this is an English sonnet I had to write for my English class and I need to know if it is good oder not before I Abschicken it, thank you. also the rhyme scheme is ababcdcdefefgg
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My dear Liebe Du once were a shining ray.
In my eyes Du meant the whole world to me.
Now everything about Du is a shade of gray.
Like your beauty, your emotions, and your Liebe is what I see.
However we must part onto our new paths.
Because our Liebe is coming to its new close.
Farben were a beauty but now gray spreads its wrath.
I would Liebe to feel again but now it’s a ghost.
Our Liebe has left this earth for old times’ sake.
But when our Liebe left it took Du along too.
Sadly it left me with all this heartache.
Dying Liebe was something I wish I had clues to
If someone told me Liebe would never be easy
I would have chosen another path that’s breezy
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My dear Liebe Du once were a shining ray.
In my eyes Du meant the whole world to me.
Now everything about Du is a shade of gray.
Like your beauty, your emotions, and your Liebe is what I see.
However we must part onto our new paths.
Because our Liebe is coming to its new close.
Farben were a beauty but now gray spreads its wrath.
I would Liebe to feel again but now it’s a ghost.
Our Liebe has left this earth for old times’ sake.
But when our Liebe left it took Du along too.
Sadly it left me with all this heartache.
Dying Liebe was something I wish I had clues to
If someone told me Liebe would never be easy
I would have chosen another path that’s breezy
I will remember Du always.
Will Du remember me?
That is a Frage for Du to answer,
And not me.
I promise
That I will always
Keep the flame of memory alive.
The fun that we had will never
Be forgotten.
Even on foggy evenings,
The darkest of nights,
Du will always be in my heart.
For I know that Du will help me
Keep the flame of memory blazing
Always.
All the good times that we had,
All the fun that we had,
All the tears that we let out,
All the anger we let out
Will never be wasted.
Because every Minute of it
Is in my heart.
I will tend to the fire
Every night,
Recollecting all the memories we have
Knowing that the flame of memory
Is the brightest flame of all
And it will blaze on.
Will Du remember me?
That is a Frage for Du to answer,
And not me.
I promise
That I will always
Keep the flame of memory alive.
The fun that we had will never
Be forgotten.
Even on foggy evenings,
The darkest of nights,
Du will always be in my heart.
For I know that Du will help me
Keep the flame of memory blazing
Always.
All the good times that we had,
All the fun that we had,
All the tears that we let out,
All the anger we let out
Will never be wasted.
Because every Minute of it
Is in my heart.
I will tend to the fire
Every night,
Recollecting all the memories we have
Knowing that the flame of memory
Is the brightest flame of all
And it will blaze on.
