this is an English sonnet I had to write for my English class and I need to know if it is good oder not before I Abschicken it, thank you. also the rhyme scheme is ababcdcdefefgg
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My dear Liebe Du once were a shining ray.
In my eyes Du meant the whole world to me.
Now everything about Du is a shade of gray.
Like your beauty, your emotions, and your Liebe is what I see.
However we must part onto our new paths.
Because our Liebe is coming to its new close.
Farben were a beauty but now gray spreads its wrath.
I would Liebe to feel again but now it’s a ghost.
Our Liebe has left this earth for old times’ sake.
But when our Liebe left it took Du along too.
Sadly it left me with all this heartache.
Dying Liebe was something I wish I had clues to
If someone told me Liebe would never be easy
I would have chosen another path that’s breezy
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My dear Liebe Du once were a shining ray.
In my eyes Du meant the whole world to me.
Now everything about Du is a shade of gray.
Like your beauty, your emotions, and your Liebe is what I see.
However we must part onto our new paths.
Because our Liebe is coming to its new close.
Farben were a beauty but now gray spreads its wrath.
I would Liebe to feel again but now it’s a ghost.
Our Liebe has left this earth for old times’ sake.
But when our Liebe left it took Du along too.
Sadly it left me with all this heartache.
Dying Liebe was something I wish I had clues to
If someone told me Liebe would never be easy
I would have chosen another path that’s breezy