Episode I: Chapter 1
The Story Unfolds
"Miles! Its time to wake up!" Shouted Erica Prowler from downstairs
"Okay mom..." sighed a groggy young fuchs Von the name of Miles Prowler.
Miles is an orange, seven Jahr old fuchs who is a Cobaltian fuchs and Mobian fuchs hybrid. He was born with a skeleton made completely from steel, and blood red eyes.
Miles reluctantly got out of the comfort of his warm bett and began to change out of his pajamas. As he did so a mouthwatering aroma drifted into his room from the kitchen. Miles knew exactly what that wonderful smell was, pfannkuchen and bacon.
Miles quickly changed into his Favorit blue hemd, shirt and black shorts. Then he ran out his room, down the hall, down the stairs, and into the dining room. Sitting at the tabelle was Miles' dad, West Prowler. West is from the planet Cobalt.
"Sleep well son?" West asked his son,
"You bet dad!" Miles replied happily, as he sat at the table
"Thats good" West smiled, running his hand through his brown hair. Miles decided to joke around with his father and ran his fingers through his pitch black hair. West chuckled at his son's playful joke. Suddenly the sound of someone running, and soon enough Zoey, Miles six Jahr old sister, ran into the dining room holding a armored knight doll.
"Big Brother!" Zoey exclaimed running up to her brother and hugging him.
"Hi Zoey" Miles sagte giving her a hug and rubbing her hair. Zoey let go of Miles and sat in the chair Weiter to him.
"How'd Du sleep, Princess?" West asked Zoey
"Yeah, did the monsters get you?" Miles teased, adjusting himself in the chair
"The monsters didn't get me because Sir. Night protected me," Zoey sagte hugging her doll. Erica walked into the room holding a large teller, platte of pfannkuchen and bacon.
"Maybe I should make Sir. Night your royal guardian" Erica sagte putting the patter down onto the table
"REALLY?" Zoey gasped, Erica nodded a yes "YAY!"
"Well, then there is no sense in letting out Essen go cold lets dig in!" West sagte happily
After Breakfast...
Miles was sitting on the couch full from the meal him mom cooked, when there came a knock at the door
"I'll get it!" Zoey yelled, Miles looked at the door "Miles it Kilo he wants to know if Du want to play"
"YEAH!" Miles exclaimed running to the door. The two Friends walked into the backyard to play.
"Can I play?" Zoey asked
"Sure" replied Kilo.
"I know what we can play! Hide and seek!" Zoey said
"Good idea... IM IT" Kilo yelled as he ran to the nearest baum and started counting.
Miles ran up to a baum and hid behind it, with Zoey following him. Miles made a shush sound to keep Zoey quiet.
"Ready oder not here I come!" Kilo shouted, Miles looked slowly around the baum and saw no Kilo.
"Lets make a run for it" Miles whispered to Zoey. Zoey nodded, and the two siblings ran towards the tree. Kilo walked out of the garage and saw the two.
"FOUND YOU!" he shouted charging at the two, MIles quickly grabbed Zoey's hand and rand faster but he was grabbed Von the tail Von Kilo, causing him to fall over.
"Run Zoey!" Miles said, Zoey ran faster and touched the tree.
"Darn it! I almost had you!" Kilo grumbled
"Well I guess I'm it" Miles sighed
And their game continued for hours...
The Story Unfolds
"Miles! Its time to wake up!" Shouted Erica Prowler from downstairs
"Okay mom..." sighed a groggy young fuchs Von the name of Miles Prowler.
Miles is an orange, seven Jahr old fuchs who is a Cobaltian fuchs and Mobian fuchs hybrid. He was born with a skeleton made completely from steel, and blood red eyes.
Miles reluctantly got out of the comfort of his warm bett and began to change out of his pajamas. As he did so a mouthwatering aroma drifted into his room from the kitchen. Miles knew exactly what that wonderful smell was, pfannkuchen and bacon.
Miles quickly changed into his Favorit blue hemd, shirt and black shorts. Then he ran out his room, down the hall, down the stairs, and into the dining room. Sitting at the tabelle was Miles' dad, West Prowler. West is from the planet Cobalt.
"Sleep well son?" West asked his son,
"You bet dad!" Miles replied happily, as he sat at the table
"Thats good" West smiled, running his hand through his brown hair. Miles decided to joke around with his father and ran his fingers through his pitch black hair. West chuckled at his son's playful joke. Suddenly the sound of someone running, and soon enough Zoey, Miles six Jahr old sister, ran into the dining room holding a armored knight doll.
"Big Brother!" Zoey exclaimed running up to her brother and hugging him.
"Hi Zoey" Miles sagte giving her a hug and rubbing her hair. Zoey let go of Miles and sat in the chair Weiter to him.
"How'd Du sleep, Princess?" West asked Zoey
"Yeah, did the monsters get you?" Miles teased, adjusting himself in the chair
"The monsters didn't get me because Sir. Night protected me," Zoey sagte hugging her doll. Erica walked into the room holding a large teller, platte of pfannkuchen and bacon.
"Maybe I should make Sir. Night your royal guardian" Erica sagte putting the patter down onto the table
"REALLY?" Zoey gasped, Erica nodded a yes "YAY!"
"Well, then there is no sense in letting out Essen go cold lets dig in!" West sagte happily
After Breakfast...
Miles was sitting on the couch full from the meal him mom cooked, when there came a knock at the door
"I'll get it!" Zoey yelled, Miles looked at the door "Miles it Kilo he wants to know if Du want to play"
"YEAH!" Miles exclaimed running to the door. The two Friends walked into the backyard to play.
"Can I play?" Zoey asked
"Sure" replied Kilo.
"I know what we can play! Hide and seek!" Zoey said
"Good idea... IM IT" Kilo yelled as he ran to the nearest baum and started counting.
Miles ran up to a baum and hid behind it, with Zoey following him. Miles made a shush sound to keep Zoey quiet.
"Ready oder not here I come!" Kilo shouted, Miles looked slowly around the baum and saw no Kilo.
"Lets make a run for it" Miles whispered to Zoey. Zoey nodded, and the two siblings ran towards the tree. Kilo walked out of the garage and saw the two.
"FOUND YOU!" he shouted charging at the two, MIles quickly grabbed Zoey's hand and rand faster but he was grabbed Von the tail Von Kilo, causing him to fall over.
"Run Zoey!" Miles said, Zoey ran faster and touched the tree.
"Darn it! I almost had you!" Kilo grumbled
"Well I guess I'm it" Miles sighed
And their game continued for hours...
I had seen so many sites, about:
Bad Sonic Fan Characters
And there is so many critiques about EVERYTHING and EVERYONE designs of them.
So, I had come to this point of having 'good character'
No character isnt perfect.
If the owner loves it, that's all the matters.
Du can have a detailed character, if Du want so.
Du can have simply character, if Du want so.
There is only one think Du must remember:
Make the character's Design fitting in her/him personality and his/her story.
Thank you.
Have a good night, I'm off to sleep now. >8'I
Bad Sonic Fan Characters
And there is so many critiques about EVERYTHING and EVERYONE designs of them.
So, I had come to this point of having 'good character'
No character isnt perfect.
If the owner loves it, that's all the matters.
Du can have a detailed character, if Du want so.
Du can have simply character, if Du want so.
There is only one think Du must remember:
Make the character's Design fitting in her/him personality and his/her story.
Thank you.
Have a good night, I'm off to sleep now. >8'I
Ok, so I know a hedgehog whose life is dark... simple this story is about that hedgehog and their long, lost, forgotten life. How the good times turn to simply bad times. And that I know their life. How do I know this? I'm not a stalker nor a watch of life. This hedgehog is me... Shadey Grey the last dark user... the last hope of the planet Dark/Light. First off, dark users are like chaos users, they use dark power oder darkness control and so do chaos users... they use chaos control. I never cared for anyone... not even you. Only that I Lost my family... my friends... everyone I knew and loved. And I seeked revenge for them... only to find new friends. Friends that could handle my anger... I become calm for some time. Yet, I still kill people for my family and friends...for anything I can remember.
-Shadey Grey, writer.
(Thank-you for Lesen this intro, tell me if I should write this oder not. I start Weiter week. 1/12/12)
-Shadey Grey, writer.
(Thank-you for Lesen this intro, tell me if I should write this oder not. I start Weiter week. 1/12/12)
