Twilight-Serie Article: 5 things wrong with Twilight and New moon.

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5 things wrong with Twilight and New moon.

posted by smileyfaceddude

Right, before Du go all crazy and twilight extreme on me, I would like Du to know that I am a Twilight fanatic too, and if Du don't believe me, i had a go at Mandapanda because I THOUGHT she was a Twilight HATER! But thats all over now.
insgesamt I Liebe Twilight and I do really mean love.
OK, lets get on with the list.

1. Kirsten Stewart. Some people may disagree, but
I think that she is a really bad actress.
If Du disagree please comment.

2. In Twilight, Victoria has the
wrong colour Hair.
In the book, Victoria has ginger hair,
but in the film, she has blonde?
This could be wrong but I am definate that
she has blonde hair in the film.

3. In New moon, The Küssen scenes quite graphic
and that is just wrong anyway. I am not saying
that Küssen is wrong but bella and edward
Küssen is kinda sick.

4. In New moon, when Bella is running at Edward,
her boobs are flying everywhere! AHHHHHHHHH!
Wrong. It looks like they might comeout at
anytime.

5. In both films, Rosalie, is kinda ugly, I mean in the book, Stephanie Meyer builds her up to be like this stunning angel, but she is, not ugly, but not how Stephanie Meyer decribes her.

As I said, on the whole, I Liebe all of Twilight saga films, but some things are wrong and well i just want to see if anyone agrees with me. Please comment. Thanks for Lesen and please check out my club 'Twilight Hotties'!

twilightfrk, Guste_LT and 1 other like this

smileyfaceddude Sorry about the mistakes.

Hellohoudini Well since these are your opinions I wont argue with you except on one point. Victoria's hair wasnt blonde in Twilight ...it was red..true a very muted red and that is why they changed it in New Moon..but red none the less.

smileyfaceddude Thank you for the comment. I thought I was wrong some how. Do you agree with me on these comments? I didn't want to seem negitive.

brij8 thought i was the only one who noticed the banging(bella's boobs flyin everywere)& i totally agree kristen,no offence, but naaa

smileyfaceddude Thanks, gotta say, Love these comments! :) Thank you

Guste_LT every time i watch New Moon, i cant take my eyes off of it... it's just so 'In-Your-Face'! no offence inteded to anyone

smileyfaceddude I know man I'm drawn to it. It's nature but puh-leaz

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Cold Roses--Chp. 20: Liebe and War

posted by Summer_Leanne

Hi again, everyone! After three long and busy days, I've finally finished chp. 20 :D thank Du so much for Lesen and all your sweet Kommentare on my last post! I hope Du all enjoy this one. Much love, as always, to each and every one of Du all, from me!
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Love and War
Alice ran to embrace Summer, who was sitting on the floor of the living room in tears. She had no words to comfort her, but, thankfully, Jake did. Carlisle told him the news, and as soon as he told Sam, he came bursting into the Cullens’ Home in a matter of minutes. He saw Summer...

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Hate Doesn't Describe Half of It. -1-

posted by seanll55

My skin absorbed the sunlight in the schools courtyard, it was warm. For once in Forks, Washington there was actually heat. I almost felt like I was back in Phoenix, sipping limonade on a long outdoor chase, with my mom, Renee and Paul, my step-father.

"Bella!" Jacob sagte running over to my stone tabelle in the courtyard.

"Yeah, Jake?" I sagte looking at him with a curious look. He was frantically shaking and he tried speaking but all that came out was gasps.

"Jacob, what's wrong?" I yelled, demanding him to talk.

"Bella, please, it was an accident!" Jacob whimpered.

"Jacob! What accident! Spit...

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Unspoken

posted by jacob_lover5253

Here is Jacob's POV...I do want to warn Du about this chapter...you will never expect what is coming!! ;) lol...well enjoy -Kayla

Chapter 12. (Jacob)

Edward finally left and Bella let me inside. "Why would Du do this to Charlie? To him? To me?" I asked yet again. She didn't answer me. "Come on, Bells, there has to be a reason." I begged. I wanted an answer badly. "Well, I don't want to live in a house full of Charlie's rules when i'm old enough to get my own house and make my own rules." She stated. "You're not telling the truth. You're lieing." I told her. She sat on her bett and yawned. "Jake,...

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another emmett cullen Liebe story chapter 7

posted by karpach_13

Chapter 7

You and Emmett walk in the door. And Alice comes over to Du and hugs you.
Alice-I am so sorry to hear about your Mom ___
You-Thanks Alice.
Emmett-___, its late, do Du want to go sleep?
You- Yeah, It's been a, really long day.
Emmett-Okay I'll go up with you.
You-Goodnight everyone
Everyone-night ___.

You and Emmett go up to his room and Du see your vanity for your make up and your hair Von a huge window in his room and Du see your dresser right Weiter to it. Du also see that your pajamas are set out on his bed. Du knew alice did it, and Du grabbed them and changed in the bathroom in...

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A famous reminder chapter 2

posted by KatiiCullen94

Bella singing

ok im very sorry , for THE LONG WAIT, but ive been working flat out and i jsut hadnt been in the moosd, but im pumped and woah! i hope to do two chapters today but ill see how i go.
ok a recap. Bella is about to perform on stage.

Bella's POV.

This was it, the moment ive been practicing for. to get his attention again. I remember him saying that he diddnt want me, but this was my chance to prove to him how much i wanted him.
I searched over and over like a father looking for this remote as the super ball has ten Minuten of the game. To find the perfect song and that all the lyrics just fit....

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emmett cullen Liebe story chapter 13

posted by karpach_13

Sabrina ended up sleeping in Du guys room. Emmett sat her on the bett and Du and him went hunting. Du guys was out for like 8 hours. Du guys got back and it was 7 in the morning. Du woke Sabrina up and Emmett went to enroll her into school. Du waited for him to get back. Alice, Rose, and Esme went shopping. Edward, Carlisle, and Jasper went on a hunting trip. So, that left Du and Emmett the house. Du heard him pull up. Du turned off the T.V. and he came in.
You: So how did it go?
Em: Good. Where is everyone?
You: Edward, Jasper,and Dad went hunting. Alice, Rose and Mom went shopping.
He...

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emmett cullen Liebe story chapter 10

posted by karpach_13

Du guys got back to the house saw everyone sitting watching the news and heard Alice ask.
Alice: Can I plan the wedding? Please?
Everyone looked at Du guys confused and Du looked at Emmett and he nodded.
You: Of course.
Esme: Wait. Du guys are engaged?
You smiled and nodded.
You: Yeah mom.
She got up and hugged Du both.
You: Rose? Du and Alice want to be my brides maids?
Rose/ Alice: Of course.
You smiled and hugged them.
Em: Jasper and Edward my grooms men?
They nodded and Du asked.
You: Where are we moving now?
Carlisle: We are thinking about Alaska. How does that sound kids?
You: I like it there....

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emmett cullen Liebe story chapter 5

posted by karpach_13

Du had a knock at your bedroom door. Du got up and answered it.
You: Hey mama.
Esme: Time for bed.
You: Thank you.
You laid down and she came over to your bett and kissed your forehead.
Esme: Good night sweetheart.
You: Night mom I Liebe you.
Esme: Liebe Du too.
She turned the CD on low and turned out the lights. Du thouht about your Tag while listening to the music. Du were about asleep when someone came into your room. Du felt the teddy bär in your arm and knew it was Emmett. Du smiled and said.
You: Night Teddy Bear.
Em: Night
You fell asleep.
The Dream.
You were back in the forest and Du looked...

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Cold Roses--Chp. 14: Lethal Independance

posted by Summer_Leanne

I'm so so happy Du all are enjoying this story! Your comments, like always, are so sweet and loving. Thanks for Lesen and for all your generous support. Liebe Du all!! Enjoy!! :]
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Lethal Independence
It was 10pm before Chloe drifted off to sleep in Summer’s arms. Athe and Chloe fussed over Summer every Sekunde once they found out she was injured. Summer was able to easily heal her bruise, but she didn’t understand why she was still being coddled like a feeble infant. As soon as Summer laid Chloe in her krippe and assured Athe that she was fine,...

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Hello, My Name Is: Death ~Vol. 5~ [NINE]

posted by BuffyFaithFan1

Hello, My Name Is: Death
Volume Five
BuffyFaithfan1
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[NINE]
    "You guys have a Weapons Master?" I asked.
    Tabra was getting dressed, and I was in the bathroom getting dressed while Jerek was on the otherside of the bathroom door doing the same.
    "Yes." He sagte back. "She knows everything: where they came from, who made them, how long they've been in stores, out of date, what group, such as the romans oder the dutch, they come from. She is such a good person to have on a time like this."
    "I...

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A Youtube Script(episode five)

posted by moolah

*episode five*
*A checkup for…*
Alice’s P.O.V:
*thinking*
I was barfing all the time.
Every time I did it hurt so badly.
I couldn’t take it any longer.
I ran into Carlisle’s office without knocking.
*done thinking*
Alice: *walks in* Carlisle I need Du to help m-*vomits all over carpet*
Carlisle: *runs over to her* Alice, are Du all right?
Alice: *shakes head ‘no’*
Carlisle: Honey, sit down. Do Du think you’re going to do it again, sweetie?
Alice: *nods*
Carlisle: *runs and comes back up in 5 seconds* Here’s a bucket.
Alice: Thanks. *a Sekunde later vomits*
Carlisle: Alice, did Du bite Bella?...

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A Youtube Script(episode four)Help!

posted by moolah

*episode four*
*HELP!*
Bella’s P.O.V:
*thinking*
I felt really shaky
And really scared
Alice kept on laughing wickedly
I kept on screaming
*done thinking*
Alice: Bella, Du had your chance-you WILL die now.
Bella: *passes out*
Alice: *goes back to normal* BELLA!
Bella: *bleeding everywhere*
Alice: *Screams* HELP!!!!!!!! HELP!!!!!! *kicks down the door*
Edward: *runs toward her* ALICE! WHAT THE HELL DID Du DO?
Alice: *vomits* Omigod. *looks at the vomit* Edward…*there is blood in the vomit*
Edward: *looks down at the vomit* Ali…
Alice: *runs out*
Edward: *looks down at Bella* BELLA! *picks her up and...

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Hello, My Name Is: Death ~Vol. 5~ [ONE]

posted by BuffyFaithFan1

Hello, My Name Is: Death
Volume Five
BuffyFaithfan1
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[PREVIOUSLY]
Hi, my name is Cyd, short for Cydnee, and one Tag while I was grocery shopping, a former member of the Death Clan of the Fallen threw a messer at my head. I ducked behind my cart, and ran out of the store once I saw the messer fly into a bunch of egg cartons. I went home, told my friend Tabra about it, and he came rushing over. He helped me get out of the aftershock feeling, and when we were eating chicken sandwhiches, mine was coated in poison. We then went to his apartment,...

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Hello, My Name Is: Death ~Vol. 3~ [SEVENTEEN]

posted by BuffyFaithFan1

Hello, My Name Is: Death
Volume Three
BuffyFaithfan1
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[SEVENTEEN]
    "Umm..." I said, and began my story. "I went to Haus when I was seventeen."
    "How old are Du now?" Shropee asked me.
    "I'm nineteen. So, two years go." I sagte and continued. "I was talking to Haus, and I provoked him Von trying to kill him. I told him to meet me at Starbucks, and when he got out I had people grab him from behind. I then went up to him with a stake, but he kicked it out of my hands, pushed them away, got into his car...

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Hello, My Name Is: Death ~Vol. 3~ [FOURTEEN]

posted by BuffyFaithFan1

Hello, My Name Is: Death
Volume Three
BuffyFaithfan1
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[FOURTEEN]
(ATTENTION: THE FOLLOWING PART OF THIS CHAPTER IS IN HAUS'S POINT OF VIEW, THANKS, AND Du MAY NOW CONTINUE READING)
    I picked up the phone, dialed a number, pressed CALL and waited for an answer.
    And I got one.
    "Hello?" A voice on the other line picked up and said.
    "Hello, Kyle, this is Haus."
    "Hey, Haus. What brings Du calling us all the way here?"
    "My men are dead."...

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Hello, My Name Is: Death ~Vol. 3~ [ELEVEN]

posted by BuffyFaithFan1

Hello, My Name Is: Death
Volume Three
BuffyFaithfan1
_______________________________
[ELEVEN]
    "Or we could do that." Jerek sagte once our lips parted.
    I was high off of that kiss. But, just briefly.
    "Yea." I said, not knowing really exactly what I was saying.
    Jerek then put his lips back to mine, and this time, it wasn't a surprise.
~~~~~~~~~~
    THE Weiter MORNING: I woke up on the lower bunk, under Tabra, and I was glad I went to bett earlier then I thought I was. I needed that sleep.
    "Morning,"...

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the new Begining ch1

posted by sh0rtiinedward

No one is looking at you, i promise myself but deep, deep inside of me i knew that everyone in Forks was staring at me.

"Mmmm Charlie, can we just go eat at home, i don't want to go to your Favorit Restaurant please?" i ask him with my little welpe eyes."Nessi come on Du never go out of the woods, now is the time please try?"
well charlie was right but i wasen't hungry anyways i when hunting with my aunt Rosalie 2 days ago, but i will do it just for grandpa.
"Here we are, My number One Restaurant"Charlie sagte very exited. " yeah abendessen time" i reaply as we started walking to the door, everyone...

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Hello, My Name Is: Death ~Vol. Two~ [THREE]

posted by BuffyFaithFan1

Hello, My Name Is: Death
Volume Two
BuffyFaithfan1
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[THREE]
    "Let's take her to the Room." Tabra sagte and Haus lead the way.
    "I counted seven in that room," Tabra whispered. I nodded.
    "Welcome to my new, refurbished Room." There were weapons along the walls, and there were even a few tortured people laying on the ground almost dead. It reeked of fish. Ew. "Put Cydnee in the chair."
    The chair lay in the middle of the Room, and it was blood stained, with a bullet hole in the back of it....

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Stephenie Meyer not turned on Von vampires.........

posted by Hellohoudini

Per Stephenie during a Fan interview 6/22/2010

Question..."What about Midnight Sun?"

Anwser..."I know that’s what everyone cares about. I also know that the right answer would be for me to say “Oh yah, it’s done! And it’ll be out Weiter month!” But that’s not true. It’s also not true that I’ve got a ton of work done on it, and that’s what I’m working on. What’s true is that I’m really burned out on vampires. And, I don’t want to write it badly. So I want to wait until I’m excited about the material again, and I’m excited about Edward, and that it’s something that’s...

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Renn and Micah's LIfe Chapter 3.(A Continuation of Renn and Jake's Life)

posted by WritenOnTheSand

Nessie Black

I sat at the küche counter, gazing at the ring on my finger. I'm not ready to take off the ring Jake gave me, not yet. I know if Will sees it that he will be frustrated with me, but my herz still can't let go of Jake.

It has been the hardest thing for me to make Will think I Liebe him. Kisses with no meaning, words of love, that on the inside I am taking back. It is like Jake is stuck to me. Imprinting is really powerful, because it is sure causing me physical strain.

I look over and see Micah appear. He is wearing his cute blue feety pajamas. He also has his treasured blanky in his hand....