True Writers Article: No Mehr Einhörner (Ch. 1)

posted by hgfan5602

This is my first Fan fic... and hopefully I will be continuing on this! Enjoy!

My name is Alice. I'm eleven years young. My life has been all... Einhörner until this year. It's sort of like all the fun has been cut off from my life. Like adults and other people alike all want me to have a short childhood. It's strange, because it seems as if everyone else is having loads of excitement in their lives. But I'm the only one who is at home, trying not to cut myself everyday because of all the stress in my life. It's difficult not to, and I haven't spoke to anyone so far. I don't want to be sent to a mental hospital. I'm not mental.... am I? I think that's Du to decide and for me to find out.
All of this... drama started when a girl in our class named Stacy decided to write a note and send it to one of my BFFs, Skylar. It said, "Alice, Skylar, and Sarah... Du will definitely regret being mean to me in the end." The first thought that came to my mind was, "Why would anyone do that? Why would anyone say that? And Sekunde of all, her name is faded at the bottom of the note but it's still obvious to see. Why? Why? Why?!?! Stacy was my friend... oder at least I thought she was. Why would anyone think of something so pathetic... yet something so vengeful?"
Well it turned out that she told our teacher Mrs. Harris... and she blamed it on Skylar. I didn't understand. Now Stacy was also being immature and making fun of my other best friends' hairstyles, clothes, shoes, and much more! I mean, grow up! Seriously!! Not only that... Stacy was also crying to our teacher... and making a huge sob story out of it. I was pissed... and sort of sad at how my best friend changed so much. Oh, oder should I say ex best friend.

alicia386 What is this story based off of? You said it was a fan fic what story are your rewriting? Also, adorable title. The character seems a bit younger than eleven. When I was eleven the biggest thing to have ever happened was not unicorns, it was more along the lines of silly bands and who is the funniest. We were way past the unicorn stage. The story all together seems a bit fast paced as if we are rushing into a story instead of giving us more background information and then getting into the plot. Instead it is like we are jumping off a cliff and landing straight to the plot without barely any background information. All in all, it is a good start and a already interesting story. Is this a journal entry or chapter.

hgfan5602 Okay thanks for the feedback @alicia386! I will reconsider that... and maybe change some things on this story because I think it's not the best that it can be. Sort of need to revamp. But thanks! This is a chapter.. but I need some time to think about this... i'm not sure if i should continue or not

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The Inevitable Fate 16

posted by rory2011

while Kat cleaning the house ,she heard a weird voice coming from the corridor ,it looks like someone is eating there in a loud voice
she went to see what was there ,Mac was behind her when she saw a ghost for an old man eating himself
she looked scared and shock at the ghost ,the ghost of the old man looked at her , he was very angry ,he ran towards her fast while he's screaming and he was opening his motte, nachtfalter , he wanted to bite her oder maybe eat her
she screamed when he was almost got her but Mac's voice cut what she's seeing
" what are Du doing here ? " Mac asked
" I'm just a... I'm just cleaning...

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Absolutely Wicked Ch.7

posted by Problematic129

~Genre: Fiction, fantasy~
    7
    Zaria
    It was crazy, one Minute we were just wandering aimlessly around looking fro the Quelle of the noise and the Weiter this…thing, comes out from nowhere. We ran like crazy, not bothering to look back, we Lost Alex in the way and we were freaking out.
    “Where did he go?!” Iris asks, freaked.
    I shake my head. “I don’t know.”
    I’m close to tears and Iris looks pale, all of a sudden we hear this roar, followed Von a scream,...

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The Ghost Chronicles: Murder in Mapel hügel Chapter 21 'The finale'

posted by LadyEmzy16

Chapter (21): 'The Finale'
She walked happily on her way Home from school with a smile at everyone she saw in her way, suddenly she heard a twig snap right behind her, she turned and there was no one there she continued walking but she knew she had a feeling that something bad was going to happen and it just popped up every time she tried to ignore it, this time she heard the sound of footsteps other than her's on the gras, grass and every time she turned there was no one there, her fear was increasing every time she turned around and back again, she couldn't take it anymore she broke into a run...

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Coming Home: A Sons of Anarchy Fanfic Chapter 2 Part 2

posted by CapShunsuifan13

Both were silent for a long while, the Minuten dragged Von and Bobby swore he could see the entire scene playing across Husky's eyes, the same thing over and over again. A not so subtle cough brought him back to the living world, and he continued with his tale. "I woke up a couple days later, both Matt and Ethan were okay and alive, and I was damn lucky. In my act of bravery," he spat the word with such disdain and Bobby couldn't understand why. He thrown himself on an explosive device to save his men, if that wasn't bravery then what the hell was? "I managed to not even cover the IED, rather...

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The Stranger's Musings: A Collection of Drabbles (Part One)

posted by cuteypuffgirl

A/N: Hey everyone, it's me again...sort of. Anyways, this will be a series of short stories...or shorter than short stories based on word prompts. So I'll post three in each part. And they'll be maybe around five oder six parts based upon user feedback :) Now I'm using several word prompts courtesy of Dhampires, hgfan5642 and several others :) I hope all of Du enjoy this.

A Stranger's Musings: A Collection of Drabbles

Prompt 1: Hate

When I see her with him, my blood boils. My mind is being supplied several mental Bilder of her painful demise.

I hate her, despise her, loathe her with...

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Coming Home: A Sons of Anarchy Fanfic Part 2

posted by CapShunsuifan13

His mother set about straightening up the room, as he drifted into the bathroom, stripping down and climbing into the shower.
He turn the knobs, a feeling of instant security filling him as the water crashed down on his face. Something about a nice dusche just made him feel safe. He hissed a bit as the scalding water poured ever him and into his open wounds, he thought he could hear his skin sizzle when the water pounded down onto the gash in his forehead. He could feel the dirt fall away, the scent of death all falling away and circling the drain below. It took him awhile to realize the water...

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Eye of the Beholder, Chapter 1

posted by 1999jacko

Fantasy

Water looked confused as the old man sagte all this,"w-what do Du mean wizard?" Walter sagte his mind full of Fragen for the old man. The old man answered quickly, his voice seemingly getting older as he went on," Du are wearing the clothes of a wizard and Du have a wand in your gürtel so that means your a wizard." The hard,heavy breathing coming from the old man got louder as Walter answered," but i'm not a wizard, sir," the man cackled and coughed. " Come through here boy and sit down, I can't stand for much longer," he sagte and started to lead the way out of the room, which Walter...

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Not Under Tyranny (rock song)

posted by hgfan5602

I will not be under your tyranny
Your cruel and oppressive force
Yes, maybe Du should be my leader
But that doesn't mean I should follow Du all the time

Do Du know he's got Du bound
Under ropes and chains of cruelty
Well, I don't wanna be a follower
If it means I have to be a killer

No, I'm not exactly kind-hearted
But that doesn't mean I have to kill, kill, kill
I don't wanna be just a senseless follower
I have a heart, I have a soul, so I don't follow you

I don't just wanna be a follower
So I don't give a fuck bout what Du do, do, do
But I myself will not give in to the tyranny
So you'll watch me leave

No one's gonna stop me
Look, I'm walking out the doors of tyranny
And I'm not gonna be a senseless follower
Ever again in my life.

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The Inevitable Fate 10

posted by rory2011

after a long Tag of work , Kat came back to the house ,she stood staring at every single corner of the house
the house is almost empty ,she had to sell everything for the expansive painkiller that David taking ,the only thing left in the house is that little white chair , a blanket ,and her father's bett she knows that she can't make a life in that house , but she has to keep going strong till the last breath

it's a calm night ,David is sleeping ,Kat Lesen her Favorit book in her father's bett room
the bills ringing woke David up
" Kat ,that's Paul ,go and open the door " David sagte in pain...

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I Have Asperger's. So What? (Essay/Memoir)

posted by dragonsmemory

Only a few months ago, I was diagnosed with Asperger's Syndrome. Asperger's is one of many conditions that falls on the autism spectrum. Unlike truly autistic people, many Aspergians are excellent communicators…at least, if that's what your "gift" is. Du see, every Aspergian has a particular area where they excel. One could be a science genius, while another, such as myself, might be a brilliant writer.

Many Aspegians are either misdiagnosed oder never diagnosed at all. Our symptoms, are difficult to identify. Once, my mom went to the Child Study Team at my elementary school. She brought up...

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The Ghost Chronicles: Murder in Mapel hügel Chapter 20

posted by LadyEmzy16

To my honorable and loyal readers this goes because in just a few Mehr chapters..the story is going to end,and I have made a decision not have a Sekunde part but to post a new story The Stones of Aramis..I have gepostet the Prolouge for those who haven't read go to my Profil page and Du will find it in my favorites.
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Chapter (20):
It's been two days since Abbie's dream and she has been yearning ever since to talk to Susie about it, but she hasn't got the chances because of the very little classes they are in together and...

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Charmed – Zauberhafte Hexen – Zauberhafte Hexen and Dangerous Ch. One

posted by alicia386

Spy Fiction

Chapter One: A Big Difference Between Normal and Reality

"Well, maybe if Du didn't yell so much then I would try to listen to you!" I gave Christina a dangerous stare that sometimes made her back off but not today. Today she had one too many to drink and decided to stand her ground. She knew what I was capable of but still she remained focus on me. "Then Du think Du could just stand here and pretend Du actually Liebe my father!"
Her bright grey eyes gleamed a little, almost like she was hurt Von what I said. "I do Liebe him but Du are too conceited to realize the...

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The Inevitable Fate 9

posted by rory2011

David's health getting worse and worse after all these problems ,he can't understand anything happen around him ,he's screaming with Paul's name
it was very hard on Kat to see all that happening and she can't do anything ,this is the Sekunde time she feel of herself weak and pointless ,the only thing she can do is making her father's pain less with the tranquilizer

another hard thing for Kat is making money , her brothers won't help her anymore and her father is very ill ,she had to work in the hospice as a cleaner, she doesn't get much salary ,but she can buy cheap Essen for her father and...

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The Inevitable Fate 7

posted by rory2011

Jack has left the house ,the silence occupied the house ,Paul having his breakfast slowly ,he can't think of the Essen oder anything else ,he wanted to explain for David why he always out ,but he doesn't know from where should he start
Kat came with the brot and sat near Paul
" from how long Du know what was Jack doing ? " David sagte breaking the silence
Paul looked at Kat ,then he looked at his father
" you're late for your school young lady " Paul sagte
" it's only seven " Kat sagte
" Du heard what your brother sagte " David sagte
" bye " Kat sagte carrying her bag
" ok now we can talk " Paul...

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Sneak Peak of My Book/Novel "Remembering You"--Chapter 1

posted by PonygirlCurtis7

Chapter 1
October, 1964

I lied awake on my bed.

I couldn’t sleep.

My mind was wandering, racing to different topics at the same time. I couldn’t stay on one subject in my mind for Mehr than ten seconds. I was restless.

Just then, out of nowhere, I remembered something that I particularly didn’t want to remember. But I did anyway. It was something that I hated thinking about, and something that I thought about all the time. I got up, clad in only a pair of jeans, and walked over to my closet and turned on the light. I pulled down old, dusty boxes and yellowed papers off of the closet’s...

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The Ghost Chronicles: Murder in Mapel hügel Chapter 18

posted by LadyEmzy16

Chapter (18):
"It's possible" sagte Leo, "Or maybe not.." added Abbie, "What do Du mean?" asked Josh "We'll tell Du later" sagte Noah, "Right now we gotta go" he continued, "Ab,Leo" he sagte getting to his feet both Abbie and Leo did the same and headed to the door, Bonnie got to her feet and stood facing Noah, "Bye" she said, "Bye" replied Noah he leaned down and kissed Bonnie on the cheek, "See Du Abbie, Du too Abbie's best friend" sagte Josh, "My name is Leo" sagte Leo angrily, "Okay..bye Leo" sagte Josh sarcastically, Noah chuckled and let go of Bonnie's hand which he held tight after kissing...

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Longing For Cassie Chapter 2

posted by vampirefreak_26

“You know he’s trouble don’t you?” Sofia stood at the entrance to the küche looking at her daughter with her gray wolf eyes. Cassie was used to her mother looking at her with those wolf eyes when she didn’t approve of something. “I’m going upstairs to change, I’ll be right down for dinner” she could still smell Gabriel’s scent, she would never forget it, he smelled like a warm summer breeze and musk. The first time she saw him she felt a pull towards him, a pull she tried to ignore. It was too dangerous, even now, thinking of him made her mouth water. To get involved with...

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The Ghost Chronicles: Murder in Mapel hügel Chapter 16

posted by LadyEmzy16

Chapter (16):
After Quickly changing into a black T-shirt with a picture of a sleepy face that sagte 'I got outta bett for this...', jeans shorts and a pair of boots Abbie ran downstairs to Mitmachen her family and Leo for breakfast, "Good Morning!!" she sagte as she stepped into the kitchen, "Ahh..look who showed up" sagte Noah, "I thought Du were going to sleep in" he added, "Shut up" she sagte as she pulled a bottle of orange saft out of the fridge, "all right, I gotta jet, bye" sagte Noah getting to his feet, "Where are Du going?!" asked Abbie who choked on her orange juice, "A friend of mine,...

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The Ghost Chronicles: Murder in Mapel hügel Chapter 15

posted by LadyEmzy16

Chapter (15):
Abbie stared at the spot where Lily had just vanished, and wondering wether she might actually Zeigen up to talk to her, she turned away walking behind her parents and her brother Noah, Leo walking Weiter to her "I saw him, that boy" she said, "What boy?" asked Leo, "The boy in the gernie" sagte Abbie, "The one who almost died?" asked Leo again, "Yes and he did die Von the way they just brought him back" replied Abbie, "Did Lily see him?" he asked curios Mehr than ever, "Yes, and he almost gave up if it weren't for her I would have been dealing with two ghosts not one" answered Abbie,...

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A Little Bit Mehr Than Liebe (Part 1, Chapter 1)

posted by dragonsmemory

THE EDEN CHRONICLES

BOOK ONE: A LITTLE BIT Mehr THAN LOVE

PART 1: TWERA AND THE PRINCE

Chapter 1

Kikikyo stared straight ahead as he flew. Clutched in one foreclaw was a book of centaurian poetry. His father, King Parthurnax, disapproved of the centaurian Liebe poems contained within the book.

"Love? Bah! In my day, we didn't have anything called love. Du modern Drachen aren't tough," his father had sagte the week before. Kikikyo could remember thinking, <Here we go again. Another speech on how the ancient Drachen were better.> Between his young son (at the tender age of ten-and-seven) and...