Ok I'm feeling really stupid right about now. After posting Part 1 I remembered that Paul and Rachel (Jakes sister) are Imprinted. So I feel so stupid. Anyway thanks to CarlislesLover I had an idea to fix this. So here It goes:


“Hey you’ve reached Kim’s phone, sorry I can’t talk right now, and I’ll ring Du back later.” For Christ’s sake, does everyone hate me today? I slammed the door of my mini, fuming. I slung my bag over the couch, sprawling across the floor. Damn it was so hot today; I closed my eyes to try to escape from the heat. I thought mum sagte it was never hot here? My eyes shot open when I heard the shrilling sound of the phone. “Get lost.” I muttered. “If no one can pick up the phone for me, why should I pick it up for them? “The phone continued ringing as if to taunt me. “ALRIGHT ALRIGHT I’M COMING!” I shouted exasperated.

“Hello?” I asked picking up the phone.

“Hey Clo its Kim. Sorry I didn’t pick up the phone, Jared was harassing me while I was trying to get all the food.” “I WAS NOT” I heard Jared shout in the background. “Anyway so what did Du ring for earlier?”

“Well I was just going to say, can Du get someone to get me a little later, about six fifteen time? I just got Home from dance and I really need a shower.” I smiled. I heard Jared laugh followed Von an “Owww”

“Sure thing, I’ll ring around and someone will be on your door step then. See ya later.”

I hung up feeling in desperate need of the cool water. After showering, I opened my wardrobe and plopped down on my bed. What to wear, what to wear? It’s just a BBQ Chloe, jeans and a t-shirt are fine. I pulled out my skinny jeans and favourite tight fitted blouse. A hammering on the door startled me and I Lost my footing, falling flat on my face. It took all my might not to trip down the stairs. The impatient person knocked again. “Ok I’m coming.” I sagte grabbing the keys and unlocking the door. Oh great, just my luck. It was Paul.

“Oh Hey Paul, give me a second.” He nodded, almost thoughtfully. I left the front door ajar, while I scribbled down a note for Mum, grabbed my jacke and keys and locked the door.

“Do Du want me to take something?” He offered. I shook my head.

“I’m ok.” I was perfectly capable of putting my keys in my pocket and carrying my coat.
He nodded taking the lead. I actually felt really bad, he looked really put out. We walked in silence, until Pauls phone rang. He looked at the caller ID his face scrunching up before answering it. “Rachel” He asked. His eyebrows pulled together as she spoke. He sighed. “Ok, if that’s what’s been arranged.” He turned around to me, smiling a little. “Were all going to Jacob’s instead if Kim’s now? Apparently there’s some...discussion to be made.”

“Who’s Jacob?” I sorta wanted to know where I was going.

“Another friend oder Kim’s and everyone, who lives just there.” He pointed down the road to a small house surrounded Von woods. Actually there wasn’t a house in La Push that wasn’t surrounded Von wood. I wanted to ask Paul what was wrong but I didn’t want to be rude, so I kept my mouth firmly shut. Kim met me out the front of the house, letting me know Paul had bought me to the right place.

“Hey Clo, I hope Du don’t mind about our change of place.” I shook my head at her.

“Who’s Jacob?” I whispered.

“I believe you’re talking about me.” A burning hot finger tapped my shoulder. “I’m Jacob, a good friend of Kim, Paul and just about everyone else here. Du must be Chloe?” A tall long-haired girl caught the corner of my eye, walking briskly away. Jacob seemed to notice my distraction. “Don’t bother about her. That’s my sister Rachel, her and Paul broke up today and she’s in a bit of a vicious mood.” I nodded. Jacob and Kim shared a quick look, which I caught, they nodded to each other, before Jacob gave me a smile and walked away.

“Hey Um Chloe, Jacob’s dad wants to talk to you. I’m coming to, but just quickly, Du don’t get freaked out to easily do you?”


Longer than I thought. Please comment.XXXXX