Ok,we know Du want to skip the mumbo jumbo and get straight to the information,WE CAN DO THAT!!!
Gary-stu=unfairly powerful unbeatable cheater
A gary-stu is
1.Too powerful,almost/is godly
2.Always wins,unfair.
3.Never suffers hardships a true warrior would face
4.A basic DBZ rip-off right of the bat
5.Too attractive/Too sexy(As pointed out Von takthefox)
The gist is to balance out your characters powers and skills,If Du make him/her a powerhouse,Give him/her a obvious weak spot/poor defenses.If Du make him/her a living shield,Weaken there powers.yin and yang.as for "Getting there way",Sometimes its wise to throw a plot hole(E.G.:The character gets killed,the character looses there powers,the character gets horribly wounded,Ect.)Be fair.
Mary-sue=ANNOYING DAMSEL IN DISTRESS!!!
A mary-sue is
1."OH SAVE MEEE!!!HELP!!!"
2.Every feminists worst nightmare.XD
3.Has no backbone what so ever
4.Just...UGH, ABOMINABLE!
Basically a annoying female character that is constantly captured and relies on her "Man" to save them(E.G.:Amy rose,princess peach,kairi,ect.),This basically sets women's equal rights movement back a hundred years.
And we are done,want to know more?I direct Du to darkhorn's guide oder takthefox's guide(Please note:Its LONG!!!)
Gary-stu=unfairly powerful unbeatable cheater
A gary-stu is
1.Too powerful,almost/is godly
2.Always wins,unfair.
3.Never suffers hardships a true warrior would face
4.A basic DBZ rip-off right of the bat
5.Too attractive/Too sexy(As pointed out Von takthefox)
The gist is to balance out your characters powers and skills,If Du make him/her a powerhouse,Give him/her a obvious weak spot/poor defenses.If Du make him/her a living shield,Weaken there powers.yin and yang.as for "Getting there way",Sometimes its wise to throw a plot hole(E.G.:The character gets killed,the character looses there powers,the character gets horribly wounded,Ect.)Be fair.
Mary-sue=ANNOYING DAMSEL IN DISTRESS!!!
A mary-sue is
1."OH SAVE MEEE!!!HELP!!!"
2.Every feminists worst nightmare.XD
3.Has no backbone what so ever
4.Just...UGH, ABOMINABLE!
Basically a annoying female character that is constantly captured and relies on her "Man" to save them(E.G.:Amy rose,princess peach,kairi,ect.),This basically sets women's equal rights movement back a hundred years.
And we are done,want to know more?I direct Du to darkhorn's guide oder takthefox's guide(Please note:Its LONG!!!)
The fall air was quickly turning into frost bitten, I had not long before my clan mates would start passing from diseases from the white season. The wind chill made it seem like -60 degrees, but I had to help. I just had to. My body ached to be sandwhiched between two deer furs and near an open fire. I heard a gun shot ring through the snow. Dragon hunters. I had to get back before they found me, oder either way, somebody'd die.
Too late. A couple of dragon hunters armed with almost every gun, kreuz bow and sword weapon imaginable. I tried flying off with my ice blue wings, but I failed, a hunter shot at my left wing with a midnight black kreuz bow. I started to fall, but I started running as soon as I hit the snow, carrying a fisch between my fangs. How the clan leader would be so unpleased frightened me, but not as much as the hunters.
Too late. A couple of dragon hunters armed with almost every gun, kreuz bow and sword weapon imaginable. I tried flying off with my ice blue wings, but I failed, a hunter shot at my left wing with a midnight black kreuz bow. I started to fall, but I started running as soon as I hit the snow, carrying a fisch between my fangs. How the clan leader would be so unpleased frightened me, but not as much as the hunters.
Hey ppl! I'm back and here is episode 2 part 2! Now let's start!
Icefire:Hello Molly & Jake
Molly:Hello icefire.
Jake:Hello.
Icefire:So Du are -
Molly:Jason go up to your room.
Jason:Yes mom.=(
(Jason goes up to his room)
Icefire:So Du to are wanted?
Molly:No. We where famed.
Jake:And we need Du to take care of Jason & Crystal.
Icefire:Ok.
(crystal starts to cry)
Molly:It's ok crystal just shhhh..........
Ok I'm just going to skip to the sad part!
Ok it's night time and some ppl get inside the house and try to get Molly & Jake.
Well that's all folks!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I know right!
Icefire:Hello Molly & Jake
Molly:Hello icefire.
Jake:Hello.
Icefire:So Du are -
Molly:Jason go up to your room.
Jason:Yes mom.=(
(Jason goes up to his room)
Icefire:So Du to are wanted?
Molly:No. We where famed.
Jake:And we need Du to take care of Jason & Crystal.
Icefire:Ok.
(crystal starts to cry)
Molly:It's ok crystal just shhhh..........
Ok I'm just going to skip to the sad part!
Ok it's night time and some ppl get inside the house and try to get Molly & Jake.
Well that's all folks!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I know right!
let the story begin Steve the dog is laying in the grass. Man this sucks being stuck on an island theirs nothing to do but eat and sleep i need something exciting thrilling something to get the blood pumping sagte Steve in deep thought at that moment he thought of something A PIRATE that’s it sagte Steve as he got up and started running towards town anybody got a ship he asked everybody. Finally someone gave him a makeshift floß that not even a feather would touch. well i guess this will do for now sagte Steve as he set off OK now to get to business first things first i need a crew a first mate a navigator a cook a musician a engineer and Mehr
well i guess we get first mate first i think ill set out north sagte Steve setting sail in the modern world we live in today soon he fell asleep when he woke up he was greeted Von marines...to be continued
well i guess we get first mate first i think ill set out north sagte Steve setting sail in the modern world we live in today soon he fell asleep when he woke up he was greeted Von marines...to be continued
Here's something."What was that!" Shadow said. Goes back inside."Hey Sonic I need your help outside, I heard something out there!"Shadow said."Why are Du telling me go tell that to Emily!"Sonic said."Heak no! I well give Du two reasons, 1 reason: I'm afraid she might make fun of me again, Reason 2:She want believe me.So get your but up and start walking!" Shadow said."Ok ok I'm going already and let go of me!" Sonic said."No I'm afraid that your gonna leave me."Shadow said. Outside (Again)."Can Du let go of me now?"Sonic said. "Yes now help mr find out what made that sound."Shadow said."Ok." Sonic looks behind the trash can."Hey Shadow look what I found a puppy!"Sonic said."So that was the thing that made the sound?!?"Shadow said."yep."Sonic said.
The end. This is the last one so no quishtens!
The end. This is the last one so no quishtens!
meanwhile at the lab
dr f: u see this is very bad since
brenden: wiat u made a doll of me ad it turned evil
alexa: yes we did u see wen u helped out at the lab (still need to wright that) we wanted to thank u so we dieced to make something to help u we made brenden doll
tober: took me forever to sow
alexa anyways we animated it but it dident happen to go right u see the chip we used ws sadly encripted
dr f: that colud guy seemed relible
lily: wait wait wait did u say colud
dr f: yes his name was could
brenden: where takeing this case
alexa: thank u soo much
dr f: u will need this (hands brendens doll tracker)
derreck: u made a tracker
dr f: in case this kinda thing happend
brenden come on guys lets go
team ok
to be continued
dr f: u see this is very bad since
brenden: wiat u made a doll of me ad it turned evil
alexa: yes we did u see wen u helped out at the lab (still need to wright that) we wanted to thank u so we dieced to make something to help u we made brenden doll
tober: took me forever to sow
alexa anyways we animated it but it dident happen to go right u see the chip we used ws sadly encripted
dr f: that colud guy seemed relible
lily: wait wait wait did u say colud
dr f: yes his name was could
brenden: where takeing this case
alexa: thank u soo much
dr f: u will need this (hands brendens doll tracker)
derreck: u made a tracker
dr f: in case this kinda thing happend
brenden come on guys lets go
team ok
to be continued
My first story, so, if Du wanna make suggestions, post of a Forum ill make in a bit.
The old streets eminated of fossil fuels burning, roadkill and sadness. The ally was scattered with boxes, empty glass bottles and pieces of old news paper. In the distance, a siren went off and Hunde yipped to eachother in thier own language. The streets felt cold and filled with the sorrow of the people around.
My body felt cold as ice. I longed to be warm and safe. I wished I had some money to get something to eat, but who would listen to a stray? No one. I curled up in a ball, attempting to get warm, as I drifted into a small rest.
I worried if the wrong person would find me here in this ally, alone in this cold, dark allyway. I dismissed this worry and held the arms of false hope, whispering false facts into my freezing ears.
I believed the false hope's bitterly cold arms were a sign I was alive.
The old streets eminated of fossil fuels burning, roadkill and sadness. The ally was scattered with boxes, empty glass bottles and pieces of old news paper. In the distance, a siren went off and Hunde yipped to eachother in thier own language. The streets felt cold and filled with the sorrow of the people around.
My body felt cold as ice. I longed to be warm and safe. I wished I had some money to get something to eat, but who would listen to a stray? No one. I curled up in a ball, attempting to get warm, as I drifted into a small rest.
I worried if the wrong person would find me here in this ally, alone in this cold, dark allyway. I dismissed this worry and held the arms of false hope, whispering false facts into my freezing ears.
I believed the false hope's bitterly cold arms were a sign I was alive.
