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Bullied oder great Friends at school?

So I'm between two story ideas...

Number 1: This sixteen Jahr old kid gets bullied for being "emo". Like severely bullied. Insults about suicide and cutting. Beaten up. Stuff like that. And my character saves him from suicide when he finally decides to commit it. We're both bullied from suicide insults, cutting, hanging insults. But we're there for each other.

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Number 2: I'm at my regular school for behavioral issues and all. Max comes to my school because of his behavioral issues to the bullies. (He wasn't THAT bullied, but it still got to him.) We meet as I'm still with my boyfriend. (My boyfriend's perfect, okay? He has flaws, but still. I'm just Schreiben about the boy with no flaws. I'm bored, kay?) And he treats me with Mehr attention. And all.

So which idea?

Oh, and I know this picture is from "Knives and Pens" Von Black Veil Brides. I'm not stupid.

I'd use that for the first idea, obviously...
Bullied oder great Friends at school?
 iLoveEnough posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr
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Amaliex said:
Since there are alot of "emo" stories out there, i think #2
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True. Now thinking about it, #2 will be easier to write. Thank you.(:
iLoveEnough posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr
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Np! Remember, Du can always merge the two together somehow :)
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LaDispute said:
First one is cliche/boring af. I'd go with 2.
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Thanks.(:
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saba1234 said:
The Sekunde story line sounds good, a good story needs to be based on a subject your familiar with, and good research. I find that carrying a pen and small Schreiben pad around in my bag oder pocket helps,you never know when Du may have an inspirational moment, Du could be travelling oder in the park oder at school oder even on the bus and Du could over hear an interesting conversation(don't make it obvious your eaves dropping) and Du could jot it down, oder Du may see an interesting looking person who's Beschreibung Du could write down, and all this information could come in use for a future story.
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The Sekunde story line sounds good, a good story needs to be based on a subject your familiar with, and good research. I find that carrying a pen and small Schreiben pad around in my bag oder pocket helps,you never know when Du may have an inspirational moment, Du could be travelling oder in the park oder at school oder even on the bus and Du could over hear an interesting conversation(don't make it obvious your eaves dropping) and Du could jot it down, oder Du may see an interesting looking person who's Beschreibung Du could write down, and all this information could come in use for a future story.
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OMGZoey said:
I like number two :)
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