I need some serious help!

Ok so I am going to try and answer this as best i can (its a hard Q.)....

So usually in Schreiben levels connect, something that happens seemingly meaningless at the start of the story comes back at the end oder middle. If Du try and find the layers that connect Du can cut them (2 oder more) out without rupturing the story line.

Planning might also help. If Du plan the layers at the start then Du don't get the end and have to (try) cut something out. If Du plan the layers at the beginning then Du also don't have the chance of adding Mehr in from the original idea.

Hope this helps....

Hm, this is a complicated question, because Du would go about it differently for each story. Since I don't know anything about your story, I can't give Du specific examples.

Sit down and look at what Du have, and I mean really look. Is there anything that doesn't add to the conflict, plot, oder general story arc?

Also, talk to your teacher. See what he/she thinks is so complex about your stories. What he/she thinks maybe completely different from what Du think.

youve got so much to say its almost bursting, the teacher doesnt want to be inthralled Von your stories; your good, but- teacher got to work on the other Lost sheep,mmm simpler sucks,= that wouldnt sell! [and your in training!!!!!!!] will a note from Saint Nick help? id allow your 100 pages, the rest in colour ha he hi ho hu later;-}