Edward and Bella <3

It happens. There’s no avoiding it. When Du can see the darkness coming, there’s nothing Du can do rather than lie there helplessly, waiting. Waiting for the torment to end. Then finally, when Du know it’s all over, there’s that one strahl, ray of hope willing to take your life back. So Du reach out for it, not wanting to loose it. Lock it in a box and throw away the key.
“Charlie how long Vor was it when Du found her?”
That calm voice echoed around the large Weltraum in my empty head. The light was fading, seeping out the sides of the box that I locked it in. It was escaping fast and...

The Character


Name: Marcus

Type: Vampire

Special Ability: Can sense relationships

About Them: Marcus was once one of the prominent leaders of the Volturi in Volterra, Italy. He has the ability to sense relationships and his former wife who is now deceased, Didyme, had the ability to make others happy. After the sudden and shocking death of Didyme Marcus became extremely apathetic and disinterested in life. As a result he voted against destroying little Renesmee in an 'almost bored fashion' without so much as a glance to the Cullens and their allies. Marcus has jett black hair with the fiery red...

1) We never get to hear about Edward's bachelor party, and did Alice even plan a bachelorette party for Bella?

2) There was not enough character development for the Denali clan. I felt like they were just empty, filler-characters to give the Cullens allies later on in the book.

3) The story of the 'immortal children' was just randomly thrown into the story at the wrong time and felt out of place. I would have rather learnt Mehr about the Denali clan than their deceased mother.

4) I absolutely loved the wedding ceremony that Alice planned (Go Team Alice!) and in my head, the dresses, decorations,...

Thanks for all the replies, theyre really appricieted. I have the Weiter installment (which is in JACOBs POV =]) already written out and will post it as quick as possible. Thanks again =]
My whole body ached to be with her. My anxiety must have been Wird angezeigt because even without Jasper present Alice leapt lightly to my side and thought softly towards me.
"Dont worry the DOGS" she thought fiercly "will be gone soon and Du can see Bella." she added hoping to placate me.
I sent Bella a quick text, i knew how bad anxiety was for her.
"Problems with dogs. Will be late. Liebe you, E" i smiled knowing that...