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(bellas pov)
I was studying for the dartmouth finals when edward walked in and through my book across the room.the Weiter thing i knew he was on oben, nach oben of me.you study to much he whispered in my ear his lips traced along my jaw and back up to my lips.then there was a knock on the door.go away alice!edward sagte angry.i pushed edward off me and sliped into my defenive crouch. its ok bella its just alice.no its not i sagte through my teeth then the door slamed down.a girl walked in and edward started screaming so i put my sheild around him and he stoped. who are Du and what do Du want!?!i asked hard.my name is jasmin im from olimpia.then i relaxed my crouch because i knew of olimpia.jasmine smiled your from olimpia to right.i nodded im a telapath just like you,am i correct.yes i sagte guilty.edwards eyes were confused and in shock.
(bellas pov)
I was studying for the dartmouth finals when edward walked in and through my book across the room.the Weiter thing i knew he was on oben, nach oben of me.you study to much he whispered in my ear his lips traced along my jaw and back up to my lips.then there was a knock on the door.go away alice!edward sagte angry.i pushed edward off me and sliped into my defenive crouch. its ok bella its just alice.no its not i sagte through my teeth then the door slamed down.a girl walked in and edward started screaming so i put my sheild around him and he stoped. who are Du and what do Du want!?!i asked hard.my name is jasmin im from olimpia.then i relaxed my crouch because i knew of olimpia.jasmine smiled your from olimpia to right.i nodded im a telapath just like you,am i correct.yes i sagte guilty.edwards eyes were confused and in shock.
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-Renesmee-
I terminate the call, and scream at the oben, nach oben of my lungs. It takes Carlisle and Rosalie thirty two Sekunden to reach me. The other Cullens are out hunting.
I find I can only speak in short bursts, so I focus only on Carlisle's voice, asking me what happened. I try to answer, but then, oh joy, Mehr pain.
* * *
I've been in labour for the past eight hours now. Imagine, just for a moment, that Rosalie is capable of PMS. And that simultaneously, someone's hidden her hair products, her iPod, her BMW, and her laptop. I was currently in a mood that would make that look like a kitten having a tantrum.
I broke Jacob's wrist Von accident.
I terminate the call, and scream at the oben, nach oben of my lungs. It takes Carlisle and Rosalie thirty two Sekunden to reach me. The other Cullens are out hunting.
I find I can only speak in short bursts, so I focus only on Carlisle's voice, asking me what happened. I try to answer, but then, oh joy, Mehr pain.
* * *
I've been in labour for the past eight hours now. Imagine, just for a moment, that Rosalie is capable of PMS. And that simultaneously, someone's hidden her hair products, her iPod, her BMW, and her laptop. I was currently in a mood that would make that look like a kitten having a tantrum.
I broke Jacob's wrist Von accident.
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Bella's Pov.
"ESME!!!!!!!" As I ran over towards her.
"Uh...where am I?" Esme sagte wearily.
"Bella?"
"Jasper?"
"Hey Bella, I um...am sorry for causing Du all this trouble. I didn't mean to.
I did feel sad that, I never got to marry you. That's whay I didn't come to your
party. Then, Esme came. Something really strange happened. She turned
purple and then, she was in a cloak. Then, she put me under a spell to follow'
whatever she says. I tried to stop her, but it was too late. She told me that
I would regret asking Du out for the rest of my-"
"MOMMY!!!!!" Renesmee shouted.
"It's always my ple-MOM!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?"
"We have to get her to Carisle. I will explain what I told Bella," Jasper sagte calmly.
Suddenly, everyone took three steps away from Jasper.
"It's okay guys. He's back to normal," I said.
Edward replied sharply, "Well how can we prove it!?"
"I will Zeigen you."
Then, Jasper hugged Edward.
"ESME!!!!!!!" As I ran over towards her.
"Uh...where am I?" Esme sagte wearily.
"Bella?"
"Jasper?"
"Hey Bella, I um...am sorry for causing Du all this trouble. I didn't mean to.
I did feel sad that, I never got to marry you. That's whay I didn't come to your
party. Then, Esme came. Something really strange happened. She turned
purple and then, she was in a cloak. Then, she put me under a spell to follow'
whatever she says. I tried to stop her, but it was too late. She told me that
I would regret asking Du out for the rest of my-"
"MOMMY!!!!!" Renesmee shouted.
"It's always my ple-MOM!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?"
"We have to get her to Carisle. I will explain what I told Bella," Jasper sagte calmly.
Suddenly, everyone took three steps away from Jasper.
"It's okay guys. He's back to normal," I said.
Edward replied sharply, "Well how can we prove it!?"
"I will Zeigen you."
Then, Jasper hugged Edward.
The dress Bella wore under the Volturi Cloak
Materials:
Petroleum Jelly
small microwavable bowl (discardable)
Stirrer (discardable spoon oder skewer)
Eyeshadow oder body shimmer oder pigment (the color Du want your lipgloss)
Lipgloss container w/ lid
Procedure:
1.scoop some petroleum gelee in the small microwavable bowl (more petroleum Mehr lipgloss!)
2.Microwave for 5minutes oder until completely melted.
3.Take out the melted petroleum gelee (carefull it's hot) and scoop in some eyeshadow for color. Put eyeshadow until Du reach your desired shade.
4.Mix the mixture well. Then carefully pour the mixture into the container.
5.put the lipgloss in the container in the freezer for 15-30 minutes.
Enjoy!!
Tip: To make flavored lipgloss mix in kool-aid to the melted petroleum instead then continue regularly.(careful WILL stain lips)
Petroleum Jelly
small microwavable bowl (discardable)
Stirrer (discardable spoon oder skewer)
Eyeshadow oder body shimmer oder pigment (the color Du want your lipgloss)
Lipgloss container w/ lid
Procedure:
1.scoop some petroleum gelee in the small microwavable bowl (more petroleum Mehr lipgloss!)
2.Microwave for 5minutes oder until completely melted.
3.Take out the melted petroleum gelee (carefull it's hot) and scoop in some eyeshadow for color. Put eyeshadow until Du reach your desired shade.
4.Mix the mixture well. Then carefully pour the mixture into the container.
5.put the lipgloss in the container in the freezer for 15-30 minutes.
Enjoy!!
Tip: To make flavored lipgloss mix in kool-aid to the melted petroleum instead then continue regularly.(careful WILL stain lips)
Edwards pov
"Bella family meeting " I sagte while eating my elk.
"okay i am ready are you?"
"yes "
So we so we started to run oder race i would say to the family meeting . When we all got there and got seated the meeting started .
Carlise Pov
"thank Du guys for coming to the meeting , and sorry for interrupted your hunting time . But we have some important news " i said
" what is it Carlise " edward sagte very serious
"Well esmee and i have decied to leave are coven and come back in a Jahr oder so okay and Du guys can leave if Du want to . But I am Going to start Von asking rose and emmett . so what is your desion ."isaid "well rose and i have decideed to go away for a little while and come back when Du come back ,and we will not be enrolling in forks this year.." emment said
"okay alice ,jasper are Du leaving oder staying" i sagte " well we are staying " alice chimed in.
"Bella family meeting " I sagte while eating my elk.
"okay i am ready are you?"
"yes "
So we so we started to run oder race i would say to the family meeting . When we all got there and got seated the meeting started .
Carlise Pov
"thank Du guys for coming to the meeting , and sorry for interrupted your hunting time . But we have some important news " i said
" what is it Carlise " edward sagte very serious
"Well esmee and i have decied to leave are coven and come back in a Jahr oder so okay and Du guys can leave if Du want to . But I am Going to start Von asking rose and emmett . so what is your desion ."isaid "well rose and i have decideed to go away for a little while and come back when Du come back ,and we will not be enrolling in forks this year.." emment said
"okay alice ,jasper are Du leaving oder staying" i sagte " well we are staying " alice chimed in.
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Preface.
The reason i left was to save my family. The one I cant live without. But i wish they were here. To hold my hand. Promise me everything will be ok. But i push that thought to the back of my mind when i hear the approaching footsteps. I stand there. Alone. Preparing myself for terror that i am about to face. If i could cry, tears would be running down my face. But when the hunters prepare to attack. I crouch forward, my lips pull back over my teeth. I let out a deep growl which was cut short. My head snapped up to the sound i heard behind me.
Preface.
The reason i left was to save my family. The one I cant live without. But i wish they were here. To hold my hand. Promise me everything will be ok. But i push that thought to the back of my mind when i hear the approaching footsteps. I stand there. Alone. Preparing myself for terror that i am about to face. If i could cry, tears would be running down my face. But when the hunters prepare to attack. I crouch forward, my lips pull back over my teeth. I let out a deep growl which was cut short. My head snapped up to the sound i heard behind me.
