there's one thing I want to do before lose my human nature

this is a story i made that i hope Du like because i had a lot of time to think of it...not my best work but yeah... sorry it has so many enters, it was written on my phone.

Chapter 1.
    I had just moved into forks, Washington, me and my brother Eddie were
Close so after our parents died Eddie didn't leave me out of his sight.
I was unpacking and going through my things when I heard the door glocke
Ring. I knew who it was because every time I moved the people Weiter door
Would come and welcome us. Well I figured it was our neighbor.
    I heard the door...

Alice

As I crept silently on the pebbly road, I thought of Nessie and Jasper. Oh poor, poor Jasper. He was one of them now. One of those evil monsters. I hated them with vast passion. I felt angry and my face was on constant grimace, but I kept my cool. I had to. If I didn’t, I would blow my cover. It was evening and the sky was a happy orange. The clouds looked like they were lined with silver thread and dotted in the happy sky. The ground was smothered with golden autumn leaves like an aquatic of Gold ingots. As I stepped on them they only made a tiny rustle, but unattainable to human ears....