This is harder than i thought to write this one,so bare with me.It's kinda edgey compared to my others.Enjoy!
THE Weiter DAY
FORKS HIGH SCHOOL
Here I am.In biology.Waiting for her to come in.
My classmates used to me being absent.As for,i nor my family can't go out into the sunlight [we can,just not where humans can see ].Or when were hunting.
Then the pain came once again.It wasen't that bad now since i'd hunted.Her milky brown eyes looked angry mixed with hurt,from my behavior.
''Hello.'' i greeted her.About to fully introduce myself.If I was going to do this.I may aswell do this right.After all,its how i was raised.
''Your talking to me?'' She asked a little smug.
I saw that this would be hard to be friends.Hard and easy at the same time.Maybe i could soften her up...
''Yes.I didn't get a chance to introduce myself the other day.I'm Edward Cullen.And your Bella.''
''Umm...Yes.'' she said.A little shocked that i was speaking to her.
The teacher started his lecture on diffrent cells.
I mimiced the speach in my head that i know has been spoken a million times before.
I was now stareing at her.My chair angled toward her.But,i was still sitting as far away as i could from her.
The teacher still talking,put out a box at our table.''Ladies first.''I sagte as I shifted the microscope towawrd her. ''You were gone...''It was Mehr of a question,just waiting for an exsplanation. ''Yeah...I was out of town for a couple of days.Personal reasons.'' I picked my brain.But that was the best I could do,without telling her the truth.She looked in the microscope.
''Phoaphase.'' she sagte lightly,shifting the microscope to me again. ''Mind if I look?''
I said. She nodded. I looked through the microscope. ''Phoaphase.'' i said.I wrote it down on the sheet.And put the Weiter cell in.
''Anaphase.'' I said. ''Mind if I check?'' she sagte with a light smile. I nodded smileing back at her. ''Anaphase.''
MIDNIGHT
I came through the window to her bedroom.She was sound asleep. But she was haveing a nightmare.Of some kind.She was moaning.Tossing and turning.
''Edward.'' she said.Her eyes still closed.She turned.She spoke so clearly,i thought she was awake.Why did she say my name?Then she sagte my name once more. ''Edward.''
Then it hit me.I loved her.She was it.She was the one.Alice sagte she had a vision.Of her,like me.A vampire.Tomarrow,i'll kick it up.And Zeigen her i want to be Mehr than friends.But that's just another chapter....
THE Weiter DAY
FORKS HIGH SCHOOL
Here I am.In biology.Waiting for her to come in.
My classmates used to me being absent.As for,i nor my family can't go out into the sunlight [we can,just not where humans can see ].Or when were hunting.
Then the pain came once again.It wasen't that bad now since i'd hunted.Her milky brown eyes looked angry mixed with hurt,from my behavior.
''Hello.'' i greeted her.About to fully introduce myself.If I was going to do this.I may aswell do this right.After all,its how i was raised.
''Your talking to me?'' She asked a little smug.
I saw that this would be hard to be friends.Hard and easy at the same time.Maybe i could soften her up...
''Yes.I didn't get a chance to introduce myself the other day.I'm Edward Cullen.And your Bella.''
''Umm...Yes.'' she said.A little shocked that i was speaking to her.
The teacher started his lecture on diffrent cells.
I mimiced the speach in my head that i know has been spoken a million times before.
I was now stareing at her.My chair angled toward her.But,i was still sitting as far away as i could from her.
The teacher still talking,put out a box at our table.''Ladies first.''I sagte as I shifted the microscope towawrd her. ''You were gone...''It was Mehr of a question,just waiting for an exsplanation. ''Yeah...I was out of town for a couple of days.Personal reasons.'' I picked my brain.But that was the best I could do,without telling her the truth.She looked in the microscope.
''Phoaphase.'' she sagte lightly,shifting the microscope to me again. ''Mind if I look?''
I said. She nodded. I looked through the microscope. ''Phoaphase.'' i said.I wrote it down on the sheet.And put the Weiter cell in.
''Anaphase.'' I said. ''Mind if I check?'' she sagte with a light smile. I nodded smileing back at her. ''Anaphase.''
MIDNIGHT
I came through the window to her bedroom.She was sound asleep. But she was haveing a nightmare.Of some kind.She was moaning.Tossing and turning.
''Edward.'' she said.Her eyes still closed.She turned.She spoke so clearly,i thought she was awake.Why did she say my name?Then she sagte my name once more. ''Edward.''
Then it hit me.I loved her.She was it.She was the one.Alice sagte she had a vision.Of her,like me.A vampire.Tomarrow,i'll kick it up.And Zeigen her i want to be Mehr than friends.But that's just another chapter....
"It shocked me.I was not sure if she meant to attack.That's the only interpretation of her behavior that my past had to offer.But she was smiling.And the emotions that were emanating from her were like nothing I'd ever felt before.
"'You've kept me waiting a long time,'she said."
I didn't realize Alice had come to stand behind me again.
"And Du ducked your head like a good Southern gentleman,and said,'I'm sorry ma'am.'"Alice laughed at the memory.
Jasper smiled down at her."You held out your hand,and I took it without stopping to make sense of what I was doing.For the first time in almost a century,I felt hope."
Jasper took Alice's hand as he spoke.
Alice grinned."I was just relieved.I thought Du were never going to Zeigen up."
it is just MY opinion...
i think it was very well done thinking of it just as a movie Du know it wont ever be exactly like the book ... oder with such many detailz
things i loved:
*the humor they use (for example bella: if things end bad like i would become the meal) haha
*alice ! the character is very well portrayed
*the end ( victoria watching)
*the baseball game!
*men cast haha =P
*stephenie meyer appearing wooow!
things that dissapointed me:
* the clearing ! i dont liked the sparkling effect ...
*it was really fast everything
*alice's story was missing ...
things that were wrong: (i didnt noticed until the third time i saw it)
*billy was driving !
*when edward is playing th e Piano for bella he didnt sparkle
*victoria appears in the prom in the crowd (edward would read her thoughtz)
but i like it anyway ! it ir TWILIGHT !
i think it was very well done thinking of it just as a movie Du know it wont ever be exactly like the book ... oder with such many detailz
things i loved:
*the humor they use (for example bella: if things end bad like i would become the meal) haha
*alice ! the character is very well portrayed
*the end ( victoria watching)
*the baseball game!
*men cast haha =P
*stephenie meyer appearing wooow!
things that dissapointed me:
* the clearing ! i dont liked the sparkling effect ...
*it was really fast everything
*alice's story was missing ...
things that were wrong: (i didnt noticed until the third time i saw it)
*billy was driving !
*when edward is playing th e Piano for bella he didnt sparkle
*victoria appears in the prom in the crowd (edward would read her thoughtz)
but i like it anyway ! it ir TWILIGHT !