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Blue Bolt- The new resident of Ponyville

posted by Dragon-88

Blue Bolt, the newest resident of Ponyville

Last story was halfway good, so this time I'm making it to where Blue Bolt's personality is fully revealed in this story. It all starts with Bolt arriving in Ponyville. He is new here, so he doesn't know much about the town oder the residents. He is very shy, so he was nervous to talk to anyone. He thought his way of speech would make him appear weird. So he enters the house he was promised Von some pony who had blue curled hair and wore red glasses. He doesn't know who she was, but he will learn soon!

Bolt: This is a nice house. Who was she anyways? I just hope the residents are nice...

It is daytime, and he nervously looks outside, seeing many different ponies walking around and socializing. Pinkie Pie, who wants to find someone new to play with, goes to the house that used to be empty.

Pinkie: Hello? Anypony home? Can I come in? OK!

Pinkie opens the door(which was surprisingly unlocked) and walks around. She spots several pieces of paper on the ground, followed Von several drawing utensils. She is amazed Von this.

Pinkie: Whoa! This guy oder girl must be quite the artist! Rarity wouldn't believe this!

Bolt is hiding from her, because he is shy around girls. He watched her pace back and forth, and accidentally blasts out a strahl, ray from his horn.

Bolt: How do they control these things?

Pinkie: Huh? Someone there? I coulda sworn I heard a discharge of magic. Maybe he oder she is a unicorn! Would Du like a cupcake? You're a shy one...

Bolt: Yes...I would like one....

Pinkie: YIKES!! Who are you!?

Bolt: I'm a new resident. I'm B-Blue Bolt. Please don't hurt me.

Pinkie: ? Your'e just like Fluttershy! I'm Pinkie Pie! Du like parties?

Bolt: I'm not into parties. People might think I'm weird.

Pinkie: Du need to get out more. I like your name! Cool cutie mark. See Du later, Bolt!

Pinkie leaves, leaving Bolt to make a decision. He chooses to go walk around town and see what it's like. He is still nervous about talking to anyone. He heads for Carousel Boutique to ask for help, but isn't sure how to present the question.

Rarity: Thanks, come again, darling! (notices Bolt) Hello, can I help Du with something....Aren't Du that shy unicorn I gave that house to? It's Weiter door to mine.

Bolt: Um....I suppose so. I didn't see your house, I'm new here...

Rarity: Something wrong, darling? I can Zeigen Du around.

Bolt: (blushes) My, your beautiful....whoops!

Rarity: (blushes) Goodness, how kind of Du to notice. Du should go see Fluttershy. She's shy too. I'm sure she'll be great Friends with you. That's what we're all about. Friendship!

Bolt walks outside, still blushing. Rarity was a beautiful pony, and he almost embarrassed himself. He just hopes he didn't look awkward in front of her! As he is walking around getting to know what's what and where, a blue pegasus with regenbogen hair runs into him in mid-flight. It was regenbogen Dash. Uh-oh...

Bolt: Excuse me....

Rainbow: Hey! Do Du mind watching where your'e going? I almost broke my wing again...Huh? Are Du that unicorn who lives in the house Weiter to Rarity's?

Bolt: Um....

Rainbow: What's the matter? Can't Du talk? Your'e weird! (takes off)

Bolt: This isn't going well. She sounded like she wanted to kill me!

Bolt goes around shyly asking where Fluttershy's house is. He goes to her house, not knowing whether she was like regenbogen Dash oder not.

Bolt: (rings doorbell) Here we go...

Fluttershy: (opens door) Hi....Who are you?

Bolt: Uh...I'm Blue Bolt....Sorry, I get nervous around girls.....

Fluttershy: It's fine. I'm shy too.

Bolt: No way! That's awesome! Von the way, Du know the pony with the blonde hair and wearing a cowboy hat?

Fluttershy: Applejack?

Bolt: So that's her name...Well, I caught myself looking at her, and when she looked at me, I blushed and ran.

Fluttershy: So Du like her?

Bolt: (blushes) Y-yes. It's my secret.

applejack walks in, bringing in a look of surprise.

AJ: What the hay? Are Du that unicorn who was lookin' at me? Du ran off without sayin' anything!

Bolt: Oh no, another violent one...

AJ: What? I'm not like Dash, not one bit. Do ya like me sugarcube?

Fluttershy: Oh, my....(looks at Bolt)

Bolt: (blushes) Um...oh gosh..yes.

AJ: Well, aren't ya' sweet! (kisses Bolt)

Fluttershy is stunned.

AJ: Congrats, big boy. I'm your girlfriend. See ya later!

Fluttershy: Um, what just happened?

Bolt: Liebe happened. She's so cute! I'm off to see more.

Bolt sees a purple unicorn being followed Von a small purple dragon. It was Twilight and Spike.

Twilight: Spike! I told Du to not eat the ingredients like a thousand times! We haven't even gotten Home to start cooking....

Spike: Sorry, I was hungry....

Bolt: Hello....

Twilight: Hi! I've never seen Du before. Du new here?

Bolt: Yes, and so far only regenbogen has me at a distance.

Spike: Hey, he wears glasses, and he's a unicorn. He can help Du with spells.

Bolt: If I knew how to control this stuff....I almost zapped Pinkie Von accident!

Spike: Can I try on your glasses?

Bolt: I need them to see.

Twilight goes to tell Celestia about Bolt, followed Von Spike. Meanwhile, regenbogen is flying and sees Bolt.

Rainbow: I hope he doesn't hate me for what happened earlier. I can be so stupid sometimes! Hey, new guy!

Bolt: Oh, it's you. Are Du going to yell at me again?

Rainbow: It was just an accident, I get carried away sometimes. I'm regenbogen Dash, the fastest flyer in Equestria! What's your name? I see Du have quite a unique cutie mark. Du fast?

Bolt: I'm Blue Bolt. I'm one of the fastest among unicorns, probably. The thing I'm truly good at is drawing. Gaming is just one of my activities. Drawing is my main hobby.

Rainbow: Cool! We should hang out sometime, Bolt. Du got yourself a friend.

Bolt: Sekunde friend. Fluttershy's my first friend.

Rainbow: No problem. I'm ok with it.

Bolt is now becoming Mehr confident after taking a walk around Ponyville. He met the mane six (he met Pinkie at his house), and had a good idea what was where. He is still shy, but is also confident. He is in Liebe with Applejack, who loves him back. His personality is shy, cool, and admires girls, not to mention secretly competitive. Maybe at some point he'll have ground races with regenbogen Dash! This is about Bolt learning about Ponyville, what everyone is like, ad where everything is. I tried making it sound like Ponyville didn't revolve around him.

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NocturnalMirage Hmm, it was much better. It felt more "real" than last time. Yeah, I just realized I'm speaking of reality in the world of technicolor pastel ponies... haha! Anyways, nice job! :) Just one thing: it felt to me like you've rewritten the story in a way to show what I had in mind. It is always a good thing to try to fulfill the desires of your readers, but it is also important to keep your own writing style at the same time. But most importantly: enjoy yourself while writing something. Oh that reminds me. Do you consider a sequel? Cos now that you've established your character, the possibilities are limitless. :)

Dragon-88 Good idea! I'l make a sequel! I just don't know how to fulfill the desires of those who read my articles. Do they want the sequel to be more awesome? More Rainbow Dash/Pinkie Pie? Princess Celesia spending time with Blue Bolt? What more ideas could they want? Maybe in the sequel, Applejack and Blue Bolt will take their relationship to the next level! Or Pinkie will show him how to party!

NocturnalMirage Two things... 1. write what you wish to write, the ideas you said above can all be the foot-stone of your story. 2. I can understand it is hard to know what your readers think when most of the people don't reflect to the story. Only a few people here take the time to make a comment. But that doesn't have to be a reason to become discouraged. I don't know about you, but for me, writing is a hobby... gratification. It's a good way to enter the magical world of ponies and get away from the complexities and ugliness of life for a while. If people like your work, that's a good extra. One pretty basic tip I always find useful. One of my teachers said in Creative Writing class: "Don't tell the reader, show it to them!" It means you manage to create a certain atmosphere to the story. There are different writing styles and each writer has to find their own way to convey their thoughts to the reader. In your case, the dialogues move the plot forward. You've done a pretty good job on that already, so I'm looking forward to read form you in the future. Oh and if you need any help, you can almost always find me here on fanpop. :)

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Casino Royale Part 3

posted by Seanthehedgehog

In the train station, where Mr. Black, and Der Cheif was waiting.

Mr. Black: What is taking Hola so long? I can't trust her if she's going to do something too long.
Der Cheif: Gambling is a hard thing to do. Especially if you're not good at it. Hola is not good at gambling.
Mr. Black: And so I've noticed. *Turns on TV*
Reporter: This is CPN, Canadian pony News. We've received word that two ponies were chasing each other in a construction sight in Maredagascar.
Camerapony: *Zooms in on scene*
Mr. Black: That's Hola being chased!
Camerapony: Officials say that they do not know who the mare was,...

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Casino Royale Part 5

posted by Seanthehedgehog

That night, Con was sent to the airport to find Lasala.

Con: *Looking at passengers* (P told me Lasala was a grey stallion with a black mane.) *Continues looking*
Dutch ponies: *Looking at Con*
Dutch Captain: *Grabs walkie talkie* Now?
Lasala: Now.
Dutch Captain: *Looks at Dutch ponies* Now

All five of them grabbed sub machine guns, and started shouting

Dutch Captain: Everypony on the ground now!
Con: *Sees Lasala out on runway*
Dutch pony: *Goes to Con* Hey, get on the ground!
Con: *Teleports onto runway*
Lasala: *Grabs rocket launcher*
Con: *Pointing gun at Lasala* Stop!
Lasala: *Shoots rocket at Con*...

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Casino Royale Part 6

posted by Seanthehedgehog

Weiter morning, Con was back at his strand house. The police misunderstood what Con was trying to do, and they took him back to his house, where P was waiting for him.

P: Du put a great effort in preventing that airplane from being blown up.
Con: Thank Du sir. Why was that pony trying to blow it up?
P: Ever since 9/11, security in airports have been very high. Some may even say too high. The United States of Equestria has tried to create a new jetplane which can spot terrorists, inside the plane, and security cameras mounted with lazers kill the terrorists. As a result, security in airports would...

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Casino Royale Part 11

posted by Seanthehedgehog

Con, and Vesper arrived at Vanhoover.

Con: Du know what we should do first?
Vesper: What?
Con: I heard there was a great Musik store in this town. What we should do is get the newest CD from Queens Of The Stone Age. I really like their music.
Vesper: I think their Musik is good too.
Con: We'll buy one of their CD's then, but first I want to buy a nice, big house.

So, they bought a big house, and were on their way to the Musik store.

Con: *Walking Weiter to Vesper*
Dutch ponies: *See Con*
Der Cheif: Not yet.
Dutch Ponies: This was Mr. Black's plan?
Der Cheif: Yeah. Get the mare.
Dutch Ponies: *Running...

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Games Ponies Play: Episode 1

posted by Seanthehedgehog

Ten Cents

Episode 1

Reporting Ponies

Game played: Grand Theft Ponies 5

Ten Cents: 10Cents
Jordan: Striker31
Unknown pony: Epicne$$
Unknown pony: bdp
Unknown pony: Zorin
Applejack: CombineHarvester01
Twilight Sparkle: $Money$

10Cents: *On train tunnel*
Striker31: What are Du doing?
10Cents: I'm trying to jump on a train.
Striker31: *Stealing helicopter at an airport* Which tunnel are Du at?
10Cents: I'm on the tunnel Von the highway.
Striker31: Ok, I'm flying there now.

Epicne$$ has joined the game

Epicne$$: Aw yeah bitches, I am going to pown all your asses.
10Cents: Good luck with that.
Epicne$$: 10Cents? Du must...

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Quantum Of Solace Part 5

posted by Seanthehedgehog

Moneybit's disguise

Weiter morning, Con was going out to buy groceries.

Lola: Don't forget the canolli's.
Con: Yeah yeah yeah yeah.
Moneybit: *In disguise* Hello sir. I'm Matilda. Please come with me.
Con: I have to buy some food.
Moneybit: Just come with me.
Con: Whatever.
Moneybit: Taxi!
Taxi driver: *Stops*
Moneybit: *Pushes Con into Taxi, and gets in*
Taxi driver: *Driving taxi* Where to ma'am?
Moneybit: The airport.
Taxi: Okay. While we get to the airport, let me tell Du a little something about myself. I was seven years old when I saw a taxi for the first time. I thought it was amazing how Du could take somepony...

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Ponies On The Rails episode 22 part 2

posted by Seanthehedgehog

The train with the Korean War veterans stopped at the Cheyenne Station.

Pete: *looking at train*
Veterans: *Getting out*
Orion: *comes out of engine* I'm glad the war is almost over.
Pete: Me too, but honestly, we're making a lot of profit for delivering these vets back Home from San Franciscolt.
Orion: I agree. If we keep this up, we'll have millions of dollars on our hooves.
Captain Wilson: *walks to Pete* Are Du Pete Reimer?
Pete: Yes sir. How can I help you?
Captain Wilson: I want to thank Du for getting me, and my squad back Home safely. Oh, and uh I don't have enough cash for a hotel. You...

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Please read this it's a warning to all Fan fic readers!!

posted by Macareina

Please read this: I am warning Du of a Fan fic that will make Du not see Macintosh the same! Tittle: sweet apfel, apple massacre. What it's about: I was scared almost to death Lesen cause it's about big Mac violating(raping) the cutie mark crusaders and killing them with knifes he is planing to do the same freakin thing thing with Applejack!!' O_O I hate this freakin horror stuff Du must be either drunk,stupit,crazy,mental,rapest,and like to see girls die to read this crap! I have read this and I reget Lesen :(

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Ponies On The Rails: Season 2 highlights

posted by Seanthehedgehog

Theme song >>>> link

Seanthehedgehog presents

Season 2 Highlights of

Ponies On The Rails

Starring

Peirce Hawkins "Hawkeye" From Seanthehedgehog

Red Rose From Chibiemmy

Honey Bee From NaomiWinx

Coffee Creme From KarinaBrony

Snowflake & Orion From Alinah09

Metal Gloss From DragonAura15

Stylo From Jimmythedragon

Gordon, Percy, Jeff, Bartholomew, and Pete from Seanthehedgehog

Hawkeye: *stops train at station* Hi. I think Du know where this is going. For ten episodes of this season, I have made many readers of this series very happy, and gave them a good laugh.Though personally, I...

The Racer (10 Jahr Anniversary)

posted by Seanthehedgehog

Robotnik: Snooping as usual I see. *Takes cover as a Lotus passes through the hole, and lands in front of the logo*

A police car went through the hole as well, but it was going too slow, and landed on it's roof.

It was a warm evening in Appaloosa, as a Lotus sped down the highway being driven Von two russian stallions.

Sergi & Apyr's Lotus Eltrot

This was playing on their radio: link

Seanthehedgehog presents

The Racer

Russian driver: *stops car*
Russian stallion: *gets out, with spraypaint*
Russian driver: торопить (Hurry)
Russian stallion: *sprays star, sterne on sign*
Police ponies:...

Grand Theft Ponies: Manehattan Part 2

posted by Seanthehedgehog

The train yard was in a place called Woodstock. It's Von Port Morris, and a few miles north of Midtown.

Once they arrived, Firearm stopped his car on a bridge going over the yard.

Pierce: Did Browning tell Du what we're supposed to do?
Firearm: Not really. He just sagte he wanted us to go on an "adventure" *Gets out of his car with Pierce*
Pierce: Well, good thing he told me what to do last night after we returned from St. Foalis. *Pulls out a WA2000 sniper rifle* The Hetfords are making a deal inside that train yard. We have to kill both the buyer, and the dealer. Got a rifle?
Firearm: I think...

Tom Foolery: Old Stomping Grounds Part 4

posted by Seanthehedgehog

Tom Foolery was now going to talk about dogs.

Tom: I Liebe dat dog. I never met him before, but I know I Liebe 'im.
Crowd: *Laughing*
Tom: He's gonna be wonderful when I meet dat dog. *Sticks his tongue out, and pants like a dog*
Crowd: *Laughing*
Tom: Lots of ponies have lots of doggies. And Du don't even need to have a dog to know about 'em. Your friend could have a dog. He can be your friend's dog. That makes him your dog friend.
Crowd: *Chuckling*
Tom: Du go there to visit, and the Hunde there, Du go to pet him, and say Hi hello. How are you? You're wonderful Sneezy, and for that moment, he's...

Tom Foolery: Old Stomping Grounds Part 3

posted by Seanthehedgehog

Tom: Now this is a short segment where I like to inform Du about simple things that not many ponies take time to notice. The first thing being we all have something in common, and that is...we're all here in Neigh Jersey.
Crowd: *Laughing*
Tom: At an auditorium. In a high school.
Crowd: *Laughing*
Tom: Du ever wonder why Manehattan always gets so much praise?! It's a fucking dump!
Crowd: *Cheering, and laughing*
Tom: It's a cesspool of littering, rape, and traffic jams!
Crowd: *Laughing, and clapping*
Tom: There might be a few good landmarks here and there, but Du have to wait 3 hours for 70 cars...

Tom Foolery With A Bit Of Salt Part 2

posted by Seanthehedgehog

Tom waited for the crowd to stop laughing. Once they did, he proceeded with his Weiter joke.

Tom: Does the time bother you?
Crowd: *Chuckles*
Tom: I get bothered Von the time. Not so much the time itself, but other ponies bother me. For the time.
Crowd: *Laughing*
Tom: Du get this old mare that asks what time is it? What time is it?
Crowd: *Laughing*
Tom: As if, Du yourself were responsible for keeping time.
Crowd: *Laughing*
Tom: I mean I feel honored that they think I'm the one in charge, but Du must understand Du don't see official time keeper here, do you?
Crowd: *Laughing*
Tom: Here's another way...

Tom Foolery With A Bit Of Salt Part 1

posted by Seanthehedgehog

Robotnik: Snooping as usual I see! *Talks faster* Snooping as usual *Slows down* I see!

Mare: *Pushing a shopping karte, warenkorb through a supermarket* Excuse me sir.
Store Worker: Yes ma'am?
Mare: What's the saltiest salt in your lineup of salt?
Store Worker: Salt Lake salt from Salt Lake City. May I make a suggestion?
Mare: Yes.
Store Worker: Have Du ever been to Salt Lake City?
Mare: No.
Store Worker: Well Du better get going now, because Tom Foolery's performing at the Horseshoe, the city's newest place for standup comedy routine.
Mare: How do Du know Tom Foolery's going to be there?
Store Worker:...

A Weihnachten Story Part 1

posted by Seanthehedgehog

Song: link

Blue lines fly along the screen, then the words appear

Robotnik: Snooping as usual I see! *Talks faster* Snooping as usual *Slows down* I see!

Special thanks to AquaMarine6663 for letting me use her three OC's, Aqua Marine, Double Scoop, and Blue Fedora.

Our main character for this story is a fohlen, colt named Ralphie. He will be narrating this story, taking place in Indiana, 1948.

Ponies: *Walking on sidewalk, looking at the snow*
Colts: *Running down straße passing a yellow house*

Ah, there it is. My old house. And there I am, with that ugly hat, and that dumb smile....

SeanTheHedgehog's Wonderful World Of Fan Fiction 2

posted by Seanthehedgehog

Song: link

Blue lines fly along the screen, then the words appear

Robotnik: Snooping as usual I see! *Talks faster* Snooping as usual *Slows down* I see!

Song: link

This is another intro focusing on my characters from Trainz, but only the diesels are involved this time.

Leon: *Leaving Impala Station, on a passenger train with Stan, Sebastian, and Xavier*
Sean: *Pulling seven coaches as he passes Mike Fonzi pulling twenty freight cars*
Jesse: *Returning from the yards. He yawns as he stops on the turntable*
Ian: *Pulling a freight train with Shayne, and Jerry*
Sean: *Passes Ian,...