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Opportunity of a Lifetime chapter 5

After playing a round of pool which I Lost terribly in, it was time for bed. 

The Weiter morning I had the worst wake up call-slash-prank ever. The guys came into my room with a metal pot and a spoon, making as much noisy as possible. I am pretty sure of that. I just kind of rolled over and pulled my kissen over my head. 
Hey! Wake up! Leo said. 
I'll be up in few. I mumbled. 
If Du don't, we're going to throw Du in the pool! Jake warned. 
They wouldn't do that to me! I thought.  I am so jet lagged. I just needed some Mehr sleep. I kept thinking. 
Okay, Jake warned you. Cam said. 
Weiter thing I know, I am being thrown over someones shoulder. I didn't fight back.
Rivers had me thrown over his shoulder and was walking really fast towards the pool. I was kinda of scared. I kept thinking wonder if Rivers doesn't throw me far enough into the pool and I hit my head. I just kept thinking. I almost started to panic but then I thought why would I panic? I'm not scared of the water. I know it's a deep pool and that I'll be fine. 
When Rivers walked outside it was super bright. I had my eyes closed and it still seemed way to bright. 
Wake up, Loryn! Rivers said. 
I swear Rivers if Du throw me into this pool, this will be the longest Jahr of your life. I threatened. 
Rivers stopped and set me down in the grass. 
That's no fun! Leo sagte sarcastically. 
Whatever. I sagte giving him an evil look. 
Okay I'm going surfing. Jake sagte as he walked past me.  
I went and changed into my bathing suit and went and grabbed my surfboard. The waves were huge to me. I hadn't ever surfed big waves like these. These waves were like 7 foot and I have only surfed in like 3 foot mush. I stood on the strand for a Minute oder two and then I paddled out into the line up. It seemed like it took me for forever to paddle out but when I finally made it I was exhausted. When it was my turn to go I paddled and paddled but when the wave finally came, I backed out. I was freaking out over how big the waves were. 
Come on, Loryn. That wave was the best one out of the set! Jake yelled. 
I didn't say anything back. I just paddled back into the line up. I was determined to go on the Weiter wave though. 
I saw, what look liked a good wave so I started paddling. I paddled harder and harder until the wave picked me up. I dropped in and pearled. The nose of my board went under water and I fell forwards. It was the scariest thing in my life   I had never pearled on my board before. When I feel forwards I hit the sandy rocky bottom hard. When I finally able to resurface I inhaled a big breath and prepared for the Weiter wave that was about to crash on me. When the wave crashed on oben, nach oben of me, I hit the rocks hard, then all of the sudden I felt my leash get caught in between two rocks. I couldn't surface. I stayed under what felt a lifetime. I had a buckle on my leash and I couldn't get it to come undone. I knew if I started to panic I would never make it so I tried to calm myself down. I kept feeling the waves just crash down on oben, nach oben of me. I just kept thinking if I stop moving than I will have a better air supply so I didn't move. I just floated and let the ocean Bewegen me. Finally I saw someone in front of me. I was getting dizzy like and my vision was blurry so I couldn't tell who it was. My eyes started closing and I couldnt stop them. 

Jake's POV 

When I saw Loryn nose dive into the water I had a feeling in my gut that something was going to be terribly wrong. As soon as she surfaced I felt some relief but when she had to go back under because of the waves I  had a feeling that she wasn't going to come back up. I yelled at the girls to go get Bec and Gary and then me and guys went searching for Loryn. When I saw her surfboard sticking up in the air I knew she was hung up in the rocks and couldn't get out. I was worried. Loryn had been underwater for a little bit now. I was scared that she wasn't going to... I couldn't finish the sentence in my head. One thought like that can mess Du up. 
When I got to Loryn she wasn't moving. She was just staring into Weltraum oder something. She had no emotion on her face and t scared me a lot because Loryn has shown emotion a lot here. She was always smiling and laughing. Her smile was so adorable.  I tried to undo Loryn's leash but I couldn't so I uncoupled my messer from my pocket and cute the leash off. Von now Loryn had blacked out from the lack of oxygen. I towed her to shore. Gary and Bec were both standing on the strand and Bec was on the phone I'm guessing calling an ambulance. When Gary saw me pulling Loryn in her came swimming up. Gary and I were both towing her to ufer now. When we got to ufer I started CPR right away. My dad was a lifeguard down at Bondi strand so I knew CPR and advance some advanced medical stuff that he had taught me. 
Breathe Loryn. I sagte as I was giving her CPR. 
Come on! I yelled. 
Right then Loryn opened her eyes and coughed up water. 
Thankfully I only had to do CPR twice to get her to start breathing again.  
Bec and Gary came riding up in mule/golf car thing with the EMT's. They put an oxygen mask on Loryn and were asking her simple question. Then they lauded her on a backboard picked her up and put her on the back of the maultier and rode to the ambulance. That was the last time I had seen her until now..... 



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Samantha 15 
I want to thank all of my Fans that read my stories! 

I sat there with Matt for a long time before I told him I hadn't seen my parents yet.
You need to go see them. He told me. 
I don't know what to say. It'll be awkward. I said. 
I'm sorry but Du should go see them now. He said. 
I know, I'm trying to think of a way to start a conversation with them because I don't know what to do. I told him. 
Wait, do about what? He asked in confusion. 
They're the ones who sent me away. What am I suppose to say. Hey, I'm back! Do y'all Liebe me still? I told Matt. 
Sure if that's what Du want...
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Samantha10


When I woke up, the son had already risen. I thought to myself why bother trying to make it to school if Du are going to be late. Carlisle walked into Oakley's room. 
Samantha, your dad wants Du to some Home and get ready for school. He told me. 
Okay. Thanks. I told him. 
I went to my car and drove home. Alice was waiting for me when I got out of the shower. She made me wear shorts and a cute tank top. I put in my Sperrys, grabbed my backpack and other school work and headed out the door. When I got to school as usual no one talked to me. I saw Garret four times and sagte Hey to...
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Samantha 41

When I woke up it was 12 o'clock in the afternoon.Seth was looking down at me while playing with my hair.
Good morning sleepy head. Seth said.
Good morning. I tried saying.
My voice was completely gone.
What's wrong with my voice? I asked.
Everything kept coming out all hoarsed. It soundedbad, really bad. Carlisle came in and took my temparature and some blood. I had a slight fever and I didn't really know why he took the blood.
You need something to eat. Seth said.
Nah, I'm not that hungry. I said.
Come on eat a little something. He said.
Nothing sounds good. I told him.
Fine but your...
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Samantha 19

I went to late and the Weiter morning I had to get up and go to school. Matt was on my mind some of the Tag but I knew that I needed to pay attention to the teachers. I didn't really want to stay after lunch so I skipped and went to the beach. I had already planned that morning to go surfing so everything was already in my car. I was at the strand within 5 Minuten and pulled on my wetsuit. I ran into the surf and surfed all day. At sunset I decided to go Home because I was exhausted. 
Hey Samantha, where have Du been? Alice asked as she greeted me at the door. 
The beach. I aswered. ...
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Samantha 14

Once I sagte my goodbyes to everyone, we were out the door and on the highway. I drove for a three hours untill, I got really sleppy and Emmett took over. I layed down in the back sitz and covered up with my blanket that I had packed with my pillow. I took those two things on every trip. When I woke up the sun was rising and we were Emmett was still driving. 
How ya hold up? I asked laughing to myself. 
Samantha, I don't get tired. Du know that. He said. 
I know I felt like laughing. I told them. Where are we? I asked. 
California. Rose said. 
Are we near some waves? I asked. 
No,...
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Samantha 11

The following morning, mom and dad made me skip school so I could pack. I packed all of my clothes and then I grabbed a backpack and started putting cold water wax, towels, chapstick, and a waterbottle. 
Dad walked into my Room. 
Sorry sweety but Du won't be needig this. He sagte taking my backpack. 
Dad no, Du can't do this. I have to go surfing. I said. 
No Du don't. He said. 
Dad, yes I do! I yelled. I can't live without surfing! 
Yes Du can and Du will. He said. 
Please don't do this to me. I said. 
I'm sorry honey. He sagte as he walked out the door. 
I sat in my floor with...
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I wiped out everytime I tried to stand up on my board and what was really embarrassing was that John was cute and very hot. I couldn't Zeigen him any of my moves that I had just learned to do. I finally gave up and went to sit on the shore. John also followed me in and came and sat Von me. 
I swear, I could surf. Du can ask any lifeguard on this beach. I told him. 
Okay, let's see. I'm going to ask him. He sagte and pointed at Matt. 
Okay, let's go talk to Matt. I said. 
John got up and went over to Matt and ask if I could surf. 
Yeah, she was an amazing surfer, before what happened. Matt said. ...
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Opportunity of a Lifetime 

Chapter 9 

After I had wrapped my ankle in a dry bandage, I started to cook abendessen, abendmahl for everyone. I made spaghetti. I thought it was really but apparently  Lila and Paige were vegetarians. I am totally a meat eater. I Liebe meat! Oh well, Weiter time they can make their own food. After I read over some things for school, I went to bett but that night I a strange dream. 
[i] I was in a restaurant with Nate. ( A guy from school that I had liked but he didnt feel the same way). We were sitting at a tabelle together and then my sister had showed up. She had been taking pictures...
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Samantha 27

After talking to Mr. Don for a little bit, Sam and I went surfing. I hadn't surfed so much sinse the last time I was here. Sure I had surfed a bunch in Forks but here I was shreddig the wave. I was exhausted yet again after another Tag here. Sam drove Home and I went upstairs took a dusche and tuen decided to crash on my bed. Sam thought otherwise. 
Samantha, come on Du need some dinner. He told me. 
I'm fine. Just let me sleep. I moaned. 
No, get up go downstairs. I made your favorite. Sam said. 
Maccoroni and cheese. I said. 
Yep. He agreed. 
I jumped up and sprinted downstairs....
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Samantha 25

When I got home, I went straight upstairs and took a shower. The dusche helped me relax some but seeing Oakley was a surprise and seeing him was shocking. I know I couldn't handle anything else tonight so I dried my hair and went to bed. When I woke up in the morning the sun was shining through my window and it made me smile. Alice came skipping into my room and Rose followed. 
Good morning. Alice chirped. 
I didn't feel like getting up my shoulder was throbbing in pain along with my lower leg. The wounds still hadn't healed from where I had gotten shot Von the hunter. 
I don't want...
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Samantha 23 

Sam had a smell. Not just any smell though, a smell of a vampire. We had went surfing that Tag during gym and we talked about everything. I figured out that he was a different kind of vampire because he didn't sparkle when the sun peeped out from behind a cloud. I was positive that he was a vampire, he was beautiful and pale. Mostly when he was surfing, I looked at how graceful and how amazingly he could surf. We surfed for about an Stunde and then we headed back towards school. 
Thanks for inviting me to go surfing with you. Sam sagte as we got into the car. 
No problem. It's nice...
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So guys for taking a really long time off! Sorry for making Du wait! I don't know if I'm going to write anymore. but time will tell! Leave a Kommentar if Du want me to write more! I kinda stopped Schreiben because no one was commenting on the stories!
So Enjoy!

Brad decided to leave around 1 and get Home so his parents wouldn't worry. That night had been perfect. School was starting back, strand was nice cool and life was going pretty good! The Weiter morning I was woken up Von someone coming in my room. They jumped right on oben, nach oben of my bett barley missing me. It was Brad. No brained there.
Hey, why are...
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Samantha 37

Ashtons POV

I ran back towards the house so I could tell Samantha that I loved her. When I got in the house she was still cleaning the kitchen. 
Hey. I said. 
She just gave me her most beautiful smile in the world. 
Let me help you. I told her. 
It's fine. I'm done. She told me. 
Okay. I said. 
So what did Du and Alice talk about? She asked. 
I started getting a weird feeling in my stomach like something was going to go wrong. 
Oh nothing. She saw my grade in biology and wanted to help. I told her. 
Oh okay. She said. 
I better get home. Dad is going to be worried. I said. 
Okay....
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Samantha 32

Emmett and Rose took me Carlisle who was working at the hospital that night. Edward and Jasper were already building the house back up and would have it fixed Von tomorrow afternoon. We told everyone that I was outside playing around and a baum fell and landed on my leg. Carlisle had to rebreak my leg because it was healing to fast for it to heal correctly. I was getting my full wolf gene back I was to excited. 
I've never seen anyone smile so much when they were gettig their leg plastered up. Carlisle told me. 
Well it's healing to fast right? I wispered. 
Yeah. He said 
That means...
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Samantha 30
Okay so I just wanted to say thanks to everyone who reads my story. I didn't think this story was going to reach this high of a chapter. Well I didn't think that about the last story either but it did. Thanks for Lesen everyone. Enjoy. 


I ran I to my room locking the door behind me. I then ran towards my window. I locked it and then shut the blinds. I was frightened Von Emmett. His face so cold and had no emotion in it. I jumped at a knock on my door. 
Sorry to frighten you. Alice said. 
I didn't say anything. 
Sam, open the door it's just Jasper and I. She said. 
I had then rush...
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Samantha 26

Hey Guys, 
Sorry this story took so long to write. I've had sorta writers block. I havent made my mind up where to go with this story right now. Sorry for the wait. Kommentar and rate please!!!! 


I went straight upstairs and got in the shower. When I got out Sam was sitting on my bed. 
Sleepy? Sam asked. 
Surprisingly, yes. I said. 
I dried my hair and then went out on my little patio. The stars shined so bright. They were beautiful. I felt Sam out his arms around me and I layed my head back onto his shoulder. Usually silence is weird and awkward but this time it was perfect. We were...
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Samantha 22

I stayed in bett for exactly three days and it was boring. I had nothing to do and the Mehr I read oder watched anything about surfing the Mehr I wanted to go surfing. My leg didn't hurt as bad as my shoulder did. I got shot in the lower part of my leg and then in the shoulder. I didn't see Matt at all those four days I was awake. I started wondering where was he and was he going to tell my secret to anyone. I had all of these Fragen running through my mind and I couldn't stop thinking about them. I finally had to get up and see if he was still here. That alone just made me curious,...
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Samantha 18 

Soon I was boarding a plane back to Forks. I slept the whe way Home and when we got Home I slept all night too. I woke up to rain beating against my window with thunder booming every Minute and lightening flashing every second. I knew I was told old to be scared Von a thunderstorm but I couldn't help it. It was sort of dark in my room so I flipped in my lights and tried to go back to sleep. The power kept surging on and off until the power went out which had a boom of thunder follow it that made me shriek on fear. 
Samantha, Du okay? Emmett sagte rushing into my room. 
Yeah, I'm...
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Samantha 17 


Edward took me upstairs and layed me down on my bett and then called Carlisle. Rose and Emmett were Von side the instant I came through the door. 
Why am I spinning? I asked in confusion.
Samantha your not. Stay awake for me. Edward demanded. 
I stayed awake as long as I could. Everyone was surprised Von that because I stayed awake long enough for Carlisle to get home, give me medicine and take x-rays of my shoulder.

When I woke up, I was in my room and the sun was shining through my window. My shoulder was wrapped in an ace bandage and wasn't hurting to bad. I got up and stumbled a...
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Samantha 9

It was kind of an awkward silence for a little bit sitting there with John but he ended up breaking it was was a good thing. 
How are you? He ask. 
Okay, I guess. I told him. 
You want to talk about it? He replied. 
My brother doesn't remember me at all. He just remembers everything else but me. I told him. 
I'm sorry. I know that has to be tough. He said. 
Yeah. Are Du moving here oder just visiting? I ask. 
Moving here. He replied. 
Cool. How old are you? I ask. 
16. He said. 
Sorry, for all the Fragen I was just curious. I told him. 
No problem. How old are you? He ask. 
16....
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