Sonic Fan Characters Article: Sonic Fan character guide:Gary-stus and mary-sues(Fun Gist Version)

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Sonic Fan character guide:Gary-stus and mary-sues(Fun Gist Version)

posted by Mapware3640

Ok,we know Du want to skip the mumbo jumbo and get straight to the information,WE CAN DO THAT!!!

Gary-stu=unfairly powerful unbeatable cheater

A gary-stu is
1.Too powerful,almost/is godly
2.Always wins,unfair.
3.Never suffers hardships a true warrior would face
4.A basic DBZ rip-off right of the bat
5.Too attractive/Too sexy(As pointed out Von takthefox)

The gist is to balance out your characters powers and skills,If Du make him/her a powerhouse,Give him/her a obvious weak spot/poor defenses.If Du make him/her a living shield,Weaken there powers.yin and yang.as for "Getting there way",Sometimes its wise to throw a plot hole(E.G.:The character gets killed,the character looses there powers,the character gets horribly wounded,Ect.)Be fair.

Mary-sue=ANNOYING DAMSEL IN DISTRESS!!!

A mary-sue is
1."OH SAVE MEEE!!!HELP!!!"
2.Every feminists worst nightmare.XD
3.Has no backbone what so ever
4.Just...UGH, ABOMINABLE!

Basically a annoying female character that is constantly captured and relies on her "Man" to save them(E.G.:Amy rose,princess peach,kairi,ect.),This basically sets women's equal rights movement back a hundred years.

And we are done,want to know more?I direct Du to darkhorn's guide oder takthefox's guide(Please note:Its LONG!!!)

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Info on Dark Blade and Flame Blizzard

posted by zutaradragon

Boots with Asylum Straps

this is all the info on my characters that maybe isn't clear from the pictures i drew...so i'll Liste it here (Note: this does NOT include any background info. that's a compleatly different story)
Dark Blade (Hedgehog)
Fashion Sense: Pt. 1; Clothes
he has a punk style and always wares leather combat boots, usually with Asylum Straps and some sort of metal in places (like studs oder a metal skull) his pants usually have visible stitches and multiple colors, some call them patch pants. he never wares a hemd, shirt but always has a jacke on. from time 2 time he wares different gloves depending on how he...

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Geon chapter 2

posted by TakTheFox

The Scenario: Escape

“Where were we?”

“In a bad place?”

The Place: Room-444-X-9 of Base X.

“What happened?”

“You were captured”

The Date: January 2nd, 5500, 4th-world

“Who are you?”

“… a friend.”

Chapter two

*beep* went the intercom button.

“What is it?” The commander asked through his com-link to the Unit in the capsule-room.

“There is a green button here. Do Du know what it does?” The Unit-girl asked in an accent that sounded Russian now.

“Yes… but Du should not touch it.”

“*sigh* Very well. Not that it’s any of my business, but why is the… being in this...

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For the people of Mobius Academy

posted by TakTheFox

Mobius Academy idea

So I was thinking that since Mobius Academy (restart) has been so successful, we could make a Fan fic about it.
What would happen would be that one oder two people would write it, while the others supply info about the Forum (this would include actually Schreiben about what happened in the forum, and not just starting from scratch). We would have to rewrite some things, but I think that most of it would probably be very usable.

If nominations are open, I would like to be one of the writers. I think there should be two for one reason in particular; There are multiple happenings...

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Cursed Friends

posted by blazecat713

It was a dark and scary night four little girls were in a dark dungeon where a witch had put a curse on the girls.

After the girls have been cursed they've been orphans their names were : flare,jewl,frostene,and sharmaine. They were quiet little girls and they have unique powers flare has feuer power jewl has spy power frostene has ice power and sharmaine has speed power. So every Tag and night nobody would want to adopt the girls because of their curse so 10 years later the orphanage was out of business and the girls left and took care of themselves.

Flare was just walking down the straße and...

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Offspring Sequence 2

posted by TakTheFox

Sequence Two

One Monat later…

Melik had finally gegeben up on Reesa, oder at least she thought he had. The occasional wave was the only acknowledgement that the two of them had. Had he really ended his mad quest, oder was he simply taking a break? Either way, Reesa was very relieved.

The white mobian decided to reward this Tag Von taking a nice walk down the park, in the mist Thursday morning, when the air was nice and refreshing. She enjoyed the sounds of the chirping, the fountains, and the gras, grass swaying in the slight breezes. It was peaceful.

She munched on a frosty apfel, apple as she took her stroll,...

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Azealia the Rabbit: Bio

posted by -MissRarity-

Azealia the Rabbit

Name: Azealia
Age: 16
Worst Enemy: Shadow the Hedgehog (her ex)
Powers: Super speed, martial arts
Looks: Like picture
Story: Azealia gets kidnapped Von an unnamed creature (to be revealed) and has tests done to enhance her skills. The tests were done to turn her into a super weapon that could help the creatures win in the war. She escapes there clutches but was left with a burning scar on her left shoulder. When she escapes she meets Shadow the Hedgehog. They soon datum but break up soon after when Shadow betrays her and gives her away to the enemies.

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Two Little Surprises-part9

posted by night-vamphog

Few hours later Typhon and Ravage come Home from school. ''Mom! Dad! We're home!'' Ravage yells once they walk in. He gets no reply.
    Typhon sets to bag down on the floor and walks into the living room. ''Anyone home?'' once again. No reply. ''Think their outside?''
    ''I'll go check,'' Ravage walks to the back of the house and opens the back door. ''No one is back here,'' he looks around. Still no one. Walks back in.
    ''Where could they be,'' walks into the küche and see's the helmet. Picks it up and gasps. ''Ravage. I think...

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NIKKI'S ADVENTURE:PT. 1

posted by crazyasfred

[It's shadows birthday and Nikki has planned a surprise partys for him everyone is hiding and Shadow's about to come in]

Nikki:(whispering)Ok everyone find a hiding spot and be quiet.(hides behind a potted plant)
Knuckles:(loudly whispers)Uhhh..Nikki
Nikki:shhh.What?
Knuckles:uh.nevermind. It can wait
Nikki:good,oops (turns off the lights)better
Sonic:(looks out the window)Shadows coming(goes back to his spot)
[Shadow unlocks the door and comes in]
everyone:(comes out and yells surprise)
Shadow:wow thanks
Nikki:Happy birthday shads (kisses him on the cheek) Look what i've got Du (reaches in her bag and takes out a blue chaos emarald)
Shadow:(looks at it in shock) Nikki how did Du get it?
Nikki: let me tell Du it was anything but easy...
END OF PT. 1

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Tales Of The Septonites (Part 2)

posted by numnumyellow67

Stranded in open Weltraum inside an escape pod, Serios is thinking. Where could Mugen be?
"I haven't seen her in six years" she sagte to herself.
"Where in this huge galaxy could she be? Du know, considering she is still in this dimension".
Serios and Mugen only met one time when they we're little. Serios was only six, and Mugen was four. They liked each other enough, but haven't seen each other since. Because she was buried in her own thoughts, she almost had a herz attack when the alarm went off.
"WARNING! WARNING!" it announced. "ESCAPE POD FAILING! HEADED TOWARD MOBIUS!".
"Mobius? I remember that...

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Guardien Angel – Jäger der Finsternis – Jäger der Finsternis

posted by TakTheFox

Guardian Angel

“So much has happened. Such… terrible things. First Commander St. John… betrayed the Freedom Fighters, and helped Ixis Naugus take control, AS KING! How could everyone be so gullible? Did they forget all the terrible things that Naugus had done before? I haven’t. I just came back from seeing Commander D’coolette. He’s… very hurt. I only got a glimpse, because the nurse sagte that she didn’t want any Mehr people crashing their heads into his bed… which was kind of weird. The time-traveling hedgehog was here a little bit ago. Silver is what I think they called him....

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Nitros' New Bio

posted by gyrothehedgehog

Name: Nitro the Fox
Age:believed to be 12 *is immortal*
Gender: Male
Powers: Can go out of his physical body and into peoples' heads
Weakness: When out of his body, he basically goes into a coma and cannot Bewegen his physical body at all, he can only speak
Personality: A tad sadistic, yet he is loyal to his closest friends. He may become giddy in the most terrifying of situations and oddly unhappy when he can't do something disturbing.
Eye/fur color: Nitro is a dark brown fuchs with one red eye, one green eye and two snakes to serve as tails
Outfit: none, he prefers to just wear a Gold chain around his...

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.:White dresses can't stay white:. Zudorio

posted by -Wednesday-

[Warning: Minor gore and blood.]

Mother was supposed to be bringing Home a new dress for me.
She sagte it was supposed to be white and beautiful and I would look absolutely lovely.
That isn't how it happened though.
I still looked lovely, but in a different way.

I sat in my play room, surrounded Von my many dolls. My dress was a deep purple velvet. The was a ribbon to match in my hair. All my Puppen were expensive dresses, like me. My older brother was in the room down the wall. He hasn't come out for days. The maids had to bring him his food, but he hasn't eaten it. I worry for him. The whole house...

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:.Ever Lasting.: ( The Journal of Arisu Xyris )

posted by Near-

Take it from me, I'm just a Magilancer who almost destroyed the whole world. When monsters colide with the real world, Du can't rest until everyone and everything is safe. Yes, I have to admit that I didn't exactly keep everyone and everything safe, but atleast I kept everything from blowing up.
Not exactly the normalest Tag for me, oder any other wizard. It was gloomy and quiet, the way I liked it. A lot of buildings were broken and qracked. One just happened to have an unbroken mirror and some tape. I walked in through the corridor and broke the mirror. I use the tape and shard of glass to...

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iceyXgyro

posted by gyrothehedgehog

The blow was about to come. I knew that just Von looking at his face, twisted in anger, that the hand was going to come down on me. It did, as predicted and left behind a black and blue mark on my cheek. “Don’t lie to me, Gyro. What were Du doing with Rex?” I clung to my aching cheek, cradling it with one hand. “It was nothing. All I did was talk to him.” Pain shattered into my other cheek, leaving behind a red mark. “Didn’t I say not to lie to me? Now tell me what really happened.” His words were clipped and low, and his red eyes were darker then usual as extremely light blue...

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Scorch the Werehog- Chapter 5

posted by Scorch-Werehog

    As we followed Earthquake, we noticed some things in the trees that we had never seen before. “I think these are called Chaos Spears,” sagte Alymere.
    “Well, how would we know that?” asked Blaster.
    Please just shut up! I thought. I walked faster trying to see what was ahead of us. Then, a Chaos Spear past my head, just missing my ear. “What the...”
    In the distance, we heard yelling.
    “What is going on over there?” I asked.
    “You’re about...

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Scorch the Werehog- Chapter 4

posted by Scorch-Werehog

“Where did Silver go?” asked Blaster.
    “I’m right in front of you.”
    “No, you’re not.”
    Then we say his form come out of nowhere. “Now do Du believe me?”
    “Well, yes, but I didn’t think Du could turn invisible.”
    He laughed. “He can’t. But I can.” His form changed from a hedgehog to a chameleon. His tail was long, he had a single horn in the middle of his face, his scales were green, and his eyes were a sapphire blue.
    “And you...

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Scorch the Werehog- Chapter 3

posted by Scorch-Werehog

    “What the hell?!” I whispered. Von the looks on Earthquake and Blasters’ face, they were thinking the same this.
    “Hey, we at least know it isn’t us, right?” Blaster asked.
    “He’s right, Du know.”
    “I know, I know. I just don’t like when he’s right, Earthquake.”
    Then, the one that Blight called Gun washed his pelz off as well. It instantly became a vibrant purple, a scare over his right eye, and sharp teeth.
    “That looks really scary,”...

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Jenny The Hedehog

posted by SaraTheDog

Name:Jenny
Age:18
Gender:Female
Animal:Hedghog

Favs
Song:Get On The Floor
Color:Hot pink
Flavor:Strawberries

Adictions
Drugs?:Always.
Smokeing?:Yup.
Other:Yup.

Hates:
People who tell her what to do.
Books.
The smell of failure on herself

Fav sayings:
Treat others the way Du DON'T want to be treated.

Talents
Picking locks.
Escapeing from jail without anyone knowing for months.
Singing.

What to do for free time:
-.- Get drunk.
Sleep.
Insult books.
Insult people.
Hangout with friends...Or Zufällig people she dosn't know.

Other:She is just about always drunk.Also Du can never really stop getting in trouble.

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Scorch the Werehog- Epilogue

posted by Scorch-Werehog

It was a cool Tag in October when a hedgehog Von the name of Scorch was born. He has the power of fire, and some strength. But once a echidna Von the name of Lycantic found out about Scorch, he wanted to kill him. So, when Scorch was about a Monat old, Lycantic went to go and kill him. But his brother Frost wasn't too happy about what he was about to do. So when Lycantic went to go kill Scorch, Frost followed him. Frost knew that Lycantic would use a death spell on Scorch so he put a spell on Lycantic so he would do a completely different spell on him. The spell that he did instead made Scorch...

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Hamano's bio

posted by -Wednesday-

Character Chart
Character's full name: Hamano Suiyoubi Nevermore
Reason oder meaning of name: none
Character's nickname: God oder Nevermore.
Reason for nickname: She is a god and Nevermore is her adoptive mother’s last name.
Birth date: October 16th
Gender: Female
Theme: Don’t Stop - InnerPartySystem

Physical appearance
Age: Unknown
How old does he/she appear: 20
Weight: 28 lbs.
Height: 4”8
Body build: Slim, but large thighs and large breasts.
Shape of face: n/a.
Eye colour: Brown.
Glasses oder contacts: Amber colored contacts.
Skin tone: Pale.
Distinguishing marks: Horns, Arrow pointed kreuz tattoo, cat like...