Fan me if Du like my poem!!!!this was meant for my ex so don't be mean.

I lie here.
Breathless.
Tattered.
Almost dead.
He left me here to die.
KISS me.
Cut me.
Kill me.
I don't care.
Just don't make live through that again.
In with a bullet,
out with my blood.
Who cares anymore?!?
If I'm dead,
everyone's happy.
Don't cry to me.
If Du loved me,you'd be here.
Du always Liebe me,
and then confine me.
Make up your mind.
Du stab me with words.
Shoot me with actions.
I can't take it anymore.
They say Liebe hurts.
But that's not true.
But what is true,
is I am dying slowly without him.
My blood rushes out of my body at immense speed.
I'm alive.
I can hear his words in my head.
Feel his breath on my neck.
Make-up running,
blood flowing,
me dying.
That's all I need.
Death.
Oh,
where art thou,Death?
Come to me.
Whisk me away.
Introduce me to yourself.

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cool poem. :D
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Yeah, I like it.
tooch posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr
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that was awsome Du have skills!!!!!!
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reneemonique said:
i loved it:) well done. Du can realy tell the emotion and thought thats gone into it
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Wonderful answer!!
kylenegolba posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr
scarsdntfade said:
I like your poem its really intense and the ending is cool. =)
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Black_cat_ said:
yeah ish not bad =^_^=
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lilacool said:
it's really nice and darkish but no one shoud feel like this just cos of some guy
xxx
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Agreed but its not something u can help if ur truely heartbroken
Black_cat_ posted Vor mehr als einem Jahr
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ur right but still...no one should want to die just cos of some stupid guy that broke her heart!!
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dearjohnlOv3r23 said:
hey, um im in the process of making a website its going to be called WhatsMilenaSayinNow? anyone is welcome there. If Du have any guy trouble, family problems. ANYTHING! im there for you. whatever Du tell me stays between Du and I no one will know. Im a great girl that would Liebe to give Du advice. please help me make this website a success! thanks. <3milena.
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2cute4u2hate said:
You're pretty talented.
Your Ex mustve really broke you.
Dont worry though, if he feels he's too good 4 u, then it's obvious that he's not worth the tears.
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hunter51 said:
thats deep *snifle* XD
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Jess531 said:
I like it its really good amazing truely
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LUV_4_BIEBER said:
wow.., that was EXTREMLEY well written! I loved it
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JBluvr2 said:
It's really good, you're good at making poems. It was like I could feel your pain. It was intense and sad. Du seem to have had alot of passion for him and without him your hopeless.
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shyboy77 said:
that poem is very good^^ its cool i like it alot^^
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