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Opportunity of a Lifetime chapter 5

After playing a round of pool which I Lost terribly in, it was time for bed. 

The Weiter morning I had the worst wake up call-slash-prank ever. The guys came into my room with a metal pot and a spoon, making as much noisy as possible. I am pretty sure of that. I just kind of rolled over and pulled my kissen over my head. 
Hey! Wake up! Leo said. 
I'll be up in few. I mumbled. 
If Du don't, we're going to throw Du in the pool! Jake warned. 
They wouldn't do that to me! I thought.  I am so jet lagged. I just needed some Mehr sleep. I kept thinking. 
Okay, Jake warned you. Cam said. 
Weiter thing I know, I am being thrown over someones shoulder. I didn't fight back.
Rivers had me thrown over his shoulder and was walking really fast towards the pool. I was kinda of scared. I kept thinking wonder if Rivers doesn't throw me far enough into the pool and I hit my head. I just kept thinking. I almost started to panic but then I thought why would I panic? I'm not scared of the water. I know it's a deep pool and that I'll be fine. 
When Rivers walked outside it was super bright. I had my eyes closed and it still seemed way to bright. 
Wake up, Loryn! Rivers said. 
I swear Rivers if Du throw me into this pool, this will be the longest Jahr of your life. I threatened. 
Rivers stopped and set me down in the grass. 
That's no fun! Leo sagte sarcastically. 
Whatever. I sagte giving him an evil look. 
Okay I'm going surfing. Jake sagte as he walked past me.  
I went and changed into my bathing suit and went and grabbed my surfboard. The waves were huge to me. I hadn't ever surfed big waves like these. These waves were like 7 foot and I have only surfed in like 3 foot mush. I stood on the strand for a Minute oder two and then I paddled out into the line up. It seemed like it took me for forever to paddle out but when I finally made it I was exhausted. When it was my turn to go I paddled and paddled but when the wave finally came, I backed out. I was freaking out over how big the waves were. 
Come on, Loryn. That wave was the best one out of the set! Jake yelled. 
I didn't say anything back. I just paddled back into the line up. I was determined to go on the Weiter wave though. 
I saw, what look liked a good wave so I started paddling. I paddled harder and harder until the wave picked me up. I dropped in and pearled. The nose of my board went under water and I fell forwards. It was the scariest thing in my life   I had never pearled on my board before. When I feel forwards I hit the sandy rocky bottom hard. When I finally able to resurface I inhaled a big breath and prepared for the Weiter wave that was about to crash on me. When the wave crashed on oben, nach oben of me, I hit the rocks hard, then all of the sudden I felt my leash get caught in between two rocks. I couldn't surface. I stayed under what felt a lifetime. I had a buckle on my leash and I couldn't get it to come undone. I knew if I started to panic I would never make it so I tried to calm myself down. I kept feeling the waves just crash down on oben, nach oben of me. I just kept thinking if I stop moving than I will have a better air supply so I didn't move. I just floated and let the ocean Bewegen me. Finally I saw someone in front of me. I was getting dizzy like and my vision was blurry so I couldn't tell who it was. My eyes started closing and I couldnt stop them. 

Jake's POV 

When I saw Loryn nose dive into the water I had a feeling in my gut that something was going to be terribly wrong. As soon as she surfaced I felt some relief but when she had to go back under because of the waves I  had a feeling that she wasn't going to come back up. I yelled at the girls to go get Bec and Gary and then me and guys went searching for Loryn. When I saw her surfboard sticking up in the air I knew she was hung up in the rocks and couldn't get out. I was worried. Loryn had been underwater for a little bit now. I was scared that she wasn't going to... I couldn't finish the sentence in my head. One thought like that can mess Du up. 
When I got to Loryn she wasn't moving. She was just staring into Weltraum oder something. She had no emotion on her face and t scared me a lot because Loryn has shown emotion a lot here. She was always smiling and laughing. Her smile was so adorable.  I tried to undo Loryn's leash but I couldn't so I uncoupled my messer from my pocket and cute the leash off. Von now Loryn had blacked out from the lack of oxygen. I towed her to shore. Gary and Bec were both standing on the strand and Bec was on the phone I'm guessing calling an ambulance. When Gary saw me pulling Loryn in her came swimming up. Gary and I were both towing her to ufer now. When we got to ufer I started CPR right away. My dad was a lifeguard down at Bondi strand so I knew CPR and advance some advanced medical stuff that he had taught me. 
Breathe Loryn. I sagte as I was giving her CPR. 
Come on! I yelled. 
Right then Loryn opened her eyes and coughed up water. 
Thankfully I only had to do CPR twice to get her to start breathing again.  
Bec and Gary came riding up in mule/golf car thing with the EMT's. They put an oxygen mask on Loryn and were asking her simple question. Then they lauded her on a backboard picked her up and put her on the back of the maultier and rode to the ambulance. That was the last time I had seen her until now..... 



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Sam's Story chapter 4
Garret drove my mustang back to the house and helped me inside and right when I walked throgh the door dad met us. 
Samantha Fisher Fanning. My dad sagte right as Garrett helped me in the door. 
Dad, calm down. I took it off because I could walk. I said. 
Samantha. Was all my dad sagte and then he left.
My dad was shaking now and Garrett had gotten infront of me. 
Dad, please muschel down before Du hurt someone. I sagte peeking out behind from Garrett. 
Carlisle came up to me with a not so mean look on his face. 
Carlisle, I'm sorry but I couldn't take it anymore. Plus I think...
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When I woke up this morning, I was running late a usually. I jumped in the dusche right quick and luckly Alice had seen that I had no clue what to wear. It helps to have immortal family. Edward pack my lunch again and then Michael was there to pick me up. As I walked outside I noticed it finally started to snow again! I noticed a wolf coming out of the woods. It wasn't Jacob oder any other, it was Cody! I had been thinking about him a little bit. cody came over in his wolf form and pulled on my jacke sleeve towards the woods. I ask What are Du doind Cody, Du dont ever want to see me again,...
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When we were done treading water it was about 5 am and we got to dry off and go eat breakfast I think everyone was hungry. We went to class
afterward for what it seemed like forever but we watched a few Videos and answered some Fragen so of wasn't that bad. Then we all went
for a jog. It was so cold outside that Du could see your breath. We had ran about 2 miles when I started to have trouble breathing. I was
like great. So I fell behind some of the others and Senior Chief was pulling up the so I fell back behind him a little bit.
He asked “if I was okay” he sagte “that he could hear...
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Samantha 33


Soon after I started my homework I heard a knock on my bedroom door. 
Come in. I said. 
Samantha, how is your leg? Carlisle asked. 
It's fine. I told him. 
Okay, I just wanted to make sure sinse Du ran Home from school. He told me. 
Yeah, it's fine. Thanks for checking. I said. 
Right after Carlisle walked out the door Emmett and Rose were standing in the doorway. 
Sam, we are so sorry for leaving Du at school. Rose said.
It's fine, I'm over it. I said. 
Okay, well we'll let Du get hack to your homework. Emmett said. 
It took me three hours to finish my homework but once I was...
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When I woke up, I felt like Emmet oder another Vampire was sitting on my shoulder. I can't describe the pain.When my vision was clear Alice, Carlisle, Esme and Jasper were in the room. Carlisle walked over to me and said.
Addi, how do Du feel? He ask.
My shoulder its hurting really badly. I told him.
Okay. Carlisle sagte and then walked out of the room.
Where is Nathen? I ask.
Alice looked at me and said, He's fine.
Oh okay. I said.
I didn't know where he was but I shouldn't have to know where he was as long as he was okay. I didn't want to be so clingy, like always asking what are Du doing,...
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Addi’s POV

When I woke up I didn't know where I was I started to freak out. But then I saw the doctor so I calm down. He told me his name was Dr.
Cullen and that I was in the hospital and if u remembered anything.
I told him “that I remembered Sergeant strahl, ray kicking and punching me”.
I ask if “Jordan oder Max were okay”?
He sagte that “they were not hurt in any way”.
I was happy to hear that.
I then ask “what happen to Sergeant Ray”?
He told me that “he is in jail”.
I was majorly happy about that because Sergeant strahl, ray seemed like a pervert. He was creepy.
He also sagte “that I...
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Samantha 16  After I left the strand I went back to the hotel and took a dusche before going to see my parents. Before I got into the dusche I looked at my shoulder and it was swollen pretty bad. I barely touched and it sent a shot of pain through my whole arm and shoulders. I decided that a cold dusche would help the swelling just like a bag of ice would do. I got out of the dusche and i was absolutely freezing. Taking a cold dusche was the wrong idea. I put on my regular clothes which invovled of course shorts and a tishirt and tuen I headed to my parents house. I'm only 16 and I'm calling...
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I was in the hospital for five Mehr days before I got to go home. Alice and Jasper drove me Home from the hospital and Nathen was already at Home cleaning my room up for me. I was so sore from hitting the coral. I still hadn't remembered anything from my past at all. It was hard not to remember my family oder my past. I walked into the house and I thought I would start to remember things but I was wrong nothing came back to me.
Whats wrong Addi? Jasper sagte
I thought I would start remembering things once I got back here but I was wrong. I told him.
Your memory will come back, I promise. Jasper...
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Chapter 8 

I hadn't realized that I was crying, yet again when I was Schreiben my dreams down in my book.  I sat my book and pen down then wiped the tears off my face. When I looked up, Jake was standing in front of me. 
Why aren't Du at school? I asked. 
Didn't feel like it. Are Du okay? He asked. 
Yeah, I guess. I told him. Are Du okay? I asked. 
Yeah, I'm fine. Ive had to do rescue people like that before and so I knew what to expect. He told me. 
I just nodded my head to him. 
Look, about the other Tag when I sagte "you don't know what it's like", I'm sorry for that. He said. 
It's okay....
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Samantha 21

I limped around my bett room for a few Minuten and then I went over to the stairs. I stared at the stairs for a Sekunde and then I took one step vorwärts-, nach vorn but cold arms picked me up and walked down the stairs with me. Thanks. I thought.I limped into the küche and I saw a bowl full of water in it that had my name on it. Yes, it literly did have my name on it. Edward, I want to go hunting. I thoughtYou can't go hunting. He sagte walking into the kitchen.Yes, I can! I thought.How are Du going to hunt, when your shoulder is hurt? He asked.You're going to catch an animal for me and bring...
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Chapter 7 

I went upstairs and sat in the same spot. I loved surfing and I almost loved watching people surf more. I watched Jake go back out and surf till everyone got Home from school. When everyone came Home from school they stopped and greeted me. 
Hey Loryn! Is Jake treating Du like a princess? Paige asked. 
I just smiled and sagte yes. 
Paige sagte that she could tell that he liked me but I hadn't gegeben any signs away that I knew that could even give a hint to me liking Jake. 
Well good! Du deserve it! She said. 
Paige! Let's go, your late for training. Gary yelled 
Oops! See ya! Paige...
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Samantha 38

I want to thank TwilightSagaLdy for helping me on my last chapter. I forgot to give credit to her for helping me.

Even though I feel asleep easily, I didn't stay asleep that long. I thought I felt something cold wrapp around my neck. I told myself it was just a dream. I kept telling myself over and over it was just a dream. 
Or was it a dream? I heard someone say.
Who's there? I asked.
I felt cold hands grip my shoulders and I woke up screaming. I opened my eyes and there was the whole family standing in my room Rosalie and Emmett were right Von myside. I was breathing so hard and I...
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My Life as Oceana

I came up gasping for air to fill my lungs. I
wiped out while surfing and it was a bad beating
from the waves. It was head-over today and of course I skipped school that
day so I could go surfing. I was done surfing for the day. It was about 5 o'clock in the afternoon. My mom had sent a note to school saying that the
waves were going to be head over and I was unable to attend today. I was stoked that my mom wrote a note to the school. Who's mom really does that. I grabbed my towel hanging for the from the
lifeguard stand and headed towards my Land Rover. I opened the back slide...
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Hey guys! I am so sorry that I am just now posting this story!!!! I thought I had gepostet this!!!! Again I'm so so sorry!!!!

Samantha 40
When u woke up I was lying on Seth's chest. He looked so concerned even though he was asleep. I didn't want to wake him so I stayed still. He woke up a few Minuten later and 
I acted like I was still asleep. I felt his finger tips moving my hair out of my face. 
I woke up and Seth smiling at me. 
Thanks for staying. I said. 
Your welcome. He told me. 
About then both of our stomachs growled. 
Wantto go get something to eat downstairs? I asked. 
Sure. He said. ...
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Samantha 20 

Matt? I ask. 
Samantha, wow Du look beautiful. He said. 
Thanks. I said. 
I ran down the stairs and gave him a hug. 
What are Du doing here? I asked. 
I came for your birthday. He said 
Wow, thanks. I said. 
Come on Sam, Du have to see the backyard! Alice said. 
Okay. I sagte while laughing. 
Alice always gave me the giggles when she was happy. 
Alice covered my eyes and walked me out to the backyard. 
She stood me in one place and then took her hands away from my eyes.  When I open my eyes I heard a crowd of people yell surprise!  I didn't have any words to say after everyone...
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Guys, I'm sorry that it has taken so long to writerhis little bit!!!!!! I have major writers block and I have been so busy with school an everything! Again I'm so sorry. Hope y'all enjoy!



My Life As Oceana 2

Oceana, Brad is here. Dad yelled. 
Thanks, I'll he right down. I yelled back. 
I quickly slipped on my boot shoes, grabbed my cell and stuck a tube of chapstick in my pocket. 
Hey Brad. I sagte whil coming down the stairs. 
You look cute. He said. 
Thank you. I said. 
He gave me a quick KISS on the lips. Brad didn't carethat he kissed me infront of my parents because we've been together for...
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