Dose anyone have a tile sugestion and is this any good?

Have Du ever been hurt Von the one Du love
Have Du ever wanteed to change
Who Du were, who Du are, who Du will be
Feeling as though your life is all laid out
Wondering why Du have the life Du have
Du have it for a reason
Figure it out!

Have youo ever been hurt Von the one one Du love
Have Du ever felt so betrayed
That Du wanted to die
Don't give up
Things will change...for the best

Have yoou ever tired to change the world
With just a song
Try to change a herz just Von saying "hello"

Have Du ever though Du had true love
Then found it in a total stranger
Have Du ever had so much hate
Then saved a soul that was dying alone

All of us have in one way oder another
Live life your way
The futures always changing








 MattxAliceNine posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr
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BittenGirl said:
wooow!that is amazing!you should write Mehr poems because Du are really good!
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irena83 said:
It's a nice poem, emotional, partly dark but filled with a hope.
Suggestions for the tittle could be:
- Eternal struggle
- Pieces of living hope
- Wondering mind
;)
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