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During state testing week, I had only one Tag where I saw all of my students. I had my students write a story and several of them sagte they didn’t know what to write. This student found a solution to her problem. I keep telling students if they can't think of anything then they just need to write whatever pops into their heads The following is printed with Chey’s permission. She did write a proper story after this.

I can’t find anything to write sitting in my mom’s car, where my bag was. I’m trying to figure out something to write and maybe after my little sister and older sister are done fighting, we can leave for school. But, I also have nothing to write. Wait, do Du hear that? Yea, that nothing? They’ve stopped fighting. Awesome! I wonder if we could leave? I’m ready, Chantel’s ready, Kai’s ready. Is Manny ready? Wow, I should scratch out that baby talk but I have nothing to write about, and I need at least 650 words. But, I have nothing to write about.

Oh, there goes my aunt and my cousins. “Bye.” I’ll be back I have to fix something. I’m back baby. Wow sitting here with paper in my hand just sitting in a car trying to find something to write, and now I just wrote allover my arm. Oops!

Wow my sisters are going to be late. It’s not my fault. I’m ready. I’m already in the car so now what? I have nothing to write and my hair is messy and we’re going to be late. Cool! Oh crasp! We have to do that FCAT thing and I forgot all about that, Oh and we’re getting Berichten cards. Oh my gooooodness. I’m going to die. Oh no, I hear someone coming. Oh no! Never mind. Ewww, I hate Du people. The people that live Weiter to us. I mean in front. They are leaving. Gone. Now I can do something. I realize when I wrote that I thought I would have to go. Oh well. Everyone is in the car now, screaming, yelling, so blah. I live with screaming and yelling all the time. Help me!

Driving to my older sister’s bus stop in peace. Finally. Wait, never mind. Well she’s gone. I live with so many people it’s crazy. I live with seven girls and they have big mouths. It is really getting old. But, enough about that. I still have nothing to write about. 000-000-0000. Mommy’s on the phone with Gammies, my granda. She lives far, far away. I miss you. Bye, Liebe ya.

feuer station 4 has just been passed Von a white van. I mean an ugly white van.I’m sorry for this dumb story. I’ve just gotta get this finished. Plus, I’ve got nothing to write about.
Hah! Now mom is trying to give us the “respect” talk. Booo. Help me again.
“Chey, daddy says he loves you”, sagte Kai.
“I Liebe Du too daddy. I said”
I sagte that Von Wakeland where my sister goes to school.

“Go mom”. The light turns green and she finally goes. We pulled in to my sister’s school.. Wow I see my old school, weird. I see these little kids with their backpacks so big and them so small. Ha, ha. Well bye old school. Coming to the light here and we have to turn right, go straight, curvy, school 20. My mom slows down. The lady waves and mom waves back, then turns into the school.
I’ll be back. I’m back. I’m in the gym listening to Musik so bored here.

I’ve read this all. It doesn’t make any sense. Sorry, I’ve wasted your time teacher but, I have nothing to write about
posted by ambers1999
CH1 A Dream
I wake up on a shiny sliver tabelle that I can bearly see my reflection in. Two men are beside me smiling down, I get up off the tabelle one of the men try to grab my arm but I shake him off."Give off me" I sagte shaking. I started to run but as I turn the corner I drop on my butt and put my hand over my mouth. With my boyfriend right in fornt of me."Get in there Du stupid mutt" one of the fat guys snared."Jason I'm scared whats happening"? Suddenly I pop my eyes open and almost fall out the bed, but I catch myself."It's just a dream Sandy, just a dream" I told my self in sigh of reilf....
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posted by Supergirl14
The club
We got to “Club monstruo” Their was the bouncer who really smiled when I showed up he let me in and looked at my Friends with discontent, “They are with me, Mitchell!”He smiled again, “any friend of Angela is a friend of mine,”He replied in his gruff voice.
Smoke and strobe lights, half-dressed girls and boys dancing filled the room, “where is Juli,"I yelled, a girl almost half my size(I am 6'5)black hair /w pale rosa streaks in a messy bun came in, the bulimic look did not fit her, she looked like a skank and did not look good as one. “ready to get it good?” I asked."only...
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posted by wolfkirby
The Weiter Tag was a horror show.The school was burned down to the ground.All we had left was some desks,chairs,and books.The princepal and the church owner sagte we can us the church.Its to scared us to death because Sally Gunsman was burned with the school.Her brother Brandon Gunsman
was lucky he didnt go to the school with her to get her books,but he was sorry he did every go
because him could hav go her out.We all told him its not your fault ,she went in at the wrong time.
We had to save us and the town but how?
March 21, 1756, 8:47 PM, Appalachian Mountains.

Branches, bushes and trees flew Von on the amazingly stable video display. The man’s labored breath was exceptionally clear. Du could almost hear his herz pounding out of his chest. Occasionally, an upside-down glimpse of his face came into view, he appeared to be quite young, perhaps 30, but had a look in his eyes, the eyes of an old man. A wise old man. The video oddly seemed to be recording from a camera mounted on a chain around the neck. His dirty complexion and half-inch beard growth gave hint that he had dwelled in these woods for days....
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posted by I_DONT-KNOW
A big thanks to Silverain on her idea for a title!!


Chapter 2-The Pain.



She took a shaky step through the rippling shield, smiling when she was on the other side. The boy smiled too, but still looked wary. Alexis took anothr step, larger this time, but a surge of pain forced her to the ground. She screamed out grabbing her wrist where the pain pulsed the highest. The pain burned through her whole body causing deep shudders to run through her. The boy crouched over her, and closed his eyes.
"Don't worry, it will pass." He sagte standing once Mehr and moving to lean against the Wand he had before,...
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posted by gamer495
Upon a pricket of silver and iron, cold and brittle, a carved candle is put for display; oder so the twisted wick believes.
Warm on the inside, safe, sicher from the echoes that make the brittle iron shiver moans around its placement, the twisted wick lies in wait for its moment.
It believes that because of its simple Design of its outer coating, a green sapphire and a veil of black inner linings within its carvings, shaped like the scribbles of terrible children, it has such a confidence, such a simple charisma that cannot be matched.
The wick, suffocated Von its very beauty-marks, shivers as the heat...
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posted by hannah_vampire
I felt cold fingers against my cheek, a tingle of seduction warmth on my neck; I woke to Beautiful Damon standing Von the window in the vast morning sunlight. He stood there looking at me and I felt enchanted.

He had Black jeans on and he looked like one of those Models out of a posh magazine, He walked over to me “ I hope Du don’t mind my sister thought you’d sleep best in that dress” I looked down to find myself in a silk like lila, flieder short dress that flowed .I followed Damon’s graze to a strange boy that looked at me. His hair fell to his ears it was a white-grey color and His eyes...
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posted by Elizabeth90luv
I, Stella Bonasera, criminologist from New York’s crime lab have to inform Du that due to a severe medical problem I won’t be able to present on today’s court and testify against Antonio Vasquez, the primary suspect for Anne Blaire’s murder. Responsible for my absence is Mr. Vasquez, who shot me with a machine gun right outside the back entrance of the crime lab. The video of the security cameras can Bestätigen it.

As a matter of fact, I want to present through this letter all the evidence that I have collected with the help of my experienced team. I swear to the bible that I will tell...
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posted by boomboombunni
"Andrew? Andrew? Are Du okay?" Andrew hear Elizabeth's gentle, velvety voice as his consicness returned to him. "Hey honey, you've been asleep for awhile now." She seemed very concerned, considering she had only known him for a few hours. After the room stopped spinning, Andrew sat up and looked around. He was still in the hotel, but, he didn't recognize the room. When his gaze fell on Elizabeth, the room started spinning again. "So, when Du said, "When I was alive." did Du mean that you're a ghost?" Elizabeth's face was grim and solemn. "Yes. I'm a ghost." Suddenly, Andrew smelled cinnamon, honey, and something he didn't recognize. "Andrew I have to go. I'll be back tonight. Von the way, call me Liz." She flashed him a dazzling smile, and she was gone. "Wow."
"Matthew tells me you're improving. Guess that brings us a step closer to being happy again, right?" Charlie stared at me with a hopeful expression, awaiting the answer he wanted to hear all along. Yes, Charlie. I'm finally moving on from the past because I Liebe you. I Liebe Du and I want to make this work. I'm changing who I am for you. Dr. Thomas' words, his advice, echoed in my head as I slowly paced back and forth, playing with my fingers nervously. "Jamie, what is it?" "Do Du think there's any point in staying married if the relationship isn't going to survive?" I blurted out the words...
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posted by Vampiyaa
"So, where are we going?" Aiko grinned. Blaine beamed at her.
"I was thinking someplace special," he said, trying to sound casual. Aiko thought and then replied, "Do Du have somewhere in mind?"
"Take a look." Blaine pointed to the entrace of the new amusement park. Aiko gasped.
"No way!" she laughed. "You actually got tickets?" Blaine shrugged and said, "It wasn't hard. When I sagte I was the agent of Dusk Rivers, they had to let me in."
"How much were they?" Aiko asked curiously. Blaine hesitated.
"Not much," he sagte hastily.
"Blaine, tell me."
"No."
"Yes." Aiko stared hard at Blaine...
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posted by ilovehouse345
I make mistakes
I mess up
but it was nevr enough
I no longer cry for you
no Mehr pain
that means I will no longer stand it
Du took my herz and ran it strait into the planet
now I'm taking control of this relationship
command it
that means I no longer die for
no longer cry for Du
no Mehr pain
but Du always win
as th blood trickles down my arm
I wisper Du name into the dark
Cierra
the pain I went through for you
no longer
is anyone out there
feels like I'm talking o myslelf
feels like I'm going insane
feels crazy
guess I keep talking to myself
why in the world do I feel so alone
nobody but me
I'm on my own
is there anyone out there
that feels just what I feel
guess it's just me.
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just to let Du know.I'm no sewisidle oder crazy.just a kid who's been through alot and has grown up faster
This is all I have now, but I will add on Mehr later. Just tell me what Du think. I do enjoy ideas but please no mean comments.
Here:


She was sitting there. Tired, alone, and horrified. There was nothing to be scared of, people were around her, and there was nothing to be scared of. Why did she feel this way?
    Stephanie Williams had always been a little bit off normal, but today she was going too far. She was screaming at the oben, nach oben of her lungs, at school. Any person who couldn’t see what she saw would think she was absolutely crazy. But, there are still seven other people...
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Pride is a belief in myself (or someone else) that within me is something no one else has just like me. Pride can be a wonderful thing. My coaches are proud of me when I execute a Bewegen perfectly. I am proud of my efforts when I get the right answer to a test question. However, pride can have a negative connotation. If I am prideful of my Singen talent oder of my sports accomplishments, then I am not feeling the right kind of pride. Yes, I can be pleased with my abilities; but when I let it go to my head, then I am full of pride, just like Odysseus often was. Von believing that I am the only person with that talent, I inflate my ego. I believe myself to be “the best of the best,” and this can damage my relationships with others. They would not want my company if the only things I spoke of were my own accomplishments.
posted by lovepop
Meghan ran to the bus stop, where she saw Pompika. Thankfully Pompika looked at her politely and sagte “You know I saw Reg but ya know, how she’s jus’ across the street, she seems a lil’ mad!” Meghan thought for a Sekunde and thought ‘why lose Pompika?’ and said, “Geez I don’t know?” Now she wished she had told the truth, instead of lying. “Oh I wish ya did.” Pompika said. “Tsk-Tsk, bad grammar Pompi” sagte Meghan. “Sorry, fine I wish Du did. There ya… Du go” “Hhhmmm, nice save.” Meghan said. “Hey look, Reg’s a comin’” sagte Pompika. “Great that’s good… wait REG!!!” sagte Meghan. “What?” sagte Pompika. "nothing."
posted by Charlieminster
The morning lectures went quickly and very soon it was five Minuten until she had to meet Zach at Starbucks. She walked with Jenii until she reached the turn she had to take “Hey Jen, Jake I’ve got to go” she sagte
“Ells where are Du going?” Jenii asked and Jake looked confused as well
“I’m, um, going to meet Zach for coffee” she answered watching their expressions. Jenii’s face lifted in to a wide grin and so did Jake.
“Okay Ellie, see Du at 2 at my place” sagte Jenii
“Okay see Du then” Ellie sagte and rushed off to meet Zach.
    Ellie made it...
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posted by lucius_malloy
Somewhere, far away from here, there is a parallel universe. Somewhat literally parallel. There, Du may not live in civilization unless Du have a parallel – Von the age of fifteen.
Some people, however, are lucky: twins. They have been born with their parallel.
A parallel, in this case, is a person who shares your hopes, your dreams, your deepest fears – someone, in fact, whom we call a soulmate.
On the first Tag of every year, a check is made. In every city, town and village, the people who have had the misfortune to turn fifteen during the past Jahr must turn up and display their parallel...
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 Kat.
Kat.
Prom Night
By: fatchick and moolah
Chapter three: Best ending ever!!
    Luke was lying in a hospital bett the whole time Ashlynn gave birth. He missed the birth of his little premature little girl. He was upset and also dreaming about what his baby girl looked like. Ashlynn was aloud to come see Luke. She started crying when she saw him. She was sad that he was in a temporary coma. She thought he was cute in a weird way. She went to lie down. On her way back she fainted. She fainted because she thought she saw Luke trying to hug her in the hall. The nurse screamed, “HELP,...
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i am looking for the star, our star, but this time i am alone, Du aren't standing on the port Weiter to me..
i feel i am Lost now, i can't find this star. Du remeber what did i descoverd that night? i found only one star, sterne in the whole Portsaid's sky..
Du didn't belive that one star, sterne is exist.. Du said: which star? the sky is felling of the stars!
i thought Du was kidding, i was very sure that there's one star.. yeah, sure as the blind is sure that there's nothing around him!
now i see what Du were talking about, i loved you, so i couldn't see anyone else but you..
Du was my heart's only love..
it was Portsaid's only star..
but Du .. Du didn't point to the same star, Du saw all the stars but mine..
now i am alone, seeing many stars, can't find my star, am i blind? oder ..was i blind?
twinkle, twinkle, my littel star..
Portsaid's only star, which one is you?
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*Portsaid is an Egyptian port.
posted by Charlieminster
Charlie Hawkins had always felt different to the other girls in her school. They were all really skinny, wore tight clothes and make-up and every boy who pasted them in the corridor would quite simply drawl all over them. Charlie was different to the girls in Mehr ways than looks. She could do something that none of them could do which was influence people to do what she wants them to do.
The way Charlie looked different to the other girls was that she was very pale for someone who lives in LA, she had long dark black hair that came down to her hips, her eyes were a very strange cloudy yellow...
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