(WOAH WAT. :U Yes i'm bored. So all the smart peeps in TGOL get a story. TAKE THAT BROTHER.)
Conner's POV:
I've never liked stories, much less one's like this.
People look down at me, but what they see is so little. I
may be eleven, but I know Mehr then you'll ever
understand. But before I tell Du my tell, listen close, and
take my Guter Rat Von heart. Don't trust him. Don't trust
Drake....
It all started one hot day, my father had come
back from the bank. But I felt something wrong. Very
wrong. My father was always a calm guy, but today,
he had the most worried face I've ever seen.
"Hey, dad....what's wrong?" I got up and left my
homework on the couch Weiter to my sweet little sister
Connie, who Von now, was almost as worried as I was.
"They robbed the bank..." He sagte as he stared at
the floor. "I saw who did it but...if I say anything, they'll
kil-" He stopped and looked at Connie and me. And I
knew why.
Connie has a very serious illness. She can't do
much without her meds, if she tried to even pick up
something heavy, she could become unconscious.
He didn't want to worry me and Connie.
He left to the küche where my mother was. Connie
looked at me, she may only be 6, but she wasn't
stupid. We where always different from other kids.
I listened to them talk in the kitchen. And that's when
I heard my mother begin to cry. I never liked it when
she cried.
I was a big brother now. I could just let this happen. I
had to get my sister her medicines, and no can stop
me.
So right then I dashed out the door, my homework
dropped to the floor.
As I ran faster and faster, I came up with a song in
my head. It's what I did when things like this
happened. He got me motivated, pumped, he made
my veins working harder. I'm one of the fastest
runners you'll see, I already Lost sight of Home a long
time ago.
The tune in my head got stronger and stronger with
each step I took.
There was no stopping me now. Not now.
I ran to the field where I worked during the summer.
Asked the owner if he'd let me work for pay again.
And of course, he sagte yes.
When the Monat was done, everything was normal.
I had worked so much, I had to stay up late to do
homework. My parents told me I didn't have to do all
this, but I knew I had to. The thought of my sister
without her medicines scared me. I just wouldn't be
able to watch her suffer.
Mouths past and everything was normal....Until, that
fateful Tag came. The Tag that changed my life.
(DAH! I SWEAR IT'LL BE LONGER Weiter TIME!)
Conner's POV:
I've never liked stories, much less one's like this.
People look down at me, but what they see is so little. I
may be eleven, but I know Mehr then you'll ever
understand. But before I tell Du my tell, listen close, and
take my Guter Rat Von heart. Don't trust him. Don't trust
Drake....
It all started one hot day, my father had come
back from the bank. But I felt something wrong. Very
wrong. My father was always a calm guy, but today,
he had the most worried face I've ever seen.
"Hey, dad....what's wrong?" I got up and left my
homework on the couch Weiter to my sweet little sister
Connie, who Von now, was almost as worried as I was.
"They robbed the bank..." He sagte as he stared at
the floor. "I saw who did it but...if I say anything, they'll
kil-" He stopped and looked at Connie and me. And I
knew why.
Connie has a very serious illness. She can't do
much without her meds, if she tried to even pick up
something heavy, she could become unconscious.
He didn't want to worry me and Connie.
He left to the küche where my mother was. Connie
looked at me, she may only be 6, but she wasn't
stupid. We where always different from other kids.
I listened to them talk in the kitchen. And that's when
I heard my mother begin to cry. I never liked it when
she cried.
I was a big brother now. I could just let this happen. I
had to get my sister her medicines, and no can stop
me.
So right then I dashed out the door, my homework
dropped to the floor.
As I ran faster and faster, I came up with a song in
my head. It's what I did when things like this
happened. He got me motivated, pumped, he made
my veins working harder. I'm one of the fastest
runners you'll see, I already Lost sight of Home a long
time ago.
The tune in my head got stronger and stronger with
each step I took.
There was no stopping me now. Not now.
I ran to the field where I worked during the summer.
Asked the owner if he'd let me work for pay again.
And of course, he sagte yes.
When the Monat was done, everything was normal.
I had worked so much, I had to stay up late to do
homework. My parents told me I didn't have to do all
this, but I knew I had to. The thought of my sister
without her medicines scared me. I just wouldn't be
able to watch her suffer.
Mouths past and everything was normal....Until, that
fateful Tag came. The Tag that changed my life.
(DAH! I SWEAR IT'LL BE LONGER Weiter TIME!)
I had seen so many sites, about:
Bad Sonic Fan Characters
And there is so many critiques about EVERYTHING and EVERYONE designs of them.
So, I had come to this point of having 'good character'
No character isnt perfect.
If the owner loves it, that's all the matters.
Du can have a detailed character, if Du want so.
Du can have simply character, if Du want so.
There is only one think Du must remember:
Make the character's Design fitting in her/him personality and his/her story.
Thank you.
Have a good night, I'm off to sleep now. >8'I
Bad Sonic Fan Characters
And there is so many critiques about EVERYTHING and EVERYONE designs of them.
So, I had come to this point of having 'good character'
No character isnt perfect.
If the owner loves it, that's all the matters.
Du can have a detailed character, if Du want so.
Du can have simply character, if Du want so.
There is only one think Du must remember:
Make the character's Design fitting in her/him personality and his/her story.
Thank you.
Have a good night, I'm off to sleep now. >8'I
Ok, so I know a hedgehog whose life is dark... simple this story is about that hedgehog and their long, lost, forgotten life. How the good times turn to simply bad times. And that I know their life. How do I know this? I'm not a stalker nor a watch of life. This hedgehog is me... Shadey Grey the last dark user... the last hope of the planet Dark/Light. First off, dark users are like chaos users, they use dark power oder darkness control and so do chaos users... they use chaos control. I never cared for anyone... not even you. Only that I Lost my family... my friends... everyone I knew and loved. And I seeked revenge for them... only to find new friends. Friends that could handle my anger... I become calm for some time. Yet, I still kill people for my family and friends...for anything I can remember.
-Shadey Grey, writer.
(Thank-you for Lesen this intro, tell me if I should write this oder not. I start Weiter week. 1/12/12)
-Shadey Grey, writer.
(Thank-you for Lesen this intro, tell me if I should write this oder not. I start Weiter week. 1/12/12)
Name: Natsumi
Age: 16 1/2
Gender: female
Family: Mom, Dad, younger brother
Powers: none
Backstory: Natsumi lives a normal life. Her mom is an actress, and her dad works at a hospital. Her parents aren't Home often. So she usually has to take care of her little bro.
They tend to argue alot....but that's what siblings do, right? She lives in a rural area, and her house is pretty big. In order to protect her brother, she's been specially trained in karate and Kung-Fu. But it's only used in emergencies. she's really shy, except around close friends. And isn't afraid to be aggressive.
Interesting information: she originally was made a "Regular Show" Fan chara. And she still is. But she is also a Fan chara in the Sonic world too. (but in regular show, she's 23) She was also named after a character in the
manga/anime series "Sgt. Frog"
Well, hope ya liked the article! ^^
Age: 16 1/2
Gender: female
Family: Mom, Dad, younger brother
Powers: none
Backstory: Natsumi lives a normal life. Her mom is an actress, and her dad works at a hospital. Her parents aren't Home often. So she usually has to take care of her little bro.
They tend to argue alot....but that's what siblings do, right? She lives in a rural area, and her house is pretty big. In order to protect her brother, she's been specially trained in karate and Kung-Fu. But it's only used in emergencies. she's really shy, except around close friends. And isn't afraid to be aggressive.
Interesting information: she originally was made a "Regular Show" Fan chara. And she still is. But she is also a Fan chara in the Sonic world too. (but in regular show, she's 23) She was also named after a character in the
manga/anime series "Sgt. Frog"
Well, hope ya liked the article! ^^
Midnight Stormcloud
Midnight:I cant believe we did this!
Platinum:Im just glad we get to do this together!
(5 hours later)
Platinum:Im really tired.
Midnight:Me too,lets go to sleep.
(They wake up)
Platinum:Midnight,do Du see that thing over there
Midnight:Yeah I do,lets see what it is.
Platinum:Hi!Im Platinum And this is Midnight
Midnight:Uhhhhh...H-hi
Silver:Im Silver.Nice to meet Du ladies.
Midnight:Platinum come with me.NOW!
Platinum:Okay?
(Midnight whispers she likes Silver)
Platinum:OMG!
Midnight:Dont tell anyone!
Platinum:I promise.
Silver:Is something wrong?
Platinum:No!We were just talking about our quest to find the chaos smaragd on Chaos Mountain.
Silver:Oh.I see.I have to go,I'll see Du again.Goodbye Platinum and Midnight
Platinum:Bye!
Midnight:Ummmm...Bye Silver.
THE END!I HOPED Du LIKED IT!
PLEASE READ PART 3 THE FINALE!
Platinum Silverburst
Vince soon was at G.U.N.Two men where guarding the entrance."You may not pass!"One exclaimed.Vince soon knocked them out with a few swings from his guitar.He quietly went into the HQ.He sneaked around trying to find Ash."Dammit,where is she?"He whispered to himself.
Soon he found the room where they where about to experiment on Ash.Ash kept dodging the needle full of toxic.Vince knocked the scientist out be for he could inject the needle.He grabbed Ash carried her when the guards chased them trough.
Ash soon grew her bat wings and killed all the guards.Vince was startled.When they escaped he kept quiet.They ended up on oben, nach oben of a cliff.
Ash coulodnt take it any more.She kissed Vince as the moonlight shined on them.
The End ~AshxVince~
Soon he found the room where they where about to experiment on Ash.Ash kept dodging the needle full of toxic.Vince knocked the scientist out be for he could inject the needle.He grabbed Ash carried her when the guards chased them trough.
Ash soon grew her bat wings and killed all the guards.Vince was startled.When they escaped he kept quiet.They ended up on oben, nach oben of a cliff.
Ash coulodnt take it any more.She kissed Vince as the moonlight shined on them.
The End ~AshxVince~
