Well, i am Schreiben a story. A story with Vampire and werewolves. It's like a novella from twilight saga books.. With the same persons and some characters from my fantasy.... i hope some Tag to add it and Du will say your opinion about my story which called ''A new life''
Let me tell Du something about it... The basic person it's me and my sister... My friends, my sister and i decided to go for vacations in a small island in my country and there i meet two vampires... Demitri (from Stephenie Meyer's Bücher - like New Moon etc.) and my friend called Mary...
My book it's very interesting with a lot of reversals as vampires, blood, battle, the heads of Vampire Volturi, Liebe etc....
Please tell what do Du think if Du read the little summary that i wrote.... Please...
Let me tell Du something about it... The basic person it's me and my sister... My friends, my sister and i decided to go for vacations in a small island in my country and there i meet two vampires... Demitri (from Stephenie Meyer's Bücher - like New Moon etc.) and my friend called Mary...
My book it's very interesting with a lot of reversals as vampires, blood, battle, the heads of Vampire Volturi, Liebe etc....
Please tell what do Du think if Du read the little summary that i wrote.... Please...
ok so this is my first stoy so please Kommentar and tell me if Du want me to continue and if Du have any ideas it would help.plz.=D
(bellas pov)
I was studying for the dartmouth finals when edward walked in and through my book across the room.the Weiter thing i knew he was on oben, nach oben of me.you study to much he whispered in my ear his lips traced along my jaw and back up to my lips.then there was a knock on the door.go away alice!edward sagte angry.i pushed edward off me and sliped into my defenive crouch. its ok bella its just alice.no its not i sagte through my teeth then the door slamed down.a girl walked in and edward started screaming so i put my sheild around him and he stoped. who are Du and what do Du want!?!i asked hard.my name is jasmin im from olimpia.then i relaxed my crouch because i knew of olimpia.jasmine smiled your from olimpia to right.i nodded im a telapath just like you,am i correct.yes i sagte guilty.edwards eyes were confused and in shock.
(bellas pov)
I was studying for the dartmouth finals when edward walked in and through my book across the room.the Weiter thing i knew he was on oben, nach oben of me.you study to much he whispered in my ear his lips traced along my jaw and back up to my lips.then there was a knock on the door.go away alice!edward sagte angry.i pushed edward off me and sliped into my defenive crouch. its ok bella its just alice.no its not i sagte through my teeth then the door slamed down.a girl walked in and edward started screaming so i put my sheild around him and he stoped. who are Du and what do Du want!?!i asked hard.my name is jasmin im from olimpia.then i relaxed my crouch because i knew of olimpia.jasmine smiled your from olimpia to right.i nodded im a telapath just like you,am i correct.yes i sagte guilty.edwards eyes were confused and in shock.
Hey ... This is my first fanfiction :D so if its not good just give me some constructive critism to make it better. Thanks (:
Preface.
The reason i left was to save my family. The one I cant live without. But i wish they were here. To hold my hand. Promise me everything will be ok. But i push that thought to the back of my mind when i hear the approaching footsteps. I stand there. Alone. Preparing myself for terror that i am about to face. If i could cry, tears would be running down my face. But when the hunters prepare to attack. I crouch forward, my lips pull back over my teeth. I let out a deep growl which was cut short. My head snapped up to the sound i heard behind me.
Preface.
The reason i left was to save my family. The one I cant live without. But i wish they were here. To hold my hand. Promise me everything will be ok. But i push that thought to the back of my mind when i hear the approaching footsteps. I stand there. Alone. Preparing myself for terror that i am about to face. If i could cry, tears would be running down my face. But when the hunters prepare to attack. I crouch forward, my lips pull back over my teeth. I let out a deep growl which was cut short. My head snapped up to the sound i heard behind me.
My awesome 'other':
Edward Du are delicious,
I bet you'd be nutritious,
I reckon you'd be good to eat,
Quite juicy and quite sweet.
Tastier than any Schokolade cake,
With hunger, my belly aches,
In a totally non sexual way.
Ha ha ha ha don't take this seriously guys. I'm not weird, honest. But Edward would be good to eat. Not that I would know... Nothing rhymes with delicious, Du know... Except nutritious... So anyways, that's my latest bout of weirdness, I hope I've met my quota for the day.
Edward Du are delicious,
I bet you'd be nutritious,
I reckon you'd be good to eat,
Quite juicy and quite sweet.
Tastier than any Schokolade cake,
With hunger, my belly aches,
In a totally non sexual way.
Ha ha ha ha don't take this seriously guys. I'm not weird, honest. But Edward would be good to eat. Not that I would know... Nothing rhymes with delicious, Du know... Except nutritious... So anyways, that's my latest bout of weirdness, I hope I've met my quota for the day.