1.) Do not make your FC in any relationship with a real character.
Example: Mary is dating Sonic, sisters with Amy, use to be married to Tails, and Knuckles has a crush on her. (I think like working for the real character is fine.)
2.) Their race is not their last name. -.-
Example: Mary the Bird = Mary Bird (Make up a rational last name, people!)
3.) Have a good bio.
Example: Mary was born in the haube and raised in the haube (XD). Her parents were in a gang so they got shot. Mary will get her vengeance one day. (I FAIL AT THIS EXAMPLE! JUST MAKE A GOOD BIO!)
4.) Have a great personality.
Example: Mary is naive, nice, quiet, and caring, but can make a nigga draw some blood. (XD)
5.) Don't make them be godmodders!
Example: Mary is a demon, vampire, werecat, fairy, butterfly, pony, and a SAQUATCH!!! (XD)
6.) NEVER MAKE THEM STRONGER, FASTER, ECT. THAN A REAL CHARACTER!!
Example: Mary's faster than Sonic and Shadow COMBINED!
So follow them 6 rules and Du and your FC won't be hated Von mankind. :D (XD)
And remember, kids: If a black transporter, van with tinted windows drives Von Du don't take their candy! (XD)
Example: Mary is dating Sonic, sisters with Amy, use to be married to Tails, and Knuckles has a crush on her. (I think like working for the real character is fine.)
2.) Their race is not their last name. -.-
Example: Mary the Bird = Mary Bird (Make up a rational last name, people!)
3.) Have a good bio.
Example: Mary was born in the haube and raised in the haube (XD). Her parents were in a gang so they got shot. Mary will get her vengeance one day. (I FAIL AT THIS EXAMPLE! JUST MAKE A GOOD BIO!)
4.) Have a great personality.
Example: Mary is naive, nice, quiet, and caring, but can make a nigga draw some blood. (XD)
5.) Don't make them be godmodders!
Example: Mary is a demon, vampire, werecat, fairy, butterfly, pony, and a SAQUATCH!!! (XD)
6.) NEVER MAKE THEM STRONGER, FASTER, ECT. THAN A REAL CHARACTER!!
Example: Mary's faster than Sonic and Shadow COMBINED!
So follow them 6 rules and Du and your FC won't be hated Von mankind. :D (XD)
And remember, kids: If a black transporter, van with tinted windows drives Von Du don't take their candy! (XD)
I was laying aginst a tree. Nothing has happen in weeks so everyone was bored. "Ruby, Ruby" Yelled a blue and red raccon. "Do I know you" I sagte "No, my name is Ocean. Your friend Star, told me to tell Du to come quick" Ocean said. "Ok". The both of us walked to the center of town. Star, Flame, and Spark were there. "Hey" sagte Star. "What is going on" I ask. "There is a problem with the secret agents. they said.." Just then a purple cat jumped down. "who" I said. "I am Nights the cat. Sent here to fight you" Nights said. "You are that ninja cat who killed a lot of pepole" I sagte glaring at her with anger. "so" She said. "Nights, come quick" Someone said. Nights ran off. "Let's go before she comes back" Ruby says. "ok" Everyone said. "She killed pepole" star, sterne sagte in shook. "yep, she's a jerk too I heard." I said. "wow" Flame said. "she is a rival to my agent base" I said. No one responded. Ocean came to us with cookies. "want some" Ocean sagte cheerfully. "ok" Everyone said.
Blood's Past
Chapter three
A Strange Event
(I guess I now have to call Miles, Blood)
Three years later...
"Dad I don't know if Du can hear me but yesterday was Zoey's and my birthday we're both thirteen come on Dad Du can fight this..." Blood said, "Im sorry visiting hours are done Du will have to leave" sagte one of the nurses "give me a second, Dad I Liebe Du please just wake up, okay Im leaving" Blood walks out the hospital, Zoey walks up to Blood "Visiting Dad?" she sagte "yeah still nothing" Blood's left hand electrifys then stops "okay what was that?" he looks at his hand "Weird"
Chapter three
A Strange Event
(I guess I now have to call Miles, Blood)
Three years later...
"Dad I don't know if Du can hear me but yesterday was Zoey's and my birthday we're both thirteen come on Dad Du can fight this..." Blood said, "Im sorry visiting hours are done Du will have to leave" sagte one of the nurses "give me a second, Dad I Liebe Du please just wake up, okay Im leaving" Blood walks out the hospital, Zoey walks up to Blood "Visiting Dad?" she sagte "yeah still nothing" Blood's left hand electrifys then stops "okay what was that?" he looks at his hand "Weird"