanfic XD)

5 years ago...

A young ebony hedgehog walked along the ufer of the smaragd Coast. Her crimson red eyes focused on the rolling waves. She always felt calm around the water. Suddenly, a large boom sounded behind the hedgehog, causing her knees to buckle. "What was that?!" A figure in the distance started towards her. "Get out of here! Quick!" it called. The ebony hedgehog felt the ground shake violently. "Move! Now!" The figure disappeared in thin air. "Hey!" The hedgehog felt something grab her hand.


5 years later...

"Move it, Sky! You're gonna make us late!"...
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posted by dragonrider
That same Tag - Eric's perspective

Oh Jeez...Why did she have to point me out to her friends? I wasn't interesting. They know that I had been watching her for months.
To stop meeting her gaze and being embarrassed I hid myself in a book hoping that I would stop being embarrassed.
"Hey Eric Du must be really into that book," My friend Tom sagte to me as he sat down across from me.
Maybe not. I put the book down a bit "Oh yeah it's great. Hey do Du have girls staring at you?" I asked him
His face lit up and he smirked "Oh yeah it's great. I get asked out all the time," he said
I frowned "Nobody...
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posted by problematic124
Okay so recently I thought why don't I tell what i think about some things so let's get this party started.

A few weeks Vor my class had to pick a quote/lyric that meant something. So i googled it and found some nice Zitate from my good buddy Albert Einstein. We all know him. Anyway this is what i found:
"Gravitation is not responsible for people falling in love."
And as soon as i read that I just went awwwww. I mean is that not one of the best Liebe Zitate ever.
Really spoke to me i just loved it! And ever since then haven't forgot. What do Du think of this quote.

So Weiter to the whole Zeigen and...
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posted by numnumyellow67
Chapter 1
The District

I quietly and quickly pick the katniss plant's roots. Have to hurry home, oder at least the ruined building I call my home. Living a destroyed old district, Du kind of get used to the idea of having to hurry back to ruined buildings, before the rats and bugs decide to settle into your so called home.I start on my way back, when I see a plump rabbit, just watching me desperately pick the roots, while coated in mud. This annoys me, and with one schnell, swift movement, I messer the fat fool from afar. A direct hit. Perfect. I've been working on my messer throwing skills, and got a lucky...
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posted by greenstergirl
Pain. Fear. Hatred. These things is what my life was full of. Love. Laughter. Happiness. I have none of these things. I used to though. I had a great Mom and Dad. We lived in a small house on the sandy shores of a strand in California. I had a small furry Labrador that would beg for any Essen he could get his soft paws on. Usually it was only broccoli.

That life doesn't seem amazing. Well....it still was. The nights my family and I had Von the crackling feuer after a dip in the ocean water were my favorite. My mother would sit on the green chair in the corner and braid my long red hair that everyone...
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posted by starfire1712
This is our the land where we live
What we have we won’t give
Up to any without a fight
Our ancestors gave us this birth right
We just want to live in peace
But still the battles will not cease
Until we’re driven from our home
Then we would be left to roam
And settle in some other place
oder wiped out with no trace
Our names they wouldn’t know
So we prepare to meet our foe
The tribal headdress worn with pride
And paint upon our skin to hide
Who they face upon the field
Armed with arrows, spear & shield
Seen as men within a crowd
Surging forth we holler aloud
No fear from us will be shown
As they meet the unknown
Warriors not afraid to die
Fighting for our cause we try
To save our land & family
So our tribe can be free
To live as we choose to do
So let battle now ensue
posted by stopbullying
Chapter 2
An odd man stepped out of the car and instantly I knew who it was. It was the man that came into the Shop during my shift. He stalked me all the way down here and now he was standing in front of me. I wanted to scream because of the scary feeling I got from look in his eyes but I found no voice. I was stupid to go to the outer edges of the park where almost nobody was. And the Sekunde I could find a breath his hand was over my mouth and I was thrown into the back of a car that was cold and wet. I could barely hear the voices in the front of the car and I wanted to know where I was going....
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Should A Writer Share Her First Draft With Family & Friends? Von E.K. Prescott via www.FilmCourage.com.
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posted by Epetrus
someone mentioned your name today. It wafted over to me like the smell of spicy perfume - pleasant at first, but one that stings in the long run. My subconscious picked it up, without me noticing and, I must admit, it took me a few tenths of a Sekunde to dig up your file in my brain. I seemed to forget who Du were for that short amount of time. For that brief, innocent period, I was unaware. The name could have been from years and years ago, it could have been a name I had gegeben to a welpe many years back, the name of a plush toy, the name carved in a bus stop bench. A name that I had known,...
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posted by ivoryphills
I lived in my cold dark world for my entire life.
Feeble, absentminded, indifferent, and apathetic are what I am
After shunning the outside world for all its transgression towards me.
I survived through "drifting through life": doing what I am told, agreeing to whatever argument I find myself in, keeping whatever opinion I hold to myself
so that the situation I'm in will be over
and I can get back to my shell, my refuge
My world.
My world, my sanctuary,
my safe, sicher haven until an intruder tried to break in
My mother telling me to let her and my "loved ones" in.
What do I do?
What do I do?
The panic sets in;...
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posted by brease1121
THE COUNCIL-2-



CHAPTER 2

"Mr. Smith! Your tee is ready!" Parker's smiling face appeared out the sliding glass door, as she called to Mr. Smith. Du could see the sea breeze that had collected on her face from being outside, all glassy and hot.Her long arms wiped it away and she turned around, her long braid whipping in the wind.


The tabelle was set and ready for tea. Her face shone in accomplishment. She never really had set a table. When Mr.Smith came through the door he took a sitz at the tabelle and nibbled on a scone that Parker had made fresh.

"Is it alright? I know that I've never really...
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posted by pugglelover2000
They finally got to The Skating Place."Well,do Du want me to go home?"Asked Josie"No,you're fine.Now lets go."Laura replied.They walked up to the door and peered in.Rachel and Jake were out in the middle of the rink holding hands.

Laura opened the door and went in.Josie ran in after her and followed here over to get roller skates."Size 9,please,and for my sister,size 7 in women."The clerk nodded and went to get the shoes."What are Du going to do?"asked Josie.

"Well,I was going to go schlittschuh, skate closer to Jake,and hope he dumps Rachel in the trash,and then he goes out with me."replied Laura.Josie...
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posted by QueridaPantufa
Prologue

I didn’t know what else I could do. I did everything they wanted me to do, but it wasn’t enough. It was never enough. So they kicked me out. I only had time to pack my bag and leave. I had no place to go, no person to turn to. I was alone. That first night I spent sleeping outside on a bench. I felt the cold spread true my body like a thousand knifes. When the sun began the rise, I got up and went on my way out of this horrible place. I was 17-years-old and I had been in six different foster homes. I didn’t want to be put in another foster Home again, so I decided to leave for...
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added by greengirl8
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