"ROCKET!!!!" Called Nay-Nay as she banged out side of his door. Rocket opened it. "What?" He sagte annoied. "Well one lookies i am all better!" Nay-Nay sagte in a real cheerful tone. "And two dad sagte he only asked the Masion Keeper for him stay out for out of the masion for 2 weeks and 2 weeks end tomrrow, Du know when we have to go back to school. So Du might want to remind him of that so he doesn't turn into dust ok." She said. "Why can't Du do that." "Oh that's number three. Sonic called and sagte him, kat, Cindy, and Ghosty were gonna hang out today so he invited me." Rocket looked at her. "Ok i'll do it." He said. "Sweet." She Ran down stairs and out the door. She ran as fast as she could, laughing that she was finally unsick. She stopped at this really pretty flower. It was white on the side and red and rosa in the middle. She amired it for it a while but then it reminded her of Amy Rose. She stood up and stomped on the flower. 'At least i don't have to see her ungly mug today' She thought with grin. But once she got there the only one she saw was Amy. Nay-Nay stomped over. "What are Du doing here" They both said.
Susie was so exicted to see Amy again that she saw her arguing with another girl. "Amy?" Susie said. "Er I... uh Susie hey." Amy said. "Who's this?" Nay-Nay asked. " shes an old friend thank Du very much." Amy said. " well nice to meet Du uhh." sagte Nay-Nay. " susie and nice to meet Du to." Susie said. Kat and Cindy ran over to see what was going on. " whats going on we heard a lot of commotion nay-nay amy I bet it came from Du two huh." Kat sagte with a girn. "No." Nay-Nay and Amy both siad. " Hey whos this?" Asked Cindy. " oh hi I'm susie." " I'm cindy." " oh hi I'm kat." " nice to meet Du both." Susie said. denzel and ghost came angrily. "Huh?" sagte Susie, Nay-Nay, Cindy, Kat, And Amy. " answer my Frage who are Du and what are Du doing here!" Denzel said. " hmpt..." Ghost said. " argh huh..." Denzel said. " denzel and uh...well whos this." Susie said. " Ghost!." Nay-Nay said. " huh susie where were you." Denzel said. " firend of yours?" Nay-Nay asked. " yup and I guess that dude is your friend right." Susie said. "yup." Nay-Nay sagte happily. camele flur dylan mia and milo came running. "hey denzel atleast tell us were your going..huh who are Du guys." Camele said. "wait up hu...hu...hu...I cant run fast remember." dylan said. "well we were ok." Milo and Mia said. " welll duh Du guys can fly." yeah so as I was saying hi and Du guys are." Camele repeted. " I'm kat." "Cindy here." "Names Nay-Nay." "nice to meet Du names camele." "yeah and I'm dylan the coolest guy around." Camele pushs Dylan. "not a good time to flurt romeo." Camele said. "yeah dylan hmpt." Flur said. the girls gigle. "oh flur didnt see ya there huh." Dylan said. "yeah.....well nice to meet Du I'm flur." "well nice to meet Du guys too." Cindy said. "yeah." Kat said. Out of no where Sonic appears. "hey kat cindy nay-nay and ghost did see a portal open whoa Hey susie camele dylan flur and denzel were Du guys the ones that opened the portal." Sonic said. "Yup" Susie said. " sonikku I"ve missed you!" sagte Amy as she hugged him. Sonic pulled her off. Nay-Nay giggled. "yeah me....well I guess Du guys already introduced each other right." Sonic said. "Yes" sagte everyone. "cool."
"D*mn Du Ghost leaveing without telling anyone." sagte Bullet as he walked though the forest. Olley stayed close behind him. They didn't know it but Dark feuer was following in the trees. "bullet. Why are we even looking for Ghost? He'll be back." Olley said. "Yeah i know but as the oldest i need to prodect that Bo... Off!" sagte Bullet as he ran into Ghost. "You were saying." Ghost said. "Hmph. Hey what's the big deal leaveing without telling... Who the heck are thoose people." Bullet sagte once he saw Susie and Denzel behind Ghost.
Susie was so exicted to see Amy again that she saw her arguing with another girl. "Amy?" Susie said. "Er I... uh Susie hey." Amy said. "Who's this?" Nay-Nay asked. " shes an old friend thank Du very much." Amy said. " well nice to meet Du uhh." sagte Nay-Nay. " susie and nice to meet Du to." Susie said. Kat and Cindy ran over to see what was going on. " whats going on we heard a lot of commotion nay-nay amy I bet it came from Du two huh." Kat sagte with a girn. "No." Nay-Nay and Amy both siad. " Hey whos this?" Asked Cindy. " oh hi I'm susie." " I'm cindy." " oh hi I'm kat." " nice to meet Du both." Susie said. denzel and ghost came angrily. "Huh?" sagte Susie, Nay-Nay, Cindy, Kat, And Amy. " answer my Frage who are Du and what are Du doing here!" Denzel said. " hmpt..." Ghost said. " argh huh..." Denzel said. " denzel and uh...well whos this." Susie said. " Ghost!." Nay-Nay said. " huh susie where were you." Denzel said. " firend of yours?" Nay-Nay asked. " yup and I guess that dude is your friend right." Susie said. "yup." Nay-Nay sagte happily. camele flur dylan mia and milo came running. "hey denzel atleast tell us were your going..huh who are Du guys." Camele said. "wait up hu...hu...hu...I cant run fast remember." dylan said. "well we were ok." Milo and Mia said. " welll duh Du guys can fly." yeah so as I was saying hi and Du guys are." Camele repeted. " I'm kat." "Cindy here." "Names Nay-Nay." "nice to meet Du names camele." "yeah and I'm dylan the coolest guy around." Camele pushs Dylan. "not a good time to flurt romeo." Camele said. "yeah dylan hmpt." Flur said. the girls gigle. "oh flur didnt see ya there huh." Dylan said. "yeah.....well nice to meet Du I'm flur." "well nice to meet Du guys too." Cindy said. "yeah." Kat said. Out of no where Sonic appears. "hey kat cindy nay-nay and ghost did see a portal open whoa Hey susie camele dylan flur and denzel were Du guys the ones that opened the portal." Sonic said. "Yup" Susie said. " sonikku I"ve missed you!" sagte Amy as she hugged him. Sonic pulled her off. Nay-Nay giggled. "yeah me....well I guess Du guys already introduced each other right." Sonic said. "Yes" sagte everyone. "cool."
"D*mn Du Ghost leaveing without telling anyone." sagte Bullet as he walked though the forest. Olley stayed close behind him. They didn't know it but Dark feuer was following in the trees. "bullet. Why are we even looking for Ghost? He'll be back." Olley said. "Yeah i know but as the oldest i need to prodect that Bo... Off!" sagte Bullet as he ran into Ghost. "You were saying." Ghost said. "Hmph. Hey what's the big deal leaveing without telling... Who the heck are thoose people." Bullet sagte once he saw Susie and Denzel behind Ghost.
I had seen so many sites, about:
Bad Sonic Fan Characters
And there is so many critiques about EVERYTHING and EVERYONE designs of them.
So, I had come to this point of having 'good character'
No character isnt perfect.
If the owner loves it, that's all the matters.
Du can have a detailed character, if Du want so.
Du can have simply character, if Du want so.
There is only one think Du must remember:
Make the character's Design fitting in her/him personality and his/her story.
Thank you.
Have a good night, I'm off to sleep now. >8'I
Bad Sonic Fan Characters
And there is so many critiques about EVERYTHING and EVERYONE designs of them.
So, I had come to this point of having 'good character'
No character isnt perfect.
If the owner loves it, that's all the matters.
Du can have a detailed character, if Du want so.
Du can have simply character, if Du want so.
There is only one think Du must remember:
Make the character's Design fitting in her/him personality and his/her story.
Thank you.
Have a good night, I'm off to sleep now. >8'I
Ok, so I know a hedgehog whose life is dark... simple this story is about that hedgehog and their long, lost, forgotten life. How the good times turn to simply bad times. And that I know their life. How do I know this? I'm not a stalker nor a watch of life. This hedgehog is me... Shadey Grey the last dark user... the last hope of the planet Dark/Light. First off, dark users are like chaos users, they use dark power oder darkness control and so do chaos users... they use chaos control. I never cared for anyone... not even you. Only that I Lost my family... my friends... everyone I knew and loved. And I seeked revenge for them... only to find new friends. Friends that could handle my anger... I become calm for some time. Yet, I still kill people for my family and friends...for anything I can remember.
-Shadey Grey, writer.
(Thank-you for Lesen this intro, tell me if I should write this oder not. I start Weiter week. 1/12/12)
-Shadey Grey, writer.
(Thank-you for Lesen this intro, tell me if I should write this oder not. I start Weiter week. 1/12/12)