Ok,we know Du want to skip the mumbo jumbo and get straight to the information,WE CAN DO THAT!!!
Gary-stu=unfairly powerful unbeatable cheater
A gary-stu is
1.Too powerful,almost/is godly
2.Always wins,unfair.
3.Never suffers hardships a true warrior would face
4.A basic DBZ rip-off right of the bat
5.Too attractive/Too sexy(As pointed out Von takthefox)
The gist is to balance out your characters powers and skills,If Du make him/her a powerhouse,Give him/her a obvious weak spot/poor defenses.If Du make him/her a living shield,Weaken there powers.yin and yang.as for "Getting there way",Sometimes its wise to throw a plot hole(E.G.:The character gets killed,the character looses there powers,the character gets horribly wounded,Ect.)Be fair.
Mary-sue=ANNOYING DAMSEL IN DISTRESS!!!
A mary-sue is
1."OH SAVE MEEE!!!HELP!!!"
2.Every feminists worst nightmare.XD
3.Has no backbone what so ever
4.Just...UGH, ABOMINABLE!
Basically a annoying female character that is constantly captured and relies on her "Man" to save them(E.G.:Amy rose,princess peach,kairi,ect.),This basically sets women's equal rights movement back a hundred years.
And we are done,want to know more?I direct Du to darkhorn's guide oder takthefox's guide(Please note:Its LONG!!!)
Gary-stu=unfairly powerful unbeatable cheater
A gary-stu is
1.Too powerful,almost/is godly
2.Always wins,unfair.
3.Never suffers hardships a true warrior would face
4.A basic DBZ rip-off right of the bat
5.Too attractive/Too sexy(As pointed out Von takthefox)
The gist is to balance out your characters powers and skills,If Du make him/her a powerhouse,Give him/her a obvious weak spot/poor defenses.If Du make him/her a living shield,Weaken there powers.yin and yang.as for "Getting there way",Sometimes its wise to throw a plot hole(E.G.:The character gets killed,the character looses there powers,the character gets horribly wounded,Ect.)Be fair.
Mary-sue=ANNOYING DAMSEL IN DISTRESS!!!
A mary-sue is
1."OH SAVE MEEE!!!HELP!!!"
2.Every feminists worst nightmare.XD
3.Has no backbone what so ever
4.Just...UGH, ABOMINABLE!
Basically a annoying female character that is constantly captured and relies on her "Man" to save them(E.G.:Amy rose,princess peach,kairi,ect.),This basically sets women's equal rights movement back a hundred years.
And we are done,want to know more?I direct Du to darkhorn's guide oder takthefox's guide(Please note:Its LONG!!!)
Helu.
I, personally, think I have too many fcs to use. There's too many even to remember. So, I've decided to either give them away oder to get rid of them completely.
Ones I'm definitely keeping include:
Amber Prower
Kyoko Otonashi
River Spark
and their evil forms and families (but not all of Amber's family is staying. She's got 12, mainly dead, siblings I don't do anything with, and Victoria's only gonna be referenced, as she's possibly getting cut.)
So, I'd like to know...
Are there any other characters you'd prefer me keeping? oder is anyone interested in adopting characters?
For adoptions, Du need to send me a picture you've done of the charrie Du want, and I'll choose if there's Mehr than one person that wants them.
Thanks for your time :3
CLT
I, personally, think I have too many fcs to use. There's too many even to remember. So, I've decided to either give them away oder to get rid of them completely.
Ones I'm definitely keeping include:
Amber Prower
Kyoko Otonashi
River Spark
and their evil forms and families (but not all of Amber's family is staying. She's got 12, mainly dead, siblings I don't do anything with, and Victoria's only gonna be referenced, as she's possibly getting cut.)
So, I'd like to know...
Are there any other characters you'd prefer me keeping? oder is anyone interested in adopting characters?
For adoptions, Du need to send me a picture you've done of the charrie Du want, and I'll choose if there's Mehr than one person that wants them.
Thanks for your time :3
CLT
Blood's Past
Chapter three
A Strange Event
(I guess I now have to call Miles, Blood)
Three years later...
"Dad I don't know if Du can hear me but yesterday was Zoey's and my birthday we're both thirteen come on Dad Du can fight this..." Blood said, "Im sorry visiting hours are done Du will have to leave" sagte one of the nurses "give me a second, Dad I Liebe Du please just wake up, okay Im leaving" Blood walks out the hospital, Zoey walks up to Blood "Visiting Dad?" she sagte "yeah still nothing" Blood's left hand electrifys then stops "okay what was that?" he looks at his hand "Weird"
Chapter three
A Strange Event
(I guess I now have to call Miles, Blood)
Three years later...
"Dad I don't know if Du can hear me but yesterday was Zoey's and my birthday we're both thirteen come on Dad Du can fight this..." Blood said, "Im sorry visiting hours are done Du will have to leave" sagte one of the nurses "give me a second, Dad I Liebe Du please just wake up, okay Im leaving" Blood walks out the hospital, Zoey walks up to Blood "Visiting Dad?" she sagte "yeah still nothing" Blood's left hand electrifys then stops "okay what was that?" he looks at his hand "Weird"
