ok so heres a sample of the story im Schreiben for wattpad:
Marias POV
Ive been waiting on Chre to come down for yearsssss now.He my brother my very concieted brother I understand its the first Tag of school but if my arsch can come down on time so can he i mean dude your cute but come on now. I waited for about 5 Mehr Minuten before i was about to get up and drag his arsch down here when my dad came in the door with a bottle in his hand
"hey baby girl" he sagte with slurred words
"hey dad" i sagte non chalantly
"come on ihaven't seen Du in a g-good little while girve your daddy a kiss" he sagte as he was getting closer and closer to me
"dad your drunk" "come on just one little peck" he sagte quickly grabbing my hair and pulling backwards so my neck would cock back i could smell the achohol on his breathe
"no dad" i sagte trying my best to push him away
"give me a KISS NOW Du little bitch" he pinned me down i was about to scream when chre FINALLY decided to Zeigen up
"AYE get the fuck off of her" he sagte running down the stairs and pushing dad to the floor
"hey theres my boy" dad sagte taking a sip from the bottle
"tis, the fuck" he sagte shaking his head "you ok ria go to the car i be there in a Minute i gotta help this SORRY EXCUSE FOR A FATHER " he sagte making sure dad heard the key words i mean when he's actually sober for once he's the best dad ever...but that doesn't happen often. I did as i as told and ran to the car and waited for chre to come out. He finally came out and came to the car "are Du sure your ok ria?" he sagte with a sincer apologetic look on his face which instantly made me smile he's one of the only people in this world who TRULY cares about me "yeah im fine" i sagte with a smile on my face. He smiled and backed out of the drive way, on our way to school 'no new friends' Von erpel, drake came on and roc instantly started rapping and Singen over it. Hes so talented with really anything that has to do with music. Of course i started rapping with him we both really have a passion for Musik to be truthful danceing to. We finally pulled up to school we saw chre's boys outside talking so we walked up to them.
OK sooooo this is just part of it and I want your opinion on whether oder not I should continue oder just start over GOOD oder BAD? Kommentar pweaseee pplzzzz it mght be horrible I haven't wrote in like forever but tell meeee BYEEEE
Marias POV
Ive been waiting on Chre to come down for yearsssss now.He my brother my very concieted brother I understand its the first Tag of school but if my arsch can come down on time so can he i mean dude your cute but come on now. I waited for about 5 Mehr Minuten before i was about to get up and drag his arsch down here when my dad came in the door with a bottle in his hand
"hey baby girl" he sagte with slurred words
"hey dad" i sagte non chalantly
"come on ihaven't seen Du in a g-good little while girve your daddy a kiss" he sagte as he was getting closer and closer to me
"dad your drunk" "come on just one little peck" he sagte quickly grabbing my hair and pulling backwards so my neck would cock back i could smell the achohol on his breathe
"no dad" i sagte trying my best to push him away
"give me a KISS NOW Du little bitch" he pinned me down i was about to scream when chre FINALLY decided to Zeigen up
"AYE get the fuck off of her" he sagte running down the stairs and pushing dad to the floor
"hey theres my boy" dad sagte taking a sip from the bottle
"tis, the fuck" he sagte shaking his head "you ok ria go to the car i be there in a Minute i gotta help this SORRY EXCUSE FOR A FATHER " he sagte making sure dad heard the key words i mean when he's actually sober for once he's the best dad ever...but that doesn't happen often. I did as i as told and ran to the car and waited for chre to come out. He finally came out and came to the car "are Du sure your ok ria?" he sagte with a sincer apologetic look on his face which instantly made me smile he's one of the only people in this world who TRULY cares about me "yeah im fine" i sagte with a smile on my face. He smiled and backed out of the drive way, on our way to school 'no new friends' Von erpel, drake came on and roc instantly started rapping and Singen over it. Hes so talented with really anything that has to do with music. Of course i started rapping with him we both really have a passion for Musik to be truthful danceing to. We finally pulled up to school we saw chre's boys outside talking so we walked up to them.
OK sooooo this is just part of it and I want your opinion on whether oder not I should continue oder just start over GOOD oder BAD? Kommentar pweaseee pplzzzz it mght be horrible I haven't wrote in like forever but tell meeee BYEEEE
ookkaay im finally gonna start Schreiben my story now after a long wait sorry to thoez people who were waiting!!!!!
oh nd btw here r some things u may need to know
Mandem means people its british slang nd any other words that I write in this story that u may not understand I will write da meaning.
for the Weiter chappie i'm changing the name of dis story to Liebe At First Sight
the places in this story will be in England coz I don't know many places in America coz ive never been there
MB nd their girlfriends live in England but will be visiting America now and then
k bye im gonna start now
oh nd btw here r some things u may need to know
Mandem means people its british slang nd any other words that I write in this story that u may not understand I will write da meaning.
for the Weiter chappie i'm changing the name of dis story to Liebe At First Sight
the places in this story will be in England coz I don't know many places in America coz ive never been there
MB nd their girlfriends live in England but will be visiting America now and then
k bye im gonna start now