Ok,we know Du want to skip the mumbo jumbo and get straight to the information,WE CAN DO THAT!!!
Gary-stu=unfairly powerful unbeatable cheater
A gary-stu is
1.Too powerful,almost/is godly
2.Always wins,unfair.
3.Never suffers hardships a true warrior would face
4.A basic DBZ rip-off right of the bat
5.Too attractive/Too sexy(As pointed out Von takthefox)
The gist is to balance out your characters powers and skills,If Du make him/her a powerhouse,Give him/her a obvious weak spot/poor defenses.If Du make him/her a living shield,Weaken there powers.yin and yang.as for "Getting there way",Sometimes its wise to throw a plot hole(E.G.:The character gets killed,the character looses there powers,the character gets horribly wounded,Ect.)Be fair.
Mary-sue=ANNOYING DAMSEL IN DISTRESS!!!
A mary-sue is
1."OH SAVE MEEE!!!HELP!!!"
2.Every feminists worst nightmare.XD
3.Has no backbone what so ever
4.Just...UGH, ABOMINABLE!
Basically a annoying female character that is constantly captured and relies on her "Man" to save them(E.G.:Amy rose,princess peach,kairi,ect.),This basically sets women's equal rights movement back a hundred years.
And we are done,want to know more?I direct Du to darkhorn's guide oder takthefox's guide(Please note:Its LONG!!!)
Gary-stu=unfairly powerful unbeatable cheater
A gary-stu is
1.Too powerful,almost/is godly
2.Always wins,unfair.
3.Never suffers hardships a true warrior would face
4.A basic DBZ rip-off right of the bat
5.Too attractive/Too sexy(As pointed out Von takthefox)
The gist is to balance out your characters powers and skills,If Du make him/her a powerhouse,Give him/her a obvious weak spot/poor defenses.If Du make him/her a living shield,Weaken there powers.yin and yang.as for "Getting there way",Sometimes its wise to throw a plot hole(E.G.:The character gets killed,the character looses there powers,the character gets horribly wounded,Ect.)Be fair.
Mary-sue=ANNOYING DAMSEL IN DISTRESS!!!
A mary-sue is
1."OH SAVE MEEE!!!HELP!!!"
2.Every feminists worst nightmare.XD
3.Has no backbone what so ever
4.Just...UGH, ABOMINABLE!
Basically a annoying female character that is constantly captured and relies on her "Man" to save them(E.G.:Amy rose,princess peach,kairi,ect.),This basically sets women's equal rights movement back a hundred years.
And we are done,want to know more?I direct Du to darkhorn's guide oder takthefox's guide(Please note:Its LONG!!!)
"You're misson is to recover the chaos emeralds." "ok" Ruby runs off heading towards Eggman's base."who's that" ruby thinks. As a Blue hedgehog races by. "It don't matter" As ruby sneaks into one of the vents. Crawling until the she sees the glow of the red chaos emerald. "It's like taking Süßigkeiten form a baby" ruby jumps out of the vent and takes the chaos emerald. As she gets ready to leave a two tailed fuchs walks in. "huh, who are you" "I'm ruby, don't bother me" she jumps into the vent before tails can get her. "Get back here ruby" Ruby escapes Eggman's base and run torwds the spy HQ. "so Du say a red hedgehog took the chaos emerald" says sonic "yes, she escaped before I could get her" says tails angerliy "let go after her,sonic" says cream "I'm back" "Good job, angent ruby"says Emma the HQ leader "I have a question, who's the yellow two tailed fox" ruby demands "tails the fuchs he travels with sonic the hedgehog" "tell me more"
I had seen so many sites, about:
Bad Sonic Fan Characters
And there is so many critiques about EVERYTHING and EVERYONE designs of them.
So, I had come to this point of having 'good character'
No character isnt perfect.
If the owner loves it, that's all the matters.
Du can have a detailed character, if Du want so.
Du can have simply character, if Du want so.
There is only one think Du must remember:
Make the character's Design fitting in her/him personality and his/her story.
Thank you.
Have a good night, I'm off to sleep now. >8'I
Bad Sonic Fan Characters
And there is so many critiques about EVERYTHING and EVERYONE designs of them.
So, I had come to this point of having 'good character'
No character isnt perfect.
If the owner loves it, that's all the matters.
Du can have a detailed character, if Du want so.
Du can have simply character, if Du want so.
There is only one think Du must remember:
Make the character's Design fitting in her/him personality and his/her story.
Thank you.
Have a good night, I'm off to sleep now. >8'I
Ok, so I know a hedgehog whose life is dark... simple this story is about that hedgehog and their long, lost, forgotten life. How the good times turn to simply bad times. And that I know their life. How do I know this? I'm not a stalker nor a watch of life. This hedgehog is me... Shadey Grey the last dark user... the last hope of the planet Dark/Light. First off, dark users are like chaos users, they use dark power oder darkness control and so do chaos users... they use chaos control. I never cared for anyone... not even you. Only that I Lost my family... my friends... everyone I knew and loved. And I seeked revenge for them... only to find new friends. Friends that could handle my anger... I become calm for some time. Yet, I still kill people for my family and friends...for anything I can remember.
-Shadey Grey, writer.
(Thank-you for Lesen this intro, tell me if I should write this oder not. I start Weiter week. 1/12/12)
-Shadey Grey, writer.
(Thank-you for Lesen this intro, tell me if I should write this oder not. I start Weiter week. 1/12/12)