Does this seem like a good opening paragraph?

They say the only difference between the future and the present is the past, that the past dredges up memories that leads us to the future. But, I ask you, what is the future? Is it tomorrow? Weiter week? A year? oder a decade? It all depends on you, for me, its where everything far, yet not so far is planned how Du plan it. In order for it to be like this, Du have to make the right steps, take precautions, listen to what the paat has to say. Okay then, so what is the past? Is it yesterday? Last week? Last month? Last century? Again, it differs from person to person, for me, it could be that last second, anything behind what Du did now, now and now, all this is now slipping into the past.

So, the plot is after losing conciousness a girl is propelled into her future where almost everything is the same, yet, when she talks to her future self, she finds so much has changed, when she returns to her time period everything happens as she was told and more.