Is this a good poem and do Du think Mehr could be added?

Please be honest

We had such fun
Trying anything to talk to eachother
We'd find away
But then it stopped
We hardly spoke oder saw one another
We were a couple
And a really cute one to
Afraid of my reaction
Du had a friend deal with the brake up
They wrote a note
And I thought it was a joke
One from a friend
A secret admirer
oder your brother
Hearing from my sister
It was no joke
Du sagte it was akward
And that Du still Liebe me
But I think I pushed Du too far
What did I do
To make Du push me away
It may sound strange but
I still want Du in my life
Even if as a a friend
I'll b e here for Du even if
The rest of the world leaves you
I won't
I'll stay
But if Du want me back
Prove Du won't hurt me again
Never again Du will Du hurt me
The same way twice
Cause boy
Du fucked up









 MattxAliceNine posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr
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wolfgirl985 said:
That was good I dont think Du have to add anything else its perfect :)
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posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr 
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Thank you. Im glad Du liked it. i thought is was bad. sad i know
MattxAliceNine posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr
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your welcome it was sad, but it is good work :)
wolfgirl985 posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr
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Glad Du liked it
MattxAliceNine posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr
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