During state testing week, I had only one Tag where I saw all of my students. I had my students write a story and several of them sagte they didn’t know what to write. This student found a solution to her problem. I keep telling students if they can't think of anything then they just need to write whatever pops into their heads The following is printed with Chey’s permission. She did write a proper story after this.
I can’t find anything to write sitting in my mom’s car, where my bag was. I’m trying to figure out something to write and maybe after my little sister and older sister are done fighting, we can leave for school. But, I also have nothing to write. Wait, do Du hear that? Yea, that nothing? They’ve stopped fighting. Awesome! I wonder if we could leave? I’m ready, Chantel’s ready, Kai’s ready. Is Manny ready? Wow, I should scratch out that baby talk but I have nothing to write about, and I need at least 650 words. But, I have nothing to write about.
Oh, there goes my aunt and my cousins. “Bye.” I’ll be back I have to fix something. I’m back baby. Wow sitting here with paper in my hand just sitting in a car trying to find something to write, and now I just wrote allover my arm. Oops!
Wow my sisters are going to be late. It’s not my fault. I’m ready. I’m already in the car so now what? I have nothing to write and my hair is messy and we’re going to be late. Cool! Oh crasp! We have to do that FCAT thing and I forgot all about that, Oh and we’re getting Berichten cards. Oh my gooooodness. I’m going to die. Oh no, I hear someone coming. Oh no! Never mind. Ewww, I hate Du people. The people that live Weiter to us. I mean in front. They are leaving. Gone. Now I can do something. I realize when I wrote that I thought I would have to go. Oh well. Everyone is in the car now, screaming, yelling, so blah. I live with screaming and yelling all the time. Help me!
Driving to my older sister’s bus stop in peace. Finally. Wait, never mind. Well she’s gone. I live with so many people it’s crazy. I live with seven girls and they have big mouths. It is really getting old. But, enough about that. I still have nothing to write about. 000-000-0000. Mommy’s on the phone with Gammies, my granda. She lives far, far away. I miss you. Bye, Liebe ya.
feuer station 4 has just been passed Von a white van. I mean an ugly white van.I’m sorry for this dumb story. I’ve just gotta get this finished. Plus, I’ve got nothing to write about.
Hah! Now mom is trying to give us the “respect” talk. Booo. Help me again.
“Chey, daddy says he loves you”, sagte Kai.
“I Liebe Du too daddy. I said”
I sagte that Von Wakeland where my sister goes to school.
“Go mom”. The light turns green and she finally goes. We pulled in to my sister’s school.. Wow I see my old school, weird. I see these little kids with their backpacks so big and them so small. Ha, ha. Well bye old school. Coming to the light here and we have to turn right, go straight, curvy, school 20. My mom slows down. The lady waves and mom waves back, then turns into the school.
I’ll be back. I’m back. I’m in the gym listening to Musik so bored here.
I’ve read this all. It doesn’t make any sense. Sorry, I’ve wasted your time teacher but, I have nothing to write about
I can’t find anything to write sitting in my mom’s car, where my bag was. I’m trying to figure out something to write and maybe after my little sister and older sister are done fighting, we can leave for school. But, I also have nothing to write. Wait, do Du hear that? Yea, that nothing? They’ve stopped fighting. Awesome! I wonder if we could leave? I’m ready, Chantel’s ready, Kai’s ready. Is Manny ready? Wow, I should scratch out that baby talk but I have nothing to write about, and I need at least 650 words. But, I have nothing to write about.
Oh, there goes my aunt and my cousins. “Bye.” I’ll be back I have to fix something. I’m back baby. Wow sitting here with paper in my hand just sitting in a car trying to find something to write, and now I just wrote allover my arm. Oops!
Wow my sisters are going to be late. It’s not my fault. I’m ready. I’m already in the car so now what? I have nothing to write and my hair is messy and we’re going to be late. Cool! Oh crasp! We have to do that FCAT thing and I forgot all about that, Oh and we’re getting Berichten cards. Oh my gooooodness. I’m going to die. Oh no, I hear someone coming. Oh no! Never mind. Ewww, I hate Du people. The people that live Weiter to us. I mean in front. They are leaving. Gone. Now I can do something. I realize when I wrote that I thought I would have to go. Oh well. Everyone is in the car now, screaming, yelling, so blah. I live with screaming and yelling all the time. Help me!
Driving to my older sister’s bus stop in peace. Finally. Wait, never mind. Well she’s gone. I live with so many people it’s crazy. I live with seven girls and they have big mouths. It is really getting old. But, enough about that. I still have nothing to write about. 000-000-0000. Mommy’s on the phone with Gammies, my granda. She lives far, far away. I miss you. Bye, Liebe ya.
feuer station 4 has just been passed Von a white van. I mean an ugly white van.I’m sorry for this dumb story. I’ve just gotta get this finished. Plus, I’ve got nothing to write about.
Hah! Now mom is trying to give us the “respect” talk. Booo. Help me again.
“Chey, daddy says he loves you”, sagte Kai.
“I Liebe Du too daddy. I said”
I sagte that Von Wakeland where my sister goes to school.
“Go mom”. The light turns green and she finally goes. We pulled in to my sister’s school.. Wow I see my old school, weird. I see these little kids with their backpacks so big and them so small. Ha, ha. Well bye old school. Coming to the light here and we have to turn right, go straight, curvy, school 20. My mom slows down. The lady waves and mom waves back, then turns into the school.
I’ll be back. I’m back. I’m in the gym listening to Musik so bored here.
I’ve read this all. It doesn’t make any sense. Sorry, I’ve wasted your time teacher but, I have nothing to write about
Kat.
i am looking for the star, our star, but this time i am alone, Du aren't standing on the port Weiter to me..
i feel i am Lost now, i can't find this star. Du remeber what did i descoverd that night? i found only one star, sterne in the whole Portsaid's sky..
Du didn't belive that one star, sterne is exist.. Du said: which star? the sky is felling of the stars!
i thought Du was kidding, i was very sure that there's one star.. yeah, sure as the blind is sure that there's nothing around him!
now i see what Du were talking about, i loved you, so i couldn't see anyone else but you..
Du was my heart's only love..
it was Portsaid's only star..
but Du .. Du didn't point to the same star, Du saw all the stars but mine..
now i am alone, seeing many stars, can't find my star, am i blind? oder ..was i blind?
twinkle, twinkle, my littel star..
Portsaid's only star, which one is you?
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*Portsaid is an Egyptian port.
i feel i am Lost now, i can't find this star. Du remeber what did i descoverd that night? i found only one star, sterne in the whole Portsaid's sky..
Du didn't belive that one star, sterne is exist.. Du said: which star? the sky is felling of the stars!
i thought Du was kidding, i was very sure that there's one star.. yeah, sure as the blind is sure that there's nothing around him!
now i see what Du were talking about, i loved you, so i couldn't see anyone else but you..
Du was my heart's only love..
it was Portsaid's only star..
but Du .. Du didn't point to the same star, Du saw all the stars but mine..
now i am alone, seeing many stars, can't find my star, am i blind? oder ..was i blind?
twinkle, twinkle, my littel star..
Portsaid's only star, which one is you?
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*Portsaid is an Egyptian port.
love bites
Du hurt me,
Both externally,
And internally,
Du twist a pin into my heart,
And gather my flowing blood onto a cart.
Du think Du can hurt me,
Just because Du gave me money,
Du think Du can make my life like hell,
Just because I am the one who made Du fell.
I wish Du have never gegeben birth to me,
I wish I can expose what Du are for all to see.
I hate you,
And I hate Du to the heart's core,
I want Du to hear my vengeful call.
I respect Du because I must,
Yet Du blame me for not giving Du my trust.
How can I love, oder trust, a person like you?
Who makes me feel I'm feebler than cotton wool?
I am forever imprisoned to Du Von blood,
For as long as I live,
The relation between us cannot be cut,
But soon I will take my leave,
Hoping that forever Du will grieve
Both externally,
And internally,
Du twist a pin into my heart,
And gather my flowing blood onto a cart.
Du think Du can hurt me,
Just because Du gave me money,
Du think Du can make my life like hell,
Just because I am the one who made Du fell.
I wish Du have never gegeben birth to me,
I wish I can expose what Du are for all to see.
I hate you,
And I hate Du to the heart's core,
I want Du to hear my vengeful call.
I respect Du because I must,
Yet Du blame me for not giving Du my trust.
How can I love, oder trust, a person like you?
Who makes me feel I'm feebler than cotton wool?
I am forever imprisoned to Du Von blood,
For as long as I live,
The relation between us cannot be cut,
But soon I will take my leave,
Hoping that forever Du will grieve
"Mrs.Sanchez?"!!
When Du think Du think your in love. Its just a trick. When Du feel like your falling Du are. Your fallin down and down intill Du fall on spikes. The spikes peirce every part of your body but most of all they hit your heart. Thats why Du fell like your bleeding from the inside to the outside. Thats why it hurts so badly.
Liebe can be a trick. But sometime it can be real. It takes a long time to see if it is. During that time your in danger of falling on spikes. BUt if it is real, then, when Du fall, your falling into a heaven on earth. When Du fall with the one your supposed to be with then your arent in danger with the spikes anymore.
Tell me what this artical makes Du feel. If Du think Im right, oder if im wrong, im curios to what Du think. Thankyou!
Liebe can be a trick. But sometime it can be real. It takes a long time to see if it is. During that time your in danger of falling on spikes. BUt if it is real, then, when Du fall, your falling into a heaven on earth. When Du fall with the one your supposed to be with then your arent in danger with the spikes anymore.
Tell me what this artical makes Du feel. If Du think Im right, oder if im wrong, im curios to what Du think. Thankyou!
This is when he leaned in to breath down her neck
How did this happen, nothings write like a plane not taking flight? It’s wrong like a song with no end. oder a paper but no pen. Were this is coming from I cannot explain. Maybe its ur pointless silly games. Like in hide and go seek am I not aloud to peek. Du were wrong and so was I. Are arguments are now in the sky. There done. No redo's oder undo's to bring it back. There finished almost deminished.But Du bring them back. Back again to haunt me. To taunt me into your little game. But it wont work. Du wont get me. Not this time.Cuz my life Is mine.
