How would Du have ended the Twilight Series?

I think I would actually HAVE a climax. The Volturi and the Cullens would fight. I know that many of them would die, but at least it's honest. At least it wouldn't be the pathetic ending Meyer put to the series. (If she felt so strongly about not killing the Cullens, then she should have put a different climax, Du know, one that doesn't require killing them in order to not be pathetic. Caring about your characters is important, but it's bad to overdo it.)

So basically, they would fight. I would have put Jacob and Leah together, instead of making Jacob a pedophile. Some of the Volturi would die (Maybe Caius? Not Jane oder Alec. Maybe some of the Mehr minor ones). I also wouldn't make the Volturi pure evil. I would keep them like they were in New Moon; evil, but at the same time extremely important for the sake of both Vampire and humans. Several Cullens would probably die (Definitely Carlisle. It would be a tragic moment. Then maybe Esme, Rosalie, Emmett, maybe Jasper oder Alice... not all of them, but at least two more). The MAIN main characters would survive (Bella, Edward, Jacob...) but I also would have made Renesmee extremely hard to manage. She's like a demon-child, so she should be really difficult. Bella would have a much harder time resisting eating her dad (and I'd probably have her end up eating him, then play with the guilt without overdoing it). I would keep Bella and Edward together, but I would try to make it clear to the reader that though Bella sees nothing wrong with him, that he is not in Liebe with her, but unhealthily obsessed in a lusty way. So basically, there would be grief about the deceased, but Bella would see for herself a bright, happy outlook on her future. The reader, however, would know better. The reader would understand that Edward is unhealthy, that Renesmee has many Mehr issues than Bella realizes, that immortality isn't going to be so happy as she expects, etc. It wouldn't be a happy ending. It would be fake happy (because Bella is happy at the moment the book ends), but it would be tragic in it's own way. The only ones with a happy ending would be Jacob and Leah, though I'd probably have Jacob get a really nasty scar from the battle oder something, but he'd still be fairly happy. And that's about it.

I am being really honest here. This isn't to make fun of Twilight. That is seriously how I'd end it if I were the one who had to write the end of Breaking Dawn. (If I could redo Bella's character... I'd at least give her a flaw, that probably being that she isn't very bright, however school-smart she may be).

BOOM! Everyone dies in a horrible explosion. The End!

-Jacob would end up with Leah, because that makes sense.
-Rennesmee would be extremely hard to control, not all perfect
-Jacob wouldn't imprint on Renessmee
-Bella wouldn't be the most perfect sparklepire ever, she would have trouble with bloodlust just like Jasper does
-There would be an explanation as to why Edward couldn't read Bella's mind when she was human
-I'd get rid of that last line-- "And we traveled on into our own small but perfect piece of forever." Give. Me. A. Break.
-The Volturi and the Cullens would fight
-The reader would be aware now that Bella and Edward's relationship is centered around lust, not love
-A few of the Volturi would die, not everyone, just a few of them
-A few Cullens would die. Carlisle, Jasper, and maybe either Rosalie oder Edward. Just two oder three characters that the reader is supposed to care about
-Bella would go crazy in her bloodlust and try to kill someone, most likely either her dad oder Carlisle oder Jasper, just one of the characters the reader should care about. Just one.

oder if Bella doesn't get pregnant, she would run off before the wedding and Alice would turn her into a vampire. BellaxAlice ending, lol.

There are probably another couple of things I'd changed that I can't think of now.

Dean and Sam track them down, say "BAHAHA Du sparkle? That is SO gay!" and then chop off their heads.
And Jacob marries Leah.
The end.

Well, I would have...
- never had Jacob CLOSE to Renesmee
- have Mehr Renesemee and Edward moments
- not have Vampire grow so quick
- Jacob and Leah gotten married
- get the voulturi to do SOME punishments to Renesmee for liking Jacob
- Mehr Renesmee and Rosalie moments
- Have Alice and Renesmee BOND
- NO Jacob part in BD
- Have a part where it says that wizards and Vampire DONT exist
- Made Bella EAT the Forrbitten Fruit.

I don't really wanna think about anything elaborate because anything would have been better than BD. Plus, it's almost 4 pm, I haven't had lunch yet and I'm horribly hungry and grumpy, so my Muse isn't being cooperative, but a quick answer might be:

Months have gone by. Bella got married and was turned on her wedding night. She and Eddiekins have left town because she needs to control herself before being near humans again. Her ability is way less cool than the one SMeyer gave (I'd have to work really carefully on that). No Renesmee, of course. She misses Jake badly, she writes letters to him every now and then, but he never writes back. The rest of the Cullens are still in town, just preparing things to Bewegen away because there's no point in staying in Forks and they can play the grieving card to leave. One Tag Alice has a vision: the Volturi are coming, but not after any vampires. They've learnt about the Werwölfe (no, I wouldn't change their name to shapeshifters) and they want to kill them because they believe they pose a threat to vampires. Alice warns Bella and she must choose whether to come back to Forks and face the Volturi oder try something from the distance.

I know, it's quick, lame and incoherent, but I've written it all as it was coming to my mind *shrugs*

ETA: *headdesk* See? Schreiben on an empty stomach isn't good at all! I'd forgotten to explain Bella and Eddiekins are officially dead, hence the Cullens' 'grieving card'

Okay, I don't want to write a book here, so this is just a rough plot.

Bella agrees to marry Edward on the condition that he turns her into a vampire on their honeymoon. Edward agrees. (Now, since I'm working on this, the Volturi ARE EVIL, NOT WUSSES) Bella does NOT get pregnant and does NOT give birth to Demon Spawn. Bella would be turned vampire right after they get off the plane. The sex scene would also be cut, instead the chapter ending with Edward sweeping Bella off her feet and closing the door to the bedroom.

There would be a battle since the Volturi are evil and all. Alice and Carlisle would be killed. No, Smeyer, Jasper and Esme WILL NOT get together.

There would be no imprinting, and Jacob and Leah would be together.

There would be an epilogue of seven years later. Edward and Bella would have two vampire kids. One girl and one boy. This would be explained Von saying that Vampire can have children if their biological parents are in twu wuv. Vampire kids would stop aging at around eighteen oder so.

This is the best I can do while keeping the suckish characters and story at least somewhat like they are. I just hope it's better than Breeding Spawn.

I would get rid of Eclipse and Breaking Dawn all together. Edward never comes back, Bella chooses Jacob and lives a long and happy life and has 2 kids that have nothing to do with the Cullens. Edward can live in misery for the rest of eternity for all I care.

The only thing I would really do different was the meeting with the vultri. Instead of all that boring talking. They'd have a little talk ,but eventually they'd have an all out battle. One of the reasons I started Lesen the Bücher was because I was looking vorwärts-, nach vorn to a Vampire fight.Anyway a couple of the Vampire they invited would die ,and some of the Vultri of course. I wouldn't kill off any of the Cullens maybe one of the werewolves.They'd drive Vultri off , eventually. That would be a cool ending. Everything else was ok I guess. But then again who says I'd end it there.

I would have not had a fairy tail ending. It's a vampire book, for goodness sake! Not a Nicholas Sparks novel! Bella and Edward wouldn't have ended up together, Edward killed Jacob in a fight, SOMETHING!!!! Honestly, a story (especially a vampire story) can't just end "she was turned into a vampire, he still sparkled, and they had a kid. And they all lived happily ever after. The end". What the heck?

If I wrote the ending to the Twilight Series.... It'd *probably* end up resembling a rough-draft, low-quality, "I-don't-write-historical-fiction-yet" Sarah Waters novel. So there are two directions this could go in, and they are....

Scenario 1: Bella realizes she is a lesbian shortly after her marriage to Edward. Stuck with a demon child, she is scared and confused! Oh, woe is Bella, what is she to do? But then, Alice realizes she is a lesbian, also! They elope, leaving their respective "others" in the dust. Edward kills himself due to lack of Bella, and Jasper goes back to eating people. The end.

Scenario 2: The Cullens are all leading happy lives. Bella and Edward are being all sparkly together, but Renesmee feels trapped in her "relationship" with Jacob. Her entire family is counting on them to get married, and she feels pressured into doing something she doesn't want to do. She feels no attraction to Jacob whatsoever, oder the other boys in her year, and she is upset. So, after talking with her best friend ever, she realizes that she is, in fact, a lesbian. She elopes with her best friend, but not until she finishes high school, college, and becomes an empowering feminist role model for young girls across the country. She gets a spiffy public speaking job. Jacob hooks up with Leah after realizing that he never really loved Renesmee, oder perhaps it is because she is no longer a suitable wife to be able to carry on the gene.

So, those are my scenarios. Yes, I am completely serious. ;)

Aww dang! So you're saying I can't end the book Von killing all the characters? Lamo.

I would have started with a "The End".

two words- everyone dies!!! (in a mortal way) and twilights abysmal, flat, BORING characters are no more. The End

I'm not exactly sure how I would end it it, but I know I'd have a REAL fight between the Cullens and Co. and The Volturi, not just some lame talk-it-out.

The 2 big things I would have changed are that there would be no baby and Jacob and Leah would be together

Ok, hmm, where to start... Right, the point is I thought that Breaking Dawn was a horrible way to end the series... it turns Bella into a bad role-model, having a baby young and everything (i do not mean to offend anyone in anyway).

Right; ... but on her honeymoon night, she woke up from a trance and found herself lying on the forest floor... she finds her way Home to forks and is surprised to see that her mum is there, with her dad... they cry with happiness when they see her; she had been at a mental asylum, moaning about some Edward and later a Jacob. Her mum had moved back in with her dad too stay near when she got better. When they finally thought she was better and they bought her Home she dissapeared after Schreiben Edwards name over and over again in blood on her bedroom wall.

Ten years later, she is at the supermarkt in Alaska (after the "incedent" she hated the sun) shopping for her two sons and her husband when she catches a glampse at a 17 Jahr old, with a stabbingly painful familiar face...
She drops her shopping and runs home, as fast as she can. Her husband finds her in the corner crying, and hugs her tight. His face is strained as he hears the long since dreaded name again and again... "Edward... Edward..."

In all seriousness, I would have ended the whole story after book one. There would have been an epilogue: Fast vorwärts-, nach vorn to her 18th birthday. She is turned into a vampire. The end.

i would have made buffy stake edward. then i would be happy! XP
(im team buffy & dracula. just in case u were wondering)

First thing I would do was have it that Edward turns Bella during their honeymoon, even before they do the deed, which means no Renesmee. And after she is turned, Bella now sees that Edward is not as perfect as she makes out with her new senses and Fragen if she made the right decision.

Leah and Jacob get together (and a marriage would only happen if I did a "years later" ending). Either Jacob and Leah, oder Nahuel and Leah.

The Volturi would be evil, oder at least Caius and his followers, whom he has kill Bella's father (perhaps as a means of a message).

Since Nessie does not exist, the Volturi need a new reason for coming to Forks. When they do, an epic fight does occur because of Caius who hopes that both Aro and Marcus will fall, giving him full control. He is eventually killed, surprisingly, Von Bella....somehow, probably with the assistance of Nahuel who I will explain later.

The casualties of the fight would be Caius, Alec, Emmett (killed Von Felix during an epic fight between those two), Quil and Embry. I think I would kill off Rosalie to, and this would have distracted Emmett during his fight with Felix which left him as an easy target.

I would either have it so that the shape-shifters explain what they really are instead of Edward, a VINO (Vampire In Name Only) oder just keep them as werewolves.

If Nessie were to exist, then I would make it also so that hybrids ARE as strong as Newborns (both have human blood in their system, so I just don't get how hybrids are not as strong as Newborns). And if Nessie still existed, I sure wouldn't have her imprinted on Von Jacob (maybe Von Seth, instead). I would have her age normally though, and have her stop aging at 18.

I would also make the ending somewhat bittersweet, but also hopeful of a new tomorrow, like the Gone With the Wind ending, like Bella looking out in the distance as the sun rises after the battle against the Volturi. Despite that her relationship with Edward would be in question, Edward would be there at her side.

But a Mehr perfect ending is that Bella, Edward, and Jacob die and the secondary characters (the Cullens, and the humans like Jessica and Angela) would get better development!