Max: HOW DARE Du EVEN Zeigen YOUR FACE HERE!!!
Zack: BACK OFF MAX!!!
Star: STOP PLEASE!!!
Max: GO star, sterne NOW BEFORE Du GET HURT!
Star:*tears rise in her eyes and steps back*
ZZZZ BOOM Zack shoots at max. A wolke of dust clears
Max:*a force field also clears and Max is on all hooves* really, that's the best Du got I always new Du wear WEAK
Zack: WHAT
Max: Du heard me
ZZZZZZZZZ BOOM, BOOM, BOOM
Max:*same thing as before* HA! now its my turn black swirls of dust kreis around him then a bright glow orbits around him standing in aw Zack stares, unlike star, sterne just looking in horror for she knows what comes next
ZZZRRRZZZZZRRRRRZZZZZRRRRZZZZZRRRRZZZZRR BOOM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
a figure came out of the dust, but it wasn't max well it wasn't him anymore.
She herd a rriipp sound the it was all red(BTW this is all happening on a cliff)blood red then a blue wolf came out from the red he didn't have much blood on him just on his claws, teeth, ears, and some on his tail as if he dipped it in red paint
"are Du scared?" asked the blue wolf tilting his head
"I don't know should I be?" star, sterne asked taking a step closer"
"IF Du COME CLOSER ILL KILL Du TOO" he yelled
"kill? w-what do Du mean kill?! WHO ARE YOU!!!"
"*dose an evil laugh* Du don't get it do Du your Mehr stupid than Zack!!!! I KILLED ZACK OK!! oh speaking of KILL I have Mehr to, do don't Du have a school filled with alicorns? ill stop there then of to Du parents house!!!!!"
"YOU WOULDNT DARE" she yelled
"would I?" he smirked the ran off leaving star, sterne in tears she glanced to a body in blood wings and horn clear off walked in fear Weiter to it the face made her jump "zack...." she looked up then flew off to her school but she was too late blood was on the walls like a horror movie with words in blood saying:
SAY Von TO UR MA AND PA FOR THE LAST TIME @$% !@#$
she walked over all the bodies until she hard a help it sounded like princess twi, the school principal she ran to the sound there in a room twi was under some schreibtisch star, sterne used her magic to lift them off her
" thank Du star, sterne know I need your help that wolf is a threat I need to kill it ASAP
"WHAT NO!! we cant!"
"why not it kill dozens of colts and mares I thought Du would care"
"I do but that wolf is max..
"WHAT star, sterne I think Du need to lie down"
" *rolls her eyes* he used black magic the spell of night claw he's just under his control that's all"
"then why is max blue?"
"UG I DONT KNOW but we cant kill him I Liebe him even if he did kill Zack, Sara, Zoey , Ruby and other ponies but it wasn't him"
"LETS GO" yelled twi
"and save him from the spell" shouted Star
LOOK OUT 4 PART 3!!!!!
Zack: BACK OFF MAX!!!
Star: STOP PLEASE!!!
Max: GO star, sterne NOW BEFORE Du GET HURT!
Star:*tears rise in her eyes and steps back*
ZZZZ BOOM Zack shoots at max. A wolke of dust clears
Max:*a force field also clears and Max is on all hooves* really, that's the best Du got I always new Du wear WEAK
Zack: WHAT
Max: Du heard me
ZZZZZZZZZ BOOM, BOOM, BOOM
Max:*same thing as before* HA! now its my turn black swirls of dust kreis around him then a bright glow orbits around him standing in aw Zack stares, unlike star, sterne just looking in horror for she knows what comes next
ZZZRRRZZZZZRRRRRZZZZZRRRRZZZZZRRRRZZZZRR BOOM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
a figure came out of the dust, but it wasn't max well it wasn't him anymore.
She herd a rriipp sound the it was all red(BTW this is all happening on a cliff)blood red then a blue wolf came out from the red he didn't have much blood on him just on his claws, teeth, ears, and some on his tail as if he dipped it in red paint
"are Du scared?" asked the blue wolf tilting his head
"I don't know should I be?" star, sterne asked taking a step closer"
"IF Du COME CLOSER ILL KILL Du TOO" he yelled
"kill? w-what do Du mean kill?! WHO ARE YOU!!!"
"*dose an evil laugh* Du don't get it do Du your Mehr stupid than Zack!!!! I KILLED ZACK OK!! oh speaking of KILL I have Mehr to, do don't Du have a school filled with alicorns? ill stop there then of to Du parents house!!!!!"
"YOU WOULDNT DARE" she yelled
"would I?" he smirked the ran off leaving star, sterne in tears she glanced to a body in blood wings and horn clear off walked in fear Weiter to it the face made her jump "zack...." she looked up then flew off to her school but she was too late blood was on the walls like a horror movie with words in blood saying:
SAY Von TO UR MA AND PA FOR THE LAST TIME @$% !@#$
she walked over all the bodies until she hard a help it sounded like princess twi, the school principal she ran to the sound there in a room twi was under some schreibtisch star, sterne used her magic to lift them off her
" thank Du star, sterne know I need your help that wolf is a threat I need to kill it ASAP
"WHAT NO!! we cant!"
"why not it kill dozens of colts and mares I thought Du would care"
"I do but that wolf is max..
"WHAT star, sterne I think Du need to lie down"
" *rolls her eyes* he used black magic the spell of night claw he's just under his control that's all"
"then why is max blue?"
"UG I DONT KNOW but we cant kill him I Liebe him even if he did kill Zack, Sara, Zoey , Ruby and other ponies but it wasn't him"
"LETS GO" yelled twi
"and save him from the spell" shouted Star
LOOK OUT 4 PART 3!!!!!