THEY STOOD WAITING for the train. They were at an opening far into the wood.
Spike bent over to dig out something golden. He found it was a power ring, but it felt different.
It had a different aura.
Spike slipped it into his pocket.
"We're just gonna JUMP on a moving train?!" yelled out Windy, unaware that she was trembeling like an aspen leaf.
Storm looked at her.
"Do Du wanna take antoher chance of flying?"
Windy froze. Then she found herself inching twoard Spike almost in a gesture of protection.
In the distance a train whistle cried. This made Kitty a bit Mehr alert.
The train sped by. They all...

"This is were I found the blanket Emily." AJ sagte to Emily. "Ok thank Du AJ."Emily sagte to AJ only to find out that she was gone."She left me! But why?" Emily was mad now, she then heard something."Foot steps, must be Jisseca!""EMILY HELP!" Jisseca sagte yelling out.""It is Jisseca! I need to save her!" Emily almost yelled out, but did it some thing was blocking her mouth."Shhh.... Don't make a sound." Some one sagte in a whisper voice. Then she was sleeping, but thinking:"Who was it? Was it AJ? No. Was it Sonic? No but it was some thing blue! Sonic, AJ who else? Star, no she's yellow. But who...

First off...This is just an opinion. >:/ Don't bash me just because your character is a Gary-Stu oder Mary-Sue. That is YOUR fault for designing your character that way.

Now, there are many Gary-Stus and Mary-Sues EVERYWHERE. If Du don't know the whole issue, here's some Fragen I will answer;

What is a Mary-Sue/Gary-Stu?
A Mary-Sue/Gary-Stu is a character that has many abilities, has no flaws, AND everybody loves them. The real name for these types of characters are a godmodder. A Mary-Sue is a female godmodder, and a Gary-Stu is a male.

Why are they bad?
They are unoriginal, overdone, and...

As the fuchs noisily sloshed through the muck and rain,he thought of where he was going.The Science Centre,which was almost abandoned,except for the mad scientist he worked for.It had been closed down not even a Monat ago,still in good shape,which is why Dr. fink, finch inhabits it.Dr. fink, finch was claimed to be the most insane man in the world, but the fuchs wouldn't believe it.Never.
He knew he was close.He could already see the very oben, nach oben of the centre,a dark,metallic dome.The young fuchs knew his mentor was working on a secret project,because even he wasn't allowed to see it.He had only caught glimpses...

Character Chart
Character's full name: Ningizzida the Hedgehog.
Reason oder meaning of name: Named after the Assirian god of snakes and serpents, unknown why.
Character's nickname: Giz.
Reason for nickname: One of his alleys started calling him that for awhile, but it never
really stuck. Ningizzida prefers his whole name.
Birth date: Unknown.

Physical appearance
Age: Ancient.
How old does he/she appear: 18-22.
Weight: Around 85 lbs.
Height: 3"8
Body build: Slender, sleek, and built for speed and agility over power. Has well develouped
calf muscles.
Shape of face: n/a
Eye color: Blood red, with...

“… There might have been a time when Du actually thought about others, but now it’s just become, ‘Get the villain out of the way and be proclaimed as a hero once more!’ I just don’t want Du to become something that Du don’t want to be.” – Lil the Cat from “The Misadventures of a Wandering Soul.”

Do Du remember the first time Du ever drew your Fan character? When Du created him/her, Du had thought everything out; who they dated, what they wore, and if they had any powers. Believe me when I say that Fan characters are the best characters in the world. Their stories...

(Boys, and, girls, of, every, age…)

Come here a song
A song that I’ll sing
A song that tells about a very scary thing
A creature that even the strong and fast still fear
Their pain and screams and suffering is all you’ll hear

The creature it hunts only the strong and the brave
Without a care that anyone will come to save
Its wrath is inescapable as it strikes fear
The hissing is the final thing that Du will hear…

“I am Slenderwoman,
I am pain
I am the one who will drive Du to become insane”

“I am Slender creature
You, my prey
Pray it is not Du I’m after on this day”
(Wouldn’t, you,...

Garinina's POV

I stared at the young woman, thoughts running through my mind. How did she obtain that bruise on her forehead...when she is facing up? There is no obvious evidence that she hit her head on the tub. Unless...she was moved or...she didn't die in the bath.

I stared long and hard at the rather large bruise on her forehead, and I noticed something was not normal about it.

I touched her forehead, it felt unusually hard. It did not feel like skull. Curious, I pulled out a scalpel and began slowly cutting the skin of her forehead; this earned a surprised and sickened gasp from my new...