Kiks trying out Bella's clothes

Hello Dear Reader,
I am Schreiben an original novel and I wanted people to at least hear the word of it before I tried to get it out in the world. It's called "The Death Contracts, Vol. 1: GLIMPSE" and it's the story of the main character named Astrid Marker.
The reason why I'm posting this link everywhere I know possible is because I want fans. Desperate? No. Mehr like curious to see how many people can review what I have so far and tell me what they think. I have the first 8 Chapters gepostet on my Profil at the website figment.com, the link to it plus the synopsis is straight below, but I wanted...