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This poem is devoted to every girl who'sad and feels like nobody understands her...I'd like to hear your opinion.

Sitting in her room,listening her Favorit song over and over again...
Her head is full of thoughts she won't share with anybody but paper...
She's alone,no matter if there's somebody around.
She's alone with her thoughts,trying to get away,to suppress the dark side of her soul,to kill every dark thought that travels through her mind...
And remember,dream is just a fantasy,you won't escape from your fear,you won't find your cure dreaming better days...
And she cries only when she's alone,so nobody can hear,and she prays for the Tag when the Sun will shine again,the Tag when she will feel the joy of life,the purpose will be bright...

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NICE WORK!!! its nice!
viju posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr
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Thanks...
irena83 posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr
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i understand all thiz
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GaGaBoi said:
Personally i think she needs to get laid.
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LOL
irena83 posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr
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LOL!
xXSweeneyXx posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr
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WOW!!
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LuvWeezy7 said:
Just so Du don't freak out i am stating MY opinion. :)

I thought it sucked. Maybe it was good for your level of work but to me it wasn't all that great.
This must be just me but, it wasn't put together all too well. Some words didn't fit in there and other words didn't even exist where they needed to be.

Other than that Du do have a good idea i must say.
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Sorry for being a critic. I just have a thing for Schreiben and your mistakes bugged me. :( Please don't take this personally.
LuvWeezy7 posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr
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No,it's ok. I like honest answer.
irena83 posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr
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well,i'm not american,and therefore i can not express myself the way i want...
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xxXsk8trXxx said:
Honestly...me and most other girls I know are nothing like that at ALL.
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Thanks for being honest. But this poem is about barriers that should be broken. One Frozen moment of sorrow.
irena83 posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr
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How emo. Why are there no happy poems anymore? Do all poems have to be about some type of 'sorrow' that's ruining your life?
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thanks
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depp-fan said:
ITS VERY BEAUTIFUL POEM!!!!!
I Liebe IT
GREAT JOB!!!!!
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thanks honey.
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Goth-Girl-36 said:
i Liebe it! it sounds alot like me.
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amethyst44 said:
i Liebe this. Poesie is something Du should pursue. ;) <3
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;) thanks a lot.
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energizerbunny said:
I think it's a good poem, I believe there are girls like this, I may not know any but I think there are and I feel sorry for them
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thanks...
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Jamie38459 said:
It's a sad poem, so very true,that it was made 2 the others who R feelin bloo. Sorrowful and a painful life, that (maybe) only we can tell, that she'll feel down everyday, and may feel worse than hell(maybe).
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nice comment... thanks.
irena83 posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr
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Ur welcome :)
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skillet_luvr said:
I like it. It's really good. :)
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thanks...
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zanesaaomgfan said:
Funny...That reminds me of some girl at my school, who has issues...She touches Du in uncomfortable ways that Du couldn't explain, she asks to be her friend when your in a bad mood, she laughs when somebody else can't answer the Frage but when the teacher calls on her she stays quiet, and she laughs at her own insults, so if Du say, "Oh, Du stink!" She'll freakin' laugh like your insulting yourself. Shes such an idiot! Thats why I refuse to be her friend!
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Maybe Du should be her freind, you'll find out that people can surprise Du like I did
K5-HOWL posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr
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If she touches my boobs, like she did today, should I? Umm no.
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zutaradragon said:
sounds like me...
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TheFunnyChick95 said:
Completely describes me. Thank you... :)
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What!?
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josh-ada said:
OMG!!!!
ITS SO LOVELY POEM!!!!
i m not like that girl but that poem made me cry :(
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Thanks...
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DWLoverTBCEDT said:
that's beautiful, I Liebe it
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thanks...
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K5-HOWL said:
Yup
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 Yup
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aw i like it....
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fabstar said:
luv it :)
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thanks...
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JB4E said:
I Liebe the poem, I simpily Liebe it.
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thanks...
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Vixie79 said:
I Liebe this one. Like I sagte before, I'm so glad I'm not the only one that feels this. For years I did. Some of my fantasies have been such agony, because I never could experience them. This poem was simply written truthfully and straight forward. I Liebe it! ♥
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