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posted by TakTheFox
~Tip number one
When I make an rp, I usually make it long oder medium so that it doesn’t look like a random/boring/quick idea, and to get rpers (along with other reasons), but sadly that comes with a problem.
A lot of times, if I make an rp (or other people I know do) It’ll say something like
“*SHRUBBERY HUNTER*”
“Your character hears a scream from a marshmellow. They ask the marshmellow what is wrong, and he says “MY SHRUBBERY IS GONE!” Do Du help him find the shrubbery?”
So what one would expect is a
“No”
“Yes”
“Pie”
“TALKING MARSHMELLOW”
“NII!”
oder SOMETHING that has to do with what just happened.
But instead, some people go “Character: *walking in the woods*” oder “Character: What’s wrong?” Why do they do this? Because they don’t read the whole thing. A lot of the time they say “I only read the important stuff” oder “I just read the title” oder “I wasn’t paying attention”. This messes up the rp, and makes it very confusing.
PLEASE PEOPLE! PLEAAAAAAAAASE read the whole thing. Sometimes I’ll be rping fifteen Kommentare into an rp and STILL be trying to tell them “THAT’S NOT WHAT IS GOING ON! WE’RE IN A FOREST NOT AN EGGSHELL!!”

~Tip number two
IMAGINATION!
Now in my opinion it’s the responsibility of the person who MAKES the rp to come up with most of the action scenes and dialog detail, but with both that person and the person they are rping with, Du should ALWAYS use your imagination in an rp.
Examples of what NOT to use
1.    *attacks* Attacks? Attacks how? There could be an enemy that is water proof, and Du have ice, so if Du just go *attacks* it doesn’t accomplish anything. Also it makes it hard for the person to reply with something to counter oder continue with that attack. If that just kept going it would end like
*attacks*
*attacks back*
*attacks back harder*
*attacks and wins*
Which leads to gary-stu rping.
2.    *…* Now someone else mentioned the infamous triple-dot-threat, but I’ll just refresh. DO NOT DO THIS! Unless it is COMPLETELY impossible for Du to make a move, like being knocked out oder something, DO NOT USE THIS.
Example
Character1: We should eat pie.
Character2: …
There are three things this can imply (and maybe more)
1.    ) Your character dislikes pie.
2.    )You’re not paying attention to the rp.
3.    )You’re being lazy.
Unless you’re doing number one, Du don’t really have a good reason to do that. “…” Leads to REALLY boring rps, and then people don’t like rping with you.
4.    BE DETAILED!
Being detailed makes things REALLY fun for both people. Now that doesn’t mean *shoots your character in the head, then kicks them, then eats pie, then flies off* That is gary-stu rp. What I mean is to do stuff like *Takes out gun and tries to shoot at your character* then wait… then when it’s your turn *kicks your character on the side of their leg* then wait your turn *eats pie* wait *tries to fly off*. NOTICE “TRY”. Try implies that Du are NOT a gary-stu. Du don’t have to say this all the time, but Du should do this when fighting oder stressed areas appear. When Du simply say “*Shoots then kicks then eats pie and flies off*” it implies that Du can do whatever Du want, and we don’t want that.

~Tip number three
USE WEAK CHARACTERS OFTEN
I’ve actually found that using characters that aren’t very strong, oder have no powers, to be Mehr fun than powerful characters. Now this doesn’t mean BORING characters, just characters that aren’t all “I AM ALLPOWERFUL FOOL!”.

~Tip number three (part two)
Let your characters get whatever-ed. That includes
1.    Controlled
2.    Hurt
3.    Slapped
4.    Hugged
5.    Flattered
6.    Tackled
7.    Shot
8.    SHRUBBERIES FORCED DOWN THEIR THROATS!
Especially with rps that involve hypnosis, controlling, oder flirting, rps get REALLY fun. And Du CAN have your character NOT do these things if it goes against their powers, oder if it annoys Du to do it too much, but it IS fun, and it makes rps really funny a lot of the time.

Hope these helped.

NOW GO RP!

EAT PIE AND PROPSER!

OWLS X{D
Emily:Hey! Du crushed my cupcake!!!!
Slash:Not now Emily!
Cece:Shut up and kick @$$!!!
Justin:Yeah what Cece said!!!!
Modely:Stop! And listen, what do Du want?
The Destroyer V.3:Can I came to?
Emily:Sure.
Modely:Emily what are Du doing?!?
Emily:Hey Sonic sagte to go and get at 4:30pm!
Slash:Ok then lets go!
So they all of them got on time. Now Amy is talking.
Amy:Ok so tell me why hes here?
Destroyer V.3:I got dorb!
Amy:Ok. So any way we need Mehr stuff Emily I need Star!
Emily:Ok. star, sterne get Du butt over here!
Star:Yes mam!
Ok so thats it for now, Emily,Slash,Justin,modely,Cece,star and Destroyer V.3 all go on a misshin to find out what happen to Crystal and Jason's perents! Well that's all folks!
"So, let me get this straight... Du broke the capsule... So I'm stuck with you... and you're my BROTHER?!" Shadow said. "Yeah, kinda. Isn't that just GREAT?!" Chris said, happilly. "OH GOD. This can't be." Shadow cried. "... Du don't seem happy." Chris said, confused. Shadow fell to his knees and started pulling on his chest pelz and shouting gibberish and a few cuss words. "Are Du okay???...." Chris said. A motobug came by. "Is he okay?" He asked it. It rolled away. He started to massage Shadow's shoulders. This made him Mehr irritated. Shadow punched Chris away. "You seemed tense." Chris...
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 An early interpratation of Chris.
An early interpratation of Chris.
Shadow was walking through the ruins of Ark. He coughed in the debree. He had a flashback of Maria. He sniffed. He looked at a broken panel. It had a picture of a blob with a head and tiny writing. He remembered that from when the Ark was invaded with the Artifical Chaos. Then he looked at something not that familiar. It was a giant capsule with a few cracks in it and a body. It had a green liquid inside. "What's this?" Shadow said. He punched the capsule open. The liquid poured out. Shadow picked up a stick and poked the body. "Ha. Squishy." He continued poking at him. "SQUISHY SQUISHY SQUISHY!"...
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posted by sierradawn9
AN: Ok, so this is WAY back in the Tag when Bellz-E was still living under the Three Kings (Well... The first two were killed Von the last...) and her name was still Bella. She was still bold... and blasphemous. XD

I'm taking over, 
Du plainly see,
I'll set all,
Of the innocents free.

I'll kill your guards,
Knock down a tree, 
I'll destroy your kingdom,
Filled with glee.

Your tirade ends, 
And Du must know,
That I have sank,
To an all new low.

This shit I see,
Maybe it's true,
But I will not bow,
To the likes of YOU.

Do Du feel sorrow?
Do Du feel pain?
Do regret all of your choices,
Once it starts to rain.

Du treat them like slaves,
All those townsfolk,
Du must have thought,
It was just a cruel joke.

All this shit,
I know it's true,
So I will not bow,
To the likes of YOU.
My first story, so, if Du wanna make suggestions, post of a Forum ill make in a bit.

The old streets eminated of fossil fuels burning, roadkill and sadness. The ally was scattered with boxes, empty glass bottles and pieces of old news paper. In the distance, a siren went off and Hunde yipped to eachother in thier own language. The streets felt cold and filled with the sorrow of the people around.
My body felt cold as ice. I longed to be warm and safe. I wished I had some money to get something to eat, but who would listen to a stray? No one. I curled up in a ball, attempting to get warm, as I drifted into a small rest.
I worried if the wrong person would find me here in this ally, alone in this cold, dark allyway. I dismissed this worry and held the arms of false hope, whispering false facts into my freezing ears.
I believed the false hope's bitterly cold arms were a sign I was alive.
Note; To know what the chapter names and what the names in the story like 'Ferson' are, look at this image; link

Oh, and of course, this is in Corah The cupcake Lover's perspective.
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You know, I've always wondered what it would be like to live the life in Ferson. The extreme weather, the serene beach, the unique villages...I lived in Derevia, a country full of lush gras, grass and a warm atmosphere. But today was fall, and it was rarely ever warm in the morning. When I get up and put on my clothes for autumn, I walk outside, feeling the moist, cold atmosphere...
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{warning it get really boring and stupid around here most persons stop Lesen at chapter 6}
PLZ READ CHAPTER 1-19 BEFORE Lesen This

i awoke in a pitch black room. the walls and floor of the room seemed to made of clouds. dark stormy looking clouds "so u have awakened Princess Wednesday Jaxee Shocker III the Hedgehog" sagte a voice from the far end of the room. the mysterious person knew my name my FULL name! then the mysterious person emerged from the darkness. it was a cloaked figure with yellow eyes that u could see from under the mantel and i could tell it was a female. "i am the fate of...
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{this fanfic has pretty much no plot they just go save a bunnie my god!}
PLZ READ CHAPTER 1-18 BEFORE Lesen THIS

so this was heaven a land of clouds a land of hope and dreams "wat the hell" sagte misery just waking up "this is heaven" asks rane also waking up "i gess so" i sagte and i stood up the clouds were quite fluffy and jumpy then misery took a handful of clouds and puts them in her mouth so i slap her hand and say "wat the heck u dont just go around eating stuff" i say "mmmmm tastes like kekse, cookies yummy" she says with her mouth full
"come on lets go we have a mission guy" rane says getting...
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{this fanfic really has nothing to do with sonic}
PLZ READ CHAPTER 1-17 BEFORE Lesen THIS

we were captured. yes captured. in mud filled cellls in a dungeon under valices castle. then everyone woke up screaming and with misery saying her usual "EEEKERS" "where r we?" asked coral "yea its scary and messy and gross" sagte flana. "we r in the dungeon of deeeaattthh in valice schloss this is the place where most deaths in the world happen" says rush from his cell "and they say all the peoples ghosts still linger here wait to take someone elses body!!! MNMWWWHAHAHAHA!!!" yells kodi and it echoes all...
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{most persons want to commit suicide after readin this}
IF U HAVE NOT READ CHAPTER 1-15 DONT READ THIS
READ THE OTHER CHAPTERS FIRST

"oh my god" i sagte as we were all standing at the foot of the arctic mountains of the south, it was the biggest mountain range unknown to the rest off the world cuz everyone thinks its the himalayas but its not. "well lets get going peeps we dont got all Tag and plus we dont the winter sisters seeing us and we dont got all Tag the temp drops to -59o here and we didnt bring heaters" sanybelle says and starts jumping up the mountain "i wonder y the sisters cant see...
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{this fanfic was written Von some Emo lonely skinny tall traube saft obsessed girl from illinois it must b terrible}
IF U HAVE NOT READ CHAPTER 1-7 DONT READ THIS

The soldiers were coming over the path and WE WERE STANDING THERE LIKE STATUES!!! whisper had tears in her eyes. i was holding on to dare, and misery was standing extemely close to tuesday which i found quite odd but also not that much after seeing them hug earler. flana and coral were balling their eyes out. truth looked Mehr scared that ever...or just her eyes did. arc tried to stay strong but ended up crying on dahsers shoulder....
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{its a fanfic based on the weather it must b terrible}
IF U HAVE NOT READ CHAPTER 1-7 DONT READ THIS

The soldiers were coming over the path and WE WERE STANDING THERE LIKE STATUES!!! whisper had tears in her eyes. i was holding on to dare, and misery was standing extemely close to tuesday which i found quite odd but also not that much after seeing them hug earler. flana and coral were balling their eyes out. truth looked Mehr scared that ever...or just her eyes did. arc tried to stay strong but ended up crying on dahsers shoulder. we were in trouble and we knew it. but rane seemed so calm, like...
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{dont waste your electricity bill on this stuff it sucks}
IF U HAVE NOT READ CHAPTER 1-6 DONT READ THIS

when i woke up from miserys chaos over load, we were on oben, nach oben of the mountain. everyone else was unconsious but me. but on the edge of the cliff stood a strange hedgehog with green fur. she turned around and sagte "hiya" i lay there in the gravel dirt of the mountain staring at this green hedgehog i never saw bfor. "u stare at me like im forign beast. no i no beast. im Windy the hedgehog. u persons seemed in trouble cuz men in shiney Suits were coming into yer cave and u all were sleeping from...
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{read it already? well read it again and Liebe it forever like some old Disney movie}
IF U HAVNT READ CHAPTER 1 oder 2 DONT READ THIS

when we got to the garoa mountain and got too where the shooting star, sterne landed, there was just an unconsous cat there. misery, hyper and curious as usual, went up and touched the girl. "OW WAT THE HELL" misery screamed. she had burnt her hand some how and then it started to rain. tuesday, confused, sagte "wat the hell just a girl? u mean that this girl was the star, sterne that fell from the sky? arc r u sure this is where the star, sterne landed?"
arc replied "tues have i ever been...
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posted by daian-raid
yo, everyone ,… I,ve got many "why"s to ask
- why dreams are just a legend for a cinema hero to act?, why it's just a far away thing that we live and feel it can't be reached? Why life goes one way for most of people? Why ur only matter in life is to find a job and ur life stops there? Why don't u try to reach ur dream? Is that the real meaning of our lives? What's the difference between u and the person ur Fan of? Aren't u both people? Wasn't he like u when he was little?

Yo ,wake up, the only thing I'm seeing here is dead people , everyone is living alone, one of my biggest dreams is find...
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posted by crystalstream
 That is Crystal all grown up :3
That is Crystal all grown up :3
A thousand years ago, the Ancient Walkers, while examining the night sky, found several prophecies that told of Heroes rising up above all oppression and bringing it down with all force, after its tyranny made its rule upon Mobius. Before departing to proclaim these foretelling, the Ancient Walkers found at least, one Mehr prophecy written in the stars above. The stars showed a reflective shade of bright crimson, and the tidings were not well. This prophecy foretold of the coming of the Black Arms and their leader, Black Doom. After they had made their mark and place in the universe, the Son...
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posted by MephilesTheDark
No-one usually went into an old, abandon paddock. Unless, of course, Du were a trigger-happy Marine who liked to race cars and churn dirt up under the wheels.
And yes, there was three people here who were just that.
Shane’s old Ford ute had the doors open, as he was too lazy to be bothered with closing them, while him himself sat on a nearby fence, drinking an ice slushy.
Mother and Book II had just finished their race around the paddock- Mother emerging victorious. She fist-pumped while still driving, and then backed up near Shane’s ute.
Shane didn’t really care- He just thought she was...
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Read the first three chapters before anything!
--------------------------------------------------"So... your Irken too?" Mef asked. "Yes, this is my Mobian disguise." Zim replied. "Did I mention that we're gonna be good friends?" Mef lied. "No." Zim said. She took the hand that was holding the axe, clenched the axe, and put her fist on his shoulder. She got closer and closer until SWING! and miss... but barely. "What was that for?" Zim asked. "Are Du trying to eat me, too?!" He said. Mef said, "Errr... I WILL MAKE A RETURN!" And ran away. "Then they heard a familiar voice. "Hey! It's Du two...
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posted by beepboop
 Rex
Rex
(Rex had just woken up)
Rex:(yawns)Im so tired...
Kix:REX!
Rex:What is it Kix?
Kix:This morning I heard a loud noise coming from the forest!
Rex:Lets go but we need help.Let's go get Shade,Stephanie,and Rihanna
Kix:Okay!
(Rex and Kix run to the houses)
Rex:Shade!
Shade:What's up Rex?
Rex:Kix sagte she heard a loud noise come from the forest this morning.
Shade:Okay let's go!
(Rex and Shade go to the forest)
Kix:STEPHANIE!
Stephanie:What is it Kix?You know I dont like to be up in the morning.
Kix:I heard a loud noise come from the forest.
Stephanie:Let's go get Rihanna and then go to the forest!
Kix:Okay!
(Kix...
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posted by rath01
Well i guess its time to tell Du a story but not any old story but a story about the founding of a team called well Du will find out now lets begin on the the planet called shil-2 there was a great war and all the people that showed any promise of becoming a great warrior was killed and the man who started this war was called DR.neg X but there was a small hand full of warriors that stood a chance but they were defeated but before they died they put together there powers and teilt, split them into 7 powerfull orbs 3 of them turned into children its been 15 years since then and now our story takes...
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