Flare was surprised that Thorn was awake, since she tried everything she could to wake him up. Scar and Bard noticed too. " Hey boss, the little ratte is awake.", sagte Scar. Bard growled, "I see that. You, blue fuchs girl, how did Du wake him up?" Flare just stared at Bard," I don't know... The water spilled on him and he-" Bard interrupted her," That's it the water! That's how Du wake them up, like being awoken from a nightmare. That's very intersting to know...Scar! Grab the water, we need to wake up Nook." Scar walked into the cage to grab the water, which was only halfway full. Flare grabbed it and poured it onto the ground. "You idiot! Oh well, now Du can't save your family and friends..." Chuckled Bard. Scar walked back out of the cage and slammed the door and locked it. Flare could obliviously tell that he was upset. Most likely I got rid of the only way to save his friend. She glanced at Thorn who was staring at her," How did I get here? Who are you?", he went to get up, but immediately fell. Flare ran to his side," W-Why am I so weak? My stomach it hurts..." Thorn grabbed his stomach and laid on the ground," Don't worry I'll bring Du some food." Flare sagte and hurried to her backpack. She grabbed the extra sandwiche and handed it to Thorn," Du haven't eaten in several days, Du need to eat this." Thorn slowly sat up and ate the sandwich. After he was finished, he looked around and noticed Bard and Scar. He ran to the bars of the cage," You! Du kidnapped me to lead my sister here! So she would get stuck in this place and die here! Where is she!" Bard smiled," We don't know, she got Lost in the tunnels of this place. She could be gone forever. And it's all your fault for not listening to her." Thorn felt a stab of pain in his heart. Bard was right, he went out into the woods when Rose was gone and that's how he got kidnapped. Flare ran up beside him," Don't listen to them! They're just trying to make Du weak! It isn't your fault." Thorn shook her away," but it is, I should've of listened to my sister and I didn't and now I'm here and she's somewhere stuck in this strange place. This is all my fault..." Thorn began to cry. He wiped his tears away and whispered to himself," I'm tough, and tough guys don't cry." Flare got her backpack and pulled out her Sekunde water bottle, " Here drink this. But be careful, Bard will take it away if he sees it. Take small sips, it could be the only way to save everyone." Thorn nodded and secretly took a couple sips," I never introduced myself," Flare said," my name is Flare. I came here with my mom, my sister Nat, and your sister Rose to rescue you." "Really? I'm Thorn. Is my sister really here?" Asked Thorn. Flare nodded," yes, but we have to find a way out first."
To Be Continued.
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To Be Continued.
Please leave a Kommentar if Du liked it. It would make me happy. :)
"You're misson is to recover the chaos emeralds." "ok" Ruby runs off heading towards Eggman's base."who's that" ruby thinks. As a Blue hedgehog races by. "It don't matter" As ruby sneaks into one of the vents. Crawling until the she sees the glow of the red chaos emerald. "It's like taking Süßigkeiten form a baby" ruby jumps out of the vent and takes the chaos emerald. As she gets ready to leave a two tailed fuchs walks in. "huh, who are you" "I'm ruby, don't bother me" she jumps into the vent before tails can get her. "Get back here ruby" Ruby escapes Eggman's base and run torwds the spy HQ. "so Du say a red hedgehog took the chaos emerald" says sonic "yes, she escaped before I could get her" says tails angerliy "let go after her,sonic" says cream "I'm back" "Good job, angent ruby"says Emma the HQ leader "I have a question, who's the yellow two tailed fox" ruby demands "tails the fuchs he travels with sonic the hedgehog" "tell me more"
I had seen so many sites, about:
Bad Sonic Fan Characters
And there is so many critiques about EVERYTHING and EVERYONE designs of them.
So, I had come to this point of having 'good character'
No character isnt perfect.
If the owner loves it, that's all the matters.
Du can have a detailed character, if Du want so.
Du can have simply character, if Du want so.
There is only one think Du must remember:
Make the character's Design fitting in her/him personality and his/her story.
Thank you.
Have a good night, I'm off to sleep now. >8'I
Bad Sonic Fan Characters
And there is so many critiques about EVERYTHING and EVERYONE designs of them.
So, I had come to this point of having 'good character'
No character isnt perfect.
If the owner loves it, that's all the matters.
Du can have a detailed character, if Du want so.
Du can have simply character, if Du want so.
There is only one think Du must remember:
Make the character's Design fitting in her/him personality and his/her story.
Thank you.
Have a good night, I'm off to sleep now. >8'I
Ok, so I know a hedgehog whose life is dark... simple this story is about that hedgehog and their long, lost, forgotten life. How the good times turn to simply bad times. And that I know their life. How do I know this? I'm not a stalker nor a watch of life. This hedgehog is me... Shadey Grey the last dark user... the last hope of the planet Dark/Light. First off, dark users are like chaos users, they use dark power oder darkness control and so do chaos users... they use chaos control. I never cared for anyone... not even you. Only that I Lost my family... my friends... everyone I knew and loved. And I seeked revenge for them... only to find new friends. Friends that could handle my anger... I become calm for some time. Yet, I still kill people for my family and friends...for anything I can remember.
-Shadey Grey, writer.
(Thank-you for Lesen this intro, tell me if I should write this oder not. I start Weiter week. 1/12/12)
-Shadey Grey, writer.
(Thank-you for Lesen this intro, tell me if I should write this oder not. I start Weiter week. 1/12/12)