True Writers Article: No Mehr Einhörner (Ch. 1)

posted by hgfan5602

This is my first Fan fic... and hopefully I will be continuing on this! Enjoy!

My name is Alice. I'm eleven years young. My life has been all... Einhörner until this year. It's sort of like all the fun has been cut off from my life. Like adults and other people alike all want me to have a short childhood. It's strange, because it seems as if everyone else is having loads of excitement in their lives. But I'm the only one who is at home, trying not to cut myself everyday because of all the stress in my life. It's difficult not to, and I haven't spoke to anyone so far. I don't want to be sent to a mental hospital. I'm not mental.... am I? I think that's Du to decide and for me to find out.
All of this... drama started when a girl in our class named Stacy decided to write a note and send it to one of my BFFs, Skylar. It said, "Alice, Skylar, and Sarah... Du will definitely regret being mean to me in the end." The first thought that came to my mind was, "Why would anyone do that? Why would anyone say that? And Sekunde of all, her name is faded at the bottom of the note but it's still obvious to see. Why? Why? Why?!?! Stacy was my friend... oder at least I thought she was. Why would anyone think of something so pathetic... yet something so vengeful?"
Well it turned out that she told our teacher Mrs. Harris... and she blamed it on Skylar. I didn't understand. Now Stacy was also being immature and making fun of my other best friends' hairstyles, clothes, shoes, and much more! I mean, grow up! Seriously!! Not only that... Stacy was also crying to our teacher... and making a huge sob story out of it. I was pissed... and sort of sad at how my best friend changed so much. Oh, oder should I say ex best friend.

alicia386 What is this story based off of? You said it was a fan fic what story are your rewriting? Also, adorable title. The character seems a bit younger than eleven. When I was eleven the biggest thing to have ever happened was not unicorns, it was more along the lines of silly bands and who is the funniest. We were way past the unicorn stage. The story all together seems a bit fast paced as if we are rushing into a story instead of giving us more background information and then getting into the plot. Instead it is like we are jumping off a cliff and landing straight to the plot without barely any background information. All in all, it is a good start and a already interesting story. Is this a journal entry or chapter.

hgfan5602 Okay thanks for the feedback @alicia386! I will reconsider that... and maybe change some things on this story because I think it's not the best that it can be. Sort of need to revamp. But thanks! This is a chapter.. but I need some time to think about this... i'm not sure if i should continue or not

Absolutely Wicked Ch.22

posted by Problematic129

22
    “Is this true?” The man whispered, not wanting to get his hopes up.
    The two intimidating men nodded in their polished looking suits. “Reports have been made there,” one of them spoke.
    “The reports?”
    The other man nodded. “Yes sir, the time has come, the book has been found.”
    “You’d better be correct,” the man whispered threateningly. “Or I won’t take it to kindly to dead ends.”
    “Were sure.”
    The...

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Charmed – Zauberhafte Hexen – Zauberhafte Hexen and Dangerous Ch. 11

posted by alicia386

Chapter Eleven: I Don't Hate Du But If Du Were On Fire, I Would Laugh

"Nice to see Du again, McKenna," says Arnold Stuart, my father's best friend and researcher. He handles anything and everything my father needs to know about. Arnold comes in handy one missions and assignments. Arnold was able to track down the guy who stahl, stola my wallet right out of my dad's truck. Let's just say that the guy had a punishment much worse then prison.
"Hello, Arnold," I greeted. "Is this important? Du could have just called. I might be a spy but I do own a cell phone."
"I didn't...

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Absolutely Wicked Ch.21

posted by Problematic129

21
    Terry
    I nervously wrung my hands as Alex continued to tell us what happened, I wanted to ask questions, make suggestions, but I couldn’t trust myself to that. The last time I suggested something I almost killed Iris and made her hate us all, I didn’t sure didn’t want a repeat.
    “She sagte it English!” Stilere yelled excitedly. “How awesome is that!”
    Brooklyn nodded like a scolded puppy, and risked a glance at Iris, who smiled at her. “Cool.”
    “Yeah, it was,...

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Girl code:The Pamela Jones Sequel Ch.6

posted by Problematic129

Chapter 6
    Major boy problems
    “THAT STUPID BOY NAMED CAL! OH HOW I Liebe HIM! BUT WHY WON’T HE LOOK AT ME?!”
    “TALIA,” I yell, hitting her with my pillow. “Shut up!”
    Talia glared at me. “I’M CALM!”
    I raised my eyebrow, and Talia sighed. “Fine! I’m not!-”
    “Inside voices Talia,” I remind her.
    Talia groans. “Ugh, I keep on forgetting, each time I look back to the way I acted, I was a freak!”
    “Yep,”...

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Somnium Vorschau Ch. 1

posted by alicia386

Chapter One

The constant roaring of the thunder and the sparks shooting from the lightening Du would have thought we had planned for this. Nothing is planned for in Somnium. No one expects these tragic events to occur. Even if we did plan for it, it still wouldn't change the mood. It would not make me feel any better. It wouldn't change the fact that my brother was now lying in a cold coffin dead.
The weather was the least of my concerns at the moment. This funus, oder celebration for the dead, was at my oben, nach oben priority list. Although I should be worrying about my fate, I wasn't....

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The Bandanna Twins Chapter 1

posted by tinaloo

A/N so here's a story that i did that was on Fanfiction.net and desided to share it with you.

Today was just a relaxing Tag at the FI kingdom as a young Flame and Frosta Played outside in there garden. At least it was relaxing to the twins, they where only four so they didn't know what really was going on. Inside the great schloss was the Dictator Spike watching over his young children fearing for them. "I cant go to the Meeting and Leave them all alone.." he sagte as he watched them play. He was looking at Flame who seemed to Liebe being under the sun that was shining brightly. "Flame is just...

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Bandanna Twins Chapter 1

posted by tinaloo

A/N: so i did this story on Fanfiction.net and i thought i would share it with all of you

Today was just a relaxing Tag at the FI kingdom as a young Flame and Frosta Played outside in there garden. At least it was relaxing to the twins, they where only four so they didn't know what really was going on. Inside the great schloss was the Dictator Spike watching over his young children fearing for them. "I cant go to the Meeting and Leave them all alone.." he sagte as he watched them play. He was looking at Flame who seemed to Liebe being under the sun that was shining brightly. "Flame is just like...

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How the dinasaurs met their end, part 1. Keep checking for part 2!

posted by TheEvilHoodie

The great snake god was having problems feeding his family. They were true vegetarians and were not going to eat meat, thankyou very much – never mind become cannibals. His family did have some strange ideas. The only other places he knew of that housed water and vegetation was the land of the dinosaurs. Granted, he was a lot bigger than the dinosaurs, but they had a lot of land. They would have to learn to share some Tag – just because they were ‘the most fearsome creatures ever to roam the planet’ it didn’t mean they could disobey the commandments of Mother Nature, the head god...

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Girl code:The Pamela Jones Way Ch.30

posted by Problematic129

~Genre:realistic fiction, humor~
Chapter 30
        Love is lovely, lovely is love
    Beth smiled victoriously as I entered school Monday, we hadn’t talked during the weekend and I was super guilty, but instantly relieved she didn’t pounce.
    Beth clapped her hands excitedly. “That smile! It’s a happy smile! I’m in Liebe smile! The datum went-”
    “Perfect!” I couldn’t help myself, I just had to say it, Beth and I squealed as we jumped up and down shouting...

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my story of discovering Schreiben with dyslexea

posted by abbyirwin

Hi guys I'm a 13 Jahr old and Liebe to write but I may not be able to write as fast as some pf u I have dyslexea when I think of dyslexicea when u think of dyslexicea u probly think of not being able to read right well I can not read great and with my dyslexicea I have troble writeing to something that takes maby u a Stunde takes me two hours I have been made fun of a tone of times about it the worst time was a teacher sagte abby how about u read out load for once so I did and I was stodering and trying to sound out words and in the middle of class a girl really sagte in frount of everyone abby...

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Change oder be Changed: chapter 2

posted by IlovePatch97

I Liebe seeing your Kommentare so please keep them comein. ;)

CHAPTER 2

''NO! Alana'' pleaded Jema.
''Please Jem it’s important and Du always say curiosity is important for young minds.''
''Yes but curiosity also killed the cat but in this case could get Du grounded and me in huge trouble'' Jema turned away from me as my brother walked into the kitchen. I could tell he hadn't slept much either. He sat down beside me and began to eat his breakfast. ''I'm going out and will be gone for a while and Jema I would rather you didn't clean the study today'' Carlos said, and...

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The keeper of the forbidden light chapter 5

posted by Annabeth788594

The night was cool and dark. Du can’t even see three feet in front of you. It is a good thing I want them to see me. Otherwise I would have fell over a hundred times because of those stupid baum roots. And above all I have the worst possible luck because my flashlight is dying. It flickered once twice three times and I am now left in the dark. I threw aside my disappointing flashlight and picked a good baum and started to climb.

I was almost half way up the baum kofferraum, stamm when I heard barking. Is that a dog? Then I saw a blinding light in the darkness. Then I heard them two voices having an argument...

happy baum akatsuki, chapter 1

posted by flippy_fan210

flippy

it was a normal Tag in the akatsuki. Pein was in his room doing paper work, Konan was making origami figures, Deidara was blowing things up outside, Tobi was annoying deidara and Miyu was practicing her elemental jutsus. She shot feuer at a bird, it went up in flames and set a baum on fire. “interesting.” she mumbled. She shot electricity at another bird and it exploded. “are Du gonna murder every bird from here to china?” itachi said? “shut up, there's nothing else to do.” miyu replied. “you could kill innocents.” itachi suggested. Miyu looked at him like he was crazy then...

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...Adira Anderson!!!

posted by hgfan5602

This is for the Hunger Games RP, but I thought it could be put on here to see what everyone thinks about it too.
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I stare up at the stage as they wait for everyone to be ready for the reaping. I hate the Capitol. I hate everyone who's even associated with the Capitol. I hate the reapings. And I hate the Hunger Games. I'm one of the very few people who don't like the Hunger Games here in District 3. Most people Liebe the Hunger Games here. If they get chosen for it, they are usually celebrating about it later on. Some prepare for...

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Girl code:The Pamela Jones Way Ch.22

posted by Problematic129

~Genre:realistic fiction, humor~
Chapter 22
        The little get together interrupted
    “Shut up! Du totally cheated!” Sage yelled at my brother.
    Adam had an offended face. “Me? Cheat? Please, Du help me win easily yourself.”
    “Hey!” Sage yells as Ali bursts out laughing.
    Meanwhile on the other side of the tabelle Grey and Beth were in their own little world.
    “You actually went to Paris?” Beth asks, smiling.
    Grey...

The war of Color, chapter 3

posted by 1999jacko

Rick lay in hospital with stitches all over his face and his left eye swollen up, a small eye patch like thing barely covering it up. His best friends- Allan, Brandon, Kyran and Duncan- stood around his bett telling him what happened after he left, Kyran was mainly telling him about it though because everyone had bruises apart from him," and so everyone was fighting at lunch and som black kid had his leg broken, it was so cool Du could see the bone sticking out and blood went everywhere over James, sp all in all we had a good first Tag of what they're calling 'the war'." Brandon smiled slightly...

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Inspired:Peacefully delicate

posted by Problematic129

I believe this is part 7, with another mixture of funny and inspiring pictures, cause let's face it. It's pretty hard to get fully serious, always have a happy funny mind to lighten everything in the middle of heartache and pain. Just a word of advice. Some pictures here come from pinterest hellobeliver.com, tumblr, gummy chocolates tumblr and deviant art (look for maryana02. deviantart .com), look for them, there awesome. I think one of these pictures is a repeat not sure, and too lazy to look fro the others.
Again I own absolutely nothing, and I do hope Du smile laugh and get inspired because those are just wonderful feelings and it's the purpose of all of this.
Enjoy!

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The Deadly Sins ~PART TWO~

posted by malmcd

SLOTH

'Do Du ever get off the couch, sir?
Do Du ever get off the couch and stop watching TV?
Do Du ever go for a run?
Do Du ever simply walk around oder exercise outside?
Do Du just play video games all day, sir?
Do Du even do any work?
Man, Du are lazy! '

I would not be surprised if someone
Said this to you, my friend,
For I am the cause of it all.
I am one of the Deadly Sins,
As Du humans call me,
For I am what makes people a lazy bum.

I am a daemon from the pits of hell,
As are all my other brothers,
But I must say,
That I am not a sin,
But rather a human instinct.
And it amuses me to see Du sit around...

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Millions Of Miles Apart

posted by malmcd

Millions of Miles Apart

From the moment your born somewhere out there Du have a true love. At less that’s what they say? They say there’s one person who has the same herz strings as Du and they complete you. And there’s nothing that can keep Du apart from one another...But what if my one true Liebe isn’t here? I mean what if I never find him oder her if that’s the case which I hope it’s not. I don’t know what to say but I’m different from the rest...What if there’s no one out there for me?
My name is Sunflower I was born on the first Tag of spring, March 20, 1998. And was...

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Sendoffs and Memories (Prologue to "The Spotlight Trained on Me," a Harry Potter Fanfiction)

posted by dragonsmemory

I looked around the platform, waiting. George leaned down and whispered in my ear. "Don't worry, Hailey. They'll be here."

I glanced up at him. He had changed after the battle, we all had. George, always the prankster, became Mehr serious. He had even talked about closing down Weasleys' Wizard Wheezes. The hole in the side of his head, where his ear used to be, was still unnerving, but I learned to accept it as a part of him.

"I know, George," I said. "There's still a connection."

"You mean that old twin telepathy thing Du had going is still there?"

I stood on my toes to KISS him. "Always."...